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    Chapter 21

    tinytoes commented on Wesley8890's story chapter in Chapter 21

    @Wesley8890 That's how I became a Wicked fan and more recently why I spent too much time on YouTube watching Evan Hansen clips! @FlyOnTheWall is secretly recruiting!! Btw, I have yet to watch The Greatest Showman. Shhh. Don't tell.
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    Chapter 21

    tinytoes commented on Wesley8890's story chapter in Chapter 21

    I absolutely love the soundtrack to The Greatest Showman. This is Me has been my anthem for almost a year. And no one sounds good singing Like A Virgin (although very fun to perform). Bleach won't get rid of the memory. I wouldn't be eating on that table for weeks or more. OKAY! New house rules. Extreme PDA behind closed doors only. It's called R.E.S.P.E.C.T. Wesley, you are Newsies! I think of you every time it's mentioned or one of the songs pops up. Happy New Year, Sweetheart.
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    YES!
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    Raphael

    tinytoes commented on ObicanDecko's story chapter in Raphael

    Yes! Ready for the next one...
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    YAY!!!
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    Holding Back

    tinytoes commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Holding Back

    My point exactly!! Lol.
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    Did NOT see that coming!
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    Family Reunion

    tinytoes commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Family Reunion

    Wow. I surely didn't expect Gordy to meet Shane's family like this! Wow! Wait. Did I say that already? Wow! Awesome chapter 😍
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    The Letters

    tinytoes commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Letters

    It was a few things, actually. She gave birth to Artie at 18. Adam was kicked out shortly before that. He moved in with Lindsay's family at 16 after arriving in California. The entire story until that one line supports he's a couple years younger. No biggie. Easy fix. Unless what hasn't been posted yet derails it. Then...oops.
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    A morning storm

    tinytoes commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in A morning storm

    Same issue as before. Shane needs to explain to Gordy why he feels that way. Just like Donovan had to explain to Shane why his words were hurtful. I say they both earned a strike for this. Excellent chapter. Can't wait for more.
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    Home and Gone

    tinytoes commented on Fantasyboy69's story chapter in Home and Gone

    What happened with the Summer Solstice/eclipse? I remember that it would be an issue for Dylan but can't recall what happened.
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    The Letters

    tinytoes commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Letters

    I absolutely love this story! One thing, Sadie said he was an older brother. But he was a couple years younger. So maybe he was the bratty baby brother? Ezra!! Where are you?
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    Oooooh!!
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    Kinda. But this one is funnier. November Falls isn't written to be as lighthearted. I love both stories.
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    I think Shane got his point across beautifully and without malice! An adult talks things out, not throw a tantrum, slams doors, and run away. A person can not assume what you're upset about. Ya gotta tell em and Donavan did that perfectly (eventually). I felt it also explained why a woman can call her friend the B word, a black person can call another the N word, etc. A round of applause for these two. They have a ways to go but now they are heading in the right direction.
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    A long work week

    tinytoes commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in A long work week

    I really hope Shane puts Gordy in his place.
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    First Dates

    tinytoes commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in First Dates

    HOT!!💣💣 And so sweet. Will Donovan meet the family? I can just image...lol.
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    We Need a Hero

    tinytoes commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in We Need a Hero

    Was just thinking about you today! Had it on my to do list to send you a Labor Day email to check in and see how your summer was. Great to have another chapter. It was awesome. Glad you're on the mend. Get any rest? And what's your schedule like now? OH! What does Liam look like?
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    Any more Team Drew after this? LOL! YAY SHANE!!!
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    When I mentioned writing down his feelings, I didn't think it was in his character and wouldn't expect him to. It would be weird. But I just remembered that he was an intellectual in school. This dumb jock persona as an adult is kinda weird. Cupid shot him with an arrow that is just passed its best by date. Shane can draw. Maybe he can surprise Gordy with a creation for his young patients. Donovan wouldn't know how to react. Love this story! Dumb jock and all.
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    I knew Shane had it bad! Lol. His pov was nice. Explained a couple of things. Maybe he should write down his feelings since they won't come out his mouth correctly. Poor, Baby Love!
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    The comments this chapter are as hilarious as the story. Thank you everyone for lifting my spirits. I'm team Shane. He loves him some Gordy. It was obvious from the get go. Seems like he has no experience in wooing, though. So he's falling back on his elementary and middle school days of picking on his crush. He's so awkward it's adorable. Plus the sex...nuff said. Btw, not a fan of rompers but if you are looking to scratch an itch, then no rompers! I like Drew (and Aaron), too. But the chemistry with Shane is too HOT to be ignored. Thanks again for putting a smile on my face.
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    I truly love this story and all it's characters 😍
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    Just bring on the next chapter!! Lol. No one really cares about grammer end spellin! LOL!!
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    Chapter 4

    tinytoes commented on cognac69's story chapter in Chapter 4

    😍🤗
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