I binged the first three installments, thoroughly enjoying myself. But at least for now, I give up. Too much confusion and too many inconsistencies for my taste.
You can tell me when you dislike something of mine. I promise not to melt the way some would. A few authors around here are set in their ways and no matter how long they do it, there seems to be little improvement. My list of individuals to ignore is substantial, and I'm certain I'm on similar ones created by others.
Notifications made me found my way to this chapter. Read it again for the what time? Man, even knowing what was coming, it was truly enjoyable. Time for a consultation, you need to start writing again.
Thanks!
There are scenes and dialogue lines I've loved writing and that little scene is one of them. The responsible adult turns into a teen willing to road trip for a concert.