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Carlos Hazday

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  1. Carlos Hazday

    GMA XII

    Gina met CJ while he was involved in the 2016 campaign and showed she was politically savvy. She's someone good to have around during a campaign.
  2. Carlos Hazday

    Higher 15

    This was one of my favorite chapters in the book. I'm too old to drool, @astone2292; the dentures might slip out. Oh, wait, I don't have dentures. After the way he dealt with Aiden at the hospital, Dustin moved up on my list of favorite characters. Casey's always been up near the top. Y'all remember that train I mentioned before? We just added more cars to it.
  3. Welcome aboard, Straycat. I'm repeating myself, but the location's an important character in the series. The protagonists might be based in DC, but NOVA and the entire DMV are featured. Hell, I'm writing a story set 10 years after Summer, and the last paragraph I wrote this morning referenced the Nature Conservancy's headquarters in Arlington. My cast is huge, but I constantly reintroduce the characters for the benefit of readers like me with short-term memory issues. LOL Most are a bunch of smartass guys with good hearts and at times unorthodox ways of dealing with issues. Hope you enjoy and leave me a comment now and then to let me know what you think.
  4. Carlos Hazday

    Chapter 1

    Thank you for sharing, Parker. That was a beautiful stroll down memory lane. The pastoral image you create of a lovely setting made it feel real.
  5. Carlos Hazday

    GMA XI

    Brad's story arc continues to this day. And he was the subject of one of the spinoffs, so there's a lot more about him and his recovery coming.
  6. Carlos Hazday

    GMA X

    Psst... read the next chapter now! LOL
  7. The US is not a parliamentary democracy so things don't work the same. Aren't PMs chosen by the party from the pool of representatives elected by the public? A deposed Prime Minister could be reelected by their constituency and remain in parliament even if the party never chooses them as their leader again. Haven't there been rumors about Boris trying to engineer a comeback?
  8. Carlos Hazday

    GMA IX

    Glad you liked it, Albert.
  9. Carlos Hazday

    GMA VIII

    I think Ellen was a good choice for the chapter; most readers enjoyed my take on her.
  10. Carlos Hazday

    GMA VII

    Just you wait until I have them back in LA in a couple of years.
  11. Carlos Hazday

    GMA VI

    The man has better birthday celebrations than I ever had. BTW, the 21 at 21 thing was inspired by one I attended while in college.
  12. Carlos Hazday

    GMA V

    You must not have read Terry's comments and my replies. Go take a look and you'll figure out how to see pictures of the hip tattoo.
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  14. Carlos Hazday

    GMA IV

    I've repeatedly said my stories are not good for speed-reading. I tend to include details sometimes missed when people don't pay attention. Reading a chapter twice helps. LOL.
  15. Carlos Hazday

    GMA III

    Glad you enjoyed it, Albert.
  16. Carlos Hazday

    GMA II

    The only bone I've ever broken was my ankle, and I have pins and screws in it to prove it was really broken. I can't imagine what a pain not being able to use a hand would be. I saw Springsteen on Broadway before CJ and Owen did! LOL, I was there for my 60th birthday.
  17. Carlos Hazday

    GMA I

    Figures the one most reluctant to jump out of the plane would be the one with landing issues. LOL
  18. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB XI

    I don't spend a lot of time one it, but I do write about Damian's wedding.
  19. Carlos Hazday

    GMA XXI

    I'm pretty sure CJ and Owen were the only ones in on the secret. I used Cooper and Cohen as the foils (instead of another network's anchors because they're so distinctive personalities and both are gay. Conveniently, they both have kids which I'll use at some point in the future.
  20. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB XII

    Purple Flame's entirely fictional, but most of the other wineries I mention are real. The Opus One cabernet is as good or better than I describe.
  21. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB XI

    Damian's a douche. He's shown by CJ and others he's not all that. I doubt he'll have two former presidents at his wedding.
  22. Carlos Hazday

    ATGB IX

    Coming right up LOL It's not very traditional. ANd I hope not too sappy. LOL
  23. Carlos Hazday

    GMA XX

    Some of Duckworth's dialogue I stole from speeches and articles about her. She's a gutsy lady. Years after I first mentioned Everhope, I'm still describing rooms, artwork, and furniture. The guys spent a ton of money remodeling and furnishing the house, but whenever they splurged, I tried to show it was on quality items that would last a lifetime.
  24. Yeah... chapter length's kept me away from this story before. A tad too wordy for my taste.
  25. Carlos Hazday

    Higher 14

    Man whore, paw patrol, and Louisville sluggers were three of my favorite references in this chapter. The conversation with Aiden was excellent and it gives us a chance to explore Trevor's thinking. I volunteer to babysit Trev, Sky, and Randy next time the alphas leave town.
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