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“You gonna read the whole thing?” Ritch glanced right as the man in the passenger seat swiped his finger across the tablet’s screen. They had left Washington, D.C. at sunrise and were close to an hour into the initial 700-mile segment of their westbound trip. Ritch had barely slept the night before, repeatedly awakening due to the bittersweet anticipation of leaving home. “Yeah… I’ve seen the sights before. Remember I made this trip with your brother a few years ago? Plus, I want to know wha
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Richard Leonard Peterson wanted to fly for as long as he could recall. His father, an Air Force pilot, was the inspiration. When his parents died in a boating accident, Ritch moved to Washington, D.C. to live with his brother and his brother’s fathers. A month before turning eighteen, he becomes a cadet at the United States Air Force Academy in Colorado Springs, Colorado. If he can safely navigate the subsequent four years, he will be commissioned as an Air Force Second Lieutenant upon graduation .
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As I've repeatedly told Parker, Senior would benefit from a whooping. Seeing what he puts his son through makes my blood boil. Parenticide would be totally justified in my book. Let's hope he suffers
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Not everyone is or should be redeemed. I do not believe every human is simply misguided. Some people deserve a trashing. Whatever happened to him he brought on himself.
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A week until the full moon. You better not drag it out over a dozen chapters. Sawyer seems to accept what's coming fairly well. Has he forgotten even if he survives there's still Fergus to deal with?
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In the wild, animals hide when they are hurt to discourage predators. Humans may have some of that hardwired into us. CJ will have to overcome our nature if he wants to succeed. That letter may have been the first step.
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Us Floridian's love anything orange.
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Because of your comments, I end up reading chapter sections and certain comments again. Recently, I smiled when someone praised me for correctly predicting the Venezuelan economic crisis. I'm glad my fears about a second Trump term were unfounded. Hell, I a;ready mentioned President Biden in the story I'm currently writing. You think I'm happy? LOL
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CJ is definitely not a pacifist. He'll turn the other cheek after getting in a couple of hits. As he grows older, he may rely on words more often than fists, but threaten someone he loves and shit will get serious.
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With you on that, brother. You'll find out soon enough what happens.
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I've been wanting to take CJ hunting, but haven't done so yet...
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Or the fact no mattaer how mature he may be, he's still a teenager. And what teen doesn't delight in pulling a fast one on their parents now and then?
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When Jimmy takes over the pack, he'll keep Granger on as a beta. He'll be the designated bottom.
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Rick and Jared are goners. Gus and Marta may not be far behind. I love how international jet setters interact with small town real people. But beware Hungarians carrying champagne, Zoltan's reaction to bratwurst suggest he's humoring the others out of politeness, but the setting and circumstances aren't exactly to his liking.
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This was a tough chapter to read. The pain was overwhelming. Sawyer and Jimmy supporting each other shows how strong their bond has grown in such a short time. Can't wait until Fergus gets taken down!
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Guarantee no drinking problem. One of the first GA people to read Summer's opening chapter, objected when I had Cesar give CJ a beer when he asked for one. They claimed no parent would do that. They were supposed to edit the story, but I found someone else instead. CJ's alcohol use is loosely based on personal experience and how my brother raised his daughters, we were all allowed to drink early. I believe if we're less rigid, we demistify alcohol, and probably would prevent many a problem. With Owen's family owning a winery, vino will feature prominently in future chapters and stories.
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You think something nefarious is imminent? I wouldn't mess with Brett or anyone he cares about. Don't Marines know a way or two to eliminate threats. CJ's had conversations about HIV/AIDS with his physician and I'm certain with his fathers. Talking to someone living with the virus gives him a different perspective. The dads will buy him condoms and get him on Prep if that's what's needed.
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But, but... Gus has only one hand in working order!
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We may need to do a close inspection. Rick's such a good person it's heartbreaking how between Rita and Senior, he lives in fear of their calls. He's earned the right to a nice afternoon. Jared being tongue tied, much the same as Rick, was great. Let's hope they both get what they want. The elder Toczas are inching closer to the pit Rita resides in. I have a feeling they wouldn't approve of the afternoon's events.
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It was meant as a cliffhanger. Mann was probably wringing his hands and cackling when he posted the chapter. No wonder Jimmy's such a hot mess; I'm sure the back story will be interesting. About the omegas... There goes my hope of finding one and havin a dedicated bottom around.
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I feel so sorry for Rick. He's miserable, trapped in a miserable life, surrounded by mostly miserable people. It's a wonder he gets up each morning. Let's hope a sexy piano player, with an assist from two bikers, gives him the courage to strike back at those who push him around. Once again, Parker, I marvel at your patience. The story's pace matches life in Eagle Lake. I'm jealous. I can't slow down my writing as well as you do.
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Harmless bonding and knocking before entering? If Fergus wasn't so twisted, he'd be fun to party with. Granger came while being raped? Guess you can't rape a willing man. I wonder how Fergus will react when he's the one under Jimmy. Or better yet, under Sawyer! Oh, what the heck, DP the fucker. Nice chapter, Mann. LOL
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LMAO Guess we'll be seeing a lot more of the Aussie!
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Santa Claus is Coming to Town
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Santa Claus is Coming to Town
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You Can Look, But You Better Not Touch
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in You Can Look, But You Better Not Touch
We all know CJ likes it slow. LOL
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