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Carlos Hazday

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  1. Carlos Hazday

    Chapter 2

    Great simile to what we humans do in real life. Anything or anyone slightly different is to be owned, controlled, or destroyed.
  2. Carlos Hazday

    Chapter 1

    Unicorns? Are we gonna have rainbows too? Lol
  3. I'm lost this month.
  4. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    Chipper played it smarter than I would have. By agreeing with her and accepting her proposal, he comes out smelling like roses and gets what he wanted in the first place.
  5. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    I'm still a couple of words over the limit for the story as a whole. Word told me this one was 999 words long, but GA does its own counting. Watching the game on TV, when Wade put those shoes on for the last quarter my thought was 'He's gone Hollywood." Sure enough he's now living in LA. Not surprising considering Gabrielle Union, his wife, has an active acting and producing career. What I'm afraid of is losing Chipper to California too. His Squad may need to intervene and rescue him.
  6. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    Thanks for the compliment. The fact my descriptions/writing can convey some of what I see in my mind is awesome.
  7. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    LOL No, they're not. Here's what D Wade wore:
  8. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    I doubt the song will have a lasting impact, but the rhythm will definitely get you. I may have shaken my bootie while listening to it while writing.
  9. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    Thanks, buddy
  10. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    Good looks and talent should take him far.
  11. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    I read that during the pretaped shows, the audience had to endure up to 8 hours in the studio with little relief to eat, drink, or pee. The live shows would be the ones to attend.
  12. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    Sooner or later, I'll try the 1k approach again. Nest time though, I won't do it with a rigid format. That forced me to exclude lots of details about the behind the scenes events.
  13. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    Men are from Mars, and women are from Venus? No matter how much we work towards equality, the two genders will often see things from a different perspective. Bliss may have assumed Chipper wanted more, but in the end they were on the same page.
  14. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    LMAO Sure thing, Dave. Another chapter in 3 days...
  15. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    I wanted it to sound borderline obscene without crossing the line. Adam knows sex sells (it wasn't an accident he ended up half-naked during the Super Bowl half-time show) I'm sure he coached Chipper on how to be sexy without being raunchy.
  16. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    Chipper was smart, performing in Spanish probably garnered him a few more votes from the Latin community.
  17. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

  18. Carlos Hazday

    Semifinals

    Following their torrid night in New York City, Chipper and Bliss hooked up several more times. To him, it was fun. It now appeared it might have meant more to the woman. Her “I don’t think we have a future together” left Chipper in a quandary. He had never considered them more than fuck buddies. However, if he agreed too quickly it could make him sound heartless. “Well… I… I’m not sure what to say, Bliss.” “Just say we’re cool. I want us to remain friends. But I’m not ready for anyth
  19. Carlos Hazday

    Tomorrow

    I try to make readers think when they read my stories. Sometimes I espouse things I do not believe in but others do. Maybe I can start a little dialogue. I do know my CJ series has both liberals and conservatives in the readership. Although someone mentioned they stopped reading because my characters where too 'macho'. Guess I can't please everyone. LOL
  20. Carlos Hazday

    Tomorrow

    Thanks, bud. I read an article about one of the real-life individuals I referenced and the story bloomed in my mind. Don't you think it's funny how I get in trouble for making CJ a gun-toting character, and I create just as much controversy when I write a similar character with a different attitude. I'm so confused I don't remember what my real feelings towards guns are anymore. LOL
  21. Turn that frown upside down! A couple of members have sent in questions and we're coming back next month for sure.
  22. Carlos Hazday

    Loose Ends

    LOL Interestingly enough, one of the new questions I got for Ask an Author concerns 1k-word chapters.
  23. Carlos Hazday

    Loose Ends

    I'm not that devious LOL
  24. Carlos Hazday

    Loose Ends

    Wait! No way your father's old enough to have fought in WWI.
  25. Carlos Hazday

    Loose Ends

    Bliss seems to have an attitude similar to Chipper's. Sex is meant to be fun and not always a precursor to anything serious.
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