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Thanks, Carlos. There are enough stories about confrontation with bigoted parents. I wanted to focus on the positive and move past the past.
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Thanks so much, Defiance
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Thank you. I'm not sure I'd be able to forgive them, either.
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Thanks so much for the compliment.
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Thanks so much, Dodger I'm glad you liked it.
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IMO, one of the highest compliments a story can get is to be thought-provoking. I know I skipped a large portion of the getting-to-know-you process, but otherwise I would have ended up with a much larger work that wouldn't have been submitted on time. Thanks for the comment.
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Thanks, Caz I find it interesting that so many people wanted to see the parents' reaction. I had originally written a scene where Eli and Issac confronted their parents, but ended up taking it out. There are so many stories written about parents rejecting their gay children, which include confrontation scenes. I wanted to shift the focus to the brothers' relationship and how they moved past the hurt to create something positive. I could write a whole other story about the dynamic with the parents. Thanks for reading and commenting
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Rush and Ben don't have Clay with them 24/7. They need their alone time too The Charlie ruse was deliberate. I'm glad it worked. I'm not so sure Issac was starved of affection, but rather idolized his older brother. Could be a combination of the two. Thanks for the comments. Your comments always make me think.
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Thanks for the lovely compliment
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Thanks, Tim. I'm glad you liked it.
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Thank you so much and thank you for the lovely review as well.
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Thanks so much, Tim. Your comment tells me that I did justice to Cole's characters. I deliberately left the parents out because I wanted to focus on the brothers' relationship. I don't imagine that they overcame their ignorance, but you never know.
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Thanks so much, Puppi I'm glad you liked the cameo.
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Thanks, Gary I thought it would be neat to have Rush as the detective, and Cole was gracious enough to agree. I'm glad you liked it.
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Aww... I like it when my stories move people.
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I wanted to show the darker side of Faery... the one that's not addressed very often. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment!
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Thanks That's exactly what I was going for.
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Thanks, Defiance! I was pretty proud of this story. Hopefully the human survives, but the human body can only take so much before it gives out. I'm glad you liked it, despite the dark subject.
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The human has proved pretty feisty so far, so I'm hoping he survived too. Karma has a pretty far reach and a long memory, so I'm sure Shade will eventually get what's coming to him Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Thanks, Tim.
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I don't think we want to know why the king wanted the human babies. Thanks for your input with this story. I really appreciate it. I like a good, dark tale once in a while, too.
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We don't know the human's fate. It does look grimm... um grim but he's proven pretty resilient so far. And yes... the fae are not always happy little elves. Thanks for the high praise.
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Thanks, Tim. I'm hoping the human survived. Even if he didn't, like you said, at least Briar got his comeuppance.
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Thanks so much, Gary "Word painting" I love it There's a dark side to Faery that's not often explored. I'm glad you liked my story.
