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Valkyrie

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  1. Yes, this feature was very helpful. I can't think of any specific topics off the top of my head. Thank you!
  2. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    Yes! Thank you so much for this comment. You are absolutely right. We don't know the whole parent piece of it. I'd like to think they were able to work past their issues too. I love your phrase "sin of imperfect understanding". And yes, now the brothers can rebuild their relationship and focus on a future that brings their two families closer together.
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    Brotherhood

    Thanks, Simba
  4. I agree. The human is quite resilient, so I wouldn't be surprised if he pulled through. Thanks for reading and commenting
  5. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    I didn't realize you hadn't recognized Rush and Ben. Thanks so much for your editing help on this story. I doubt I'll revisit these guys again, but it's nice to know that they struck a chord.
  6. Thanks It was quite satisfying writing Briar's demise
  7. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    Thanks I'm glad you liked it.
  8. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    Thanks, Carlos. There are enough stories about confrontation with bigoted parents. I wanted to focus on the positive and move past the past.
  9. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    Thanks so much, Defiance
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    Brotherhood

    Thank you. I'm not sure I'd be able to forgive them, either.
  11. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    Thanks so much for the compliment.
  12. Valkyrie

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    Thanks so much, Dodger I'm glad you liked it.
  13. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    IMO, one of the highest compliments a story can get is to be thought-provoking. I know I skipped a large portion of the getting-to-know-you process, but otherwise I would have ended up with a much larger work that wouldn't have been submitted on time. Thanks for the comment.
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    Brotherhood

    Thanks, WQ
  15. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    Thanks, Caz I find it interesting that so many people wanted to see the parents' reaction. I had originally written a scene where Eli and Issac confronted their parents, but ended up taking it out. There are so many stories written about parents rejecting their gay children, which include confrontation scenes. I wanted to shift the focus to the brothers' relationship and how they moved past the hurt to create something positive. I could write a whole other story about the dynamic with the parents. Thanks for reading and commenting
  16. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    Rush and Ben don't have Clay with them 24/7. They need their alone time too The Charlie ruse was deliberate. I'm glad it worked. I'm not so sure Issac was starved of affection, but rather idolized his older brother. Could be a combination of the two. Thanks for the comments. Your comments always make me think.
  17. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    Thanks for the lovely compliment
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    Thanks, Tim. I'm glad you liked it.
  19. Valkyrie

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    Thank you so much and thank you for the lovely review as well.
  20. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    Thanks so much, Tim. Your comment tells me that I did justice to Cole's characters. I deliberately left the parents out because I wanted to focus on the brothers' relationship. I don't imagine that they overcame their ignorance, but you never know.
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    Brotherhood

    Thanks so much, Puppi I'm glad you liked the cameo.
  22. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    Thanks, Gary I thought it would be neat to have Rush as the detective, and Cole was gracious enough to agree. I'm glad you liked it.
  23. Valkyrie

    Brotherhood

    Aww... I like it when my stories move people.
  24. I wanted to show the darker side of Faery... the one that's not addressed very often. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment!
  25. Thanks That's exactly what I was going for.
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