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Chapter 23 - Court is Now in Session
mikeinatl commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Court is Now in Session
Awesome chapter, Salander - lots of twists there. I hope Nic learns to forget/deal with his past, as well as trust Jake. Certainly, his experience would give him reason not to, but Jake seems like the real deal. Ellie proved herself to be very capable and also provide a bit of comic relief in that situation. And totally changed the direction of the inquiry, now back to Meg because there’s proof of her actions. I’m sure she’ll do well as a lawyer! Congrats on going back to grad school! That’s a big deal. Wishing you the best in your studies. I also hope my recent post didn’t come across as putting pressure on you. But big thanks for the update. -
Hey Demiurge, I just wanted to see how the writing’s coming. It’s been a while since you’ve posted and I need a fix! Hope all is well.
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Chapter 22 - I Wish I Could Forget
mikeinatl commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 22 - I Wish I Could Forget
Hi Salander, How’s the writing coming? We need a new chapter! I hope all is well. Thanks for this awesome story. -
Chapter 22 - I Wish I Could Forget
mikeinatl commented on Salander's story chapter in Chapter 22 - I Wish I Could Forget
What a great chapter! The sex scene was hot because it was finally more than just sex…the beginnings of a recognized connection. The walls are slowly falling. Nic is realizing that there’s something meaningful there and knows he has to confront this horrible thing that happened to him. Especially since Jake treated him with nothing but kindness. I’m surprised he told Jake anything, but was glad he did. And then, that cliffhanger!! 😱 Loved it and can’t wait for the next chapter. -
I’m gonna have to re-read this chapter and digest. I more than appreciate Finn’s reluctance. I guess I’m not sure I understand where his mind is going. Compromise is good, right? But Alec has made decisions and taken steps to conquer those demons and merge high school Alec with adult Alec. Which is something he now knows he needs to do. Perhaps Finn is letting his own fear put barriers in the way in the form of a compromise, which Alec didn’t ask for. As great of a guy as Finn is, I wonder if he and Alec have truly ever listened to each other. TRULY listened. But they’re headed there, it seems.
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I’m so glad Alec finally realized that Finn is truly a good man, one he’d be extremely lucky to have. I can’t wait to find out the details of what he says to Finn and what he planned with River and Kenji.
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I’ve kind of binged the story and just caught up to the last chapter. I was wondering when Nic would thaw out to Jake, and when there would be more to the relationship besides sex. He’s got a lot of hurts, especially as we’re learning more about him being assaulted. And of course, Anus. But he deserves to be happy, and it seems like Jake fits the bill. I can’t wait until the next chapter.
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Chapter 20: Heart to Heart
mikeinatl commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 20: Heart to Heart
I’m so hopeful for Finn and Alex. I agree with other comments that they need to have hot, long, passionate sex. Several times. We haven’t seen much of River. Is it possible Ken lives here and they’ve reconnected? Perhaps that was mentioned in a previous chapter and I can’t remember. While I understand towns have painful memories, I wonder if Washington would be so wonderful to return to after having a real connection with Finn as a more whole adult. Love this story and anxiously await the chapters.- 24 comments
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Honestly?? What’s not to love bout Milo!! Actually, that whole family. They’re great. And the interaction between Finn and Alec was hot and sexy. I’m glad River gave him the talk he needed. River is right. Finn and Alec have both held on to this for so long, it has to be worth fighting for. I hope we learn more about River’s love interest and hope it works out. Thanks for this story. I wait anxiously for these chapters.
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I love this story - very well written! One thing that is glaring to me is lack of consequences or punishment. Liam has publicly beaten Dylan twice on school property or school events. How can he not be suspended at a minimum, or expelled?
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Run, Baby, Run (But Then Come Back)
mikeinatl commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Run, Baby, Run (But Then Come Back)
Have so enjoyed these characters and their journey. Am glad to see Aidan grow a pair, and glad to see Heath be so vulnerable. Awesome chapter. -
Hi Laura, sorry it’s been a while since I’ve posted. Heath continues to surprise in the best ways. He helped Aidan get the promotion. He bottomed for Aidan, which he said he wouldn’t do. He’s just so kind and loving to him. Then he got his feelings hurt when Aidan backtracked. But yet he withholds his own true feelings. It’s kind of surprising, unless he still can’t admit it to himself. Somebody has to give because they’re obviously in love. Can’t wait to see who reveals their true feelings first...and not in a moment of passion.
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I was out of town and now catching up on the last three chapters. I hope Aiden gives Heath that dose of honesty he started to. But all in good time. In the meantime, love these guys together.
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Awesome chapter! The miscommunication and dancing around continue, but it feels like there’s progress, at least in each of the boys realizing what their true feelings are....if only they learn how to communicate them!
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Making Progress Is Overrated
mikeinatl commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Making Progress Is Overrated
For the last few chapters, and especially the beginning of this one, I was in awe of Greg and Nate’s relationship. The touching, hugging, knowing each other so well, the utter love and trust. #relationshipgoals And then that ending!! This is so well written - just so powerful. I’m rooting for Greg, Nate and Kyle!!! (And Keigan) -
Mothers and Intuitions Part 1
mikeinatl commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Mothers and Intuitions Part 1
Teresa is an incredible character! I cannot begin to tell you how awesome her interaction with the guys was! I was equally amused and amazed. Greg’s words to her about understanding the feelings but not the target...that’s one of the best ways I’ve ever heard that expressed!! And I love the relationship between Greg and Nate. I think we all hope for a friendship like that. Awesome!!! -
Teresa is an incredible character! I cannot begin to tell you how awesome her interaction with the guys was! I was equally amused and amazed. Greg’s words to her about understanding the feelings but not the target...that’s one of the best ways I’ve ever heard that expressed!! And I love the relationship between Greg and Nate. I think we all hope for a friendship like that. Awesome!!!
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Great chapter. I hope Aidan allows himself to fully enjoy himself sexually with Heathcliff. But if neither of them truly admit their feelings, I anticipate problems because they both want more than just physical from each other. Look forward to the next chapter, but until then, Laura, be well!!
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When Will You Be Home?
mikeinatl commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in When Will You Be Home?
They’re both doing the “dance” in a new relationship. All bravado, playing roles, and occasionally letting a bit of “realness” in. I like “Bunny” as a nickname for Aidan but I hope Heathcliff shows him he views him as a real person, a real man, rather than constantly referring to him as a boy. I can understand why Aidan feels he has no chance with someone with the stature and experience of Heathcliff. I hope Heathcliff lets him know what he’s worth. But for now, I’m enjoying the “dance.” -
The hidden acts of kindness we do show the real person...behind the fears, bravado, expectations, and “airs.” It’s always a challenge being that authentic person more often and in more circumstances. I like seeing how Heath catches himself having these vulnerable moments with Aiden...and then washes it off with a nice, long shower. 😂 I’m rooting for these guys because true love breaks us, saves us, and changes us.
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Hook, Line, And Sinker
mikeinatl commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Hook, Line, And Sinker
I’m still trying to figure Aiden out. He’s quite aware of Heath’s proclivities, and while he has definitely been attracted to him, I sort of expect him not to give in so easily, and too challenge Heath that he’s more than just a hookup. But alas, sometimes you gotta do what you gotta do! 😜 It will be interesting to see the relationship evolve from master/bunny to....??? And as others said, Laura, thank you for the regular postings. Every Sunday, first thing I look for a is new chapter, especially with Box Shaped Heart. Loving this story, as well. Actually, haven’t read one one of yours I didn’t love. ❤️❤️❤️ -
I know Aidan likes Heath, but I was a bit surprised by the handjob. I thought he would play hard to get longer. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
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I have certainly grown to love these characters. Thank you for creating this beautiful story, Ethan!! I’m sad it has ended.
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Ethan, I’ve so enjoyed reading this story again in it’s new and improved version. I truly love both of these characters and am so glad they found their HEA. As I mentioned previously, the interaction between Noah and Jordan is so crisp, so natural, I feel like I can hear their voices, particularly sarcastic Noah. Jordan has been so stand-up, so solid. Noah had his rock bottom moments, but I’m glad he finally found his strength to stand on his own. As far as his mom, I have friends whose religious parents eventually turned around. It will be interesting to see how Noah’s mom evolves...or doesn’t. Thank you for this wonderful story.
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I know I will enjoy this story as much as your others. This is a great introduction to the characters. Heathcliff’s line that he appreciated an audience while he crossed the finish line made me LOL. It will be interesting to see how they see each other beyond initial impressions and physical qualities. Also, knowing Heathcliff’s tendency for indiscretion, I’m curious why the company would match him with a young, relatively inexperienced guy instead of an older man. Also, do they know he’s gay?
