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Thanks for the delightful chapter. Cavendish and Elizabeth are neatly married and off to honeymoon with all rifts healed. In fact all of George’s rifts seem to be healed! Now comes another Spanish adventure and no doubt a sexual extravaganza as well! I love your holiday treats!
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Will the summer be a time of reconnecting and strengthening their relationship or will the tension continue even though Will is coming back home? Travis is definitely in need of therapy. I think he is likely to make bad decisions unless he confronts his demons. Thanks for the great work.
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Laws designed to alter behavior are tricky. Laws to legislate morality are only effective if they reflect society norms. The plan to limit the number of laws to introduce is a good one. If anything after dealing with Greg’s law to prevent child abuse, perhaps the changes should be even slower and should emphasize rights more than punishing abhorrent behavior. I think that Greg will change vampire society more by his efforts to educate the vampire children and by addressing issues as they arise. He will be most effective by setting an example, ruling his domain fairly and protecting his subjects. Brian’s arm? Oh well,cause and effect. The change was for a different reason but a valid one nonetheless! Thanks for another great chapter! I look forward to the next one.
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The time bomb is ticking! All that remains to be seen is when the explosion occurs and the extent of the damage. Travis is already floundering and Will is too far away. It’s going to be a long month and the pressure is building. Thanks for another excellent chapter. I had no idea that I would be so invested in the impending downfall of Travis. You have me hooked! I need more.
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Cliffhangers keep us invested in what comes next! All I want to say is that I eagerly await the next chapter so your work is done. Thank you for a truly epic story.
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This is great exercise in shifting relationships. Will is an excellent provocateur!It was a different experience than I expected,but in a very good way. Thanks for another revealing chapter.
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The fundamental difference in character between Will and Travis is beginning to show. Can Will deal with the consequences any better than Brad was able to deal with Robbie’s horrendous misstep during their college years? Or will the scenario be more like JP and Jeff? In any case, trouble is brewing! Thanks for the extra chapter to bring us into the new year. Your generosity is appreciated! May you soar this year!
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This is a feel good way to start the year! Thanks for the dessert after the long awaited sandwich! May your muse continue invigorate your storytelling skills and provide us, your loyal readers, many tasty chapters in 2026! Thank you.
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Cavendish, Elizabeth, Carmela, and George a quadruple? George finds the best ways to keep his sexual life interesting! Thanks for making 2026 my favorite new year, at least until the cheetoites do something outrageous.
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Thanks for the tasty bacon sandwich! I had to reread the first fourteen chapters so I could properly digest the new one! What a wonderful way to end the old year with the anticipation of more of Greg’s adventures navigating the vampire hierarchy! I have nothing but exclamations to express my delight for your return.
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I’m looking forward to the new year. George is definitely a bright spot! Thank you for taking care of your loyal readers.
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I finally got to your holiday treat. Thank you for giving me something to contemplate while awaiting the new year!
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It gets better and better! I fear Carlo will be severely disappointed by his surprise visit. I feel Will’s fear of losing Travis to his costar is completely justified . The heartaches and misery are definitely on the horizon ! Thanks for the intricate storyline! I love the angst.
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Will found an interesting friend. The possibilities,the problems. Carlo really needs to meet Jeremy.
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I wonder how Travis will feel reliving another version of his high school years . It seems the actors are well cast. Travisty, here we go!
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I feel that the future is going to be rocky. I look forward to the next book and hope Travis will never be as toxic as Robbie or bring forth so many tears. Jeremy is indeed on a luxury track! Thanks, the future looks bright under the Maui sun.
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Oh happy day! George shines so bright that sunshine fills my day. Thank you, Mark.
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The best Thanksgiving in a while! Juno? No one in this family will tolerate loose ends or unanswered questions. Great chapter Scott Slater included not to mention the ever recurring helopad that seems to beleaguer Stef.
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I hate to see the Freshman end, I am thankful for another book to feed my Arbour addiction!
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Thanks for the culminating chapter, all the pieces seem to have come together. The family that schemes together, overcomes the even the strongest adversaries! Excellent!
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A little sex , a little intrigue ,but nothing George can’t deal with! Thanks for the treat!
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Too bad about Preston, I had hopes he could be a diversion for Marie but I too would prefer Will! Who would think mobsters could be devious? What a pithy chapter! Lots to think about. Thanks for keeping us guessing.
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Cartels and bombs! Flash drives and a secret boyfriend! Drama and danger, not to mention thoughts of a little sexual bondage! Jake and Brad have a lot going on. Will is getting closer with Preston while Finn is having a difficult time. Will is on a pretty even keel and on the path for ending the semester with high marks. I’m looking forward to Mexican food and touching base with Wade and Matt. Thanks for the thrills and the anticipation of what comes next!
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What a day for George to make an appearance! Maybe he’ll make it for Thanksgiving as well! Thanks for the double treat! You have my admiration.
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Thanks! Lots of things are happening! I’m looking forward to understanding more about what dangers that await Travis as well as learning more about Preston, Marie’s grieving process, Jeremy’s education and whatever surprises lie ahead. Well done!
