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Lovely backyard venture with the promise of a future dalliance with Graham. Author and Ludo planned a holiday with the boys at one of Hansi’s cabins in the forest . Ludo added the possibility of a regular cleaning lady to their to do list, quite domestic! Sounds as if Jackie’s cooperation might lead to a reduced sentence. Is that a good thing? Probably. A delightful vignette! Well done.
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Marc has a vision for Adam and for the merger and he has brought the families together to make it happen! Let’s sit back and watch the machinations bear fruit! Bonding is in future, but there are pirates out there too. So rough spots and spectacular sex, I am going to enjoy it all! Excellent chapter. Thanks
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My tear factory has been working overtime! Sweet reunions! Emotional bondings! Dinner dates! Partners coming out to their bosses and not fired or reprimanded but assigned to work together with broken boys. I look forward to the next chapter of this moving story as the house of cards and the Clubs continue to collapse!
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I think this was inevitable, since the appearance of the evil skinwalker, but I also believe it is a good thing. Being honest with the parents is the right thing to do and in the long run they can be a bigger part of their lives. As time passes the family can stay together without subterfuge.
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Jonah and Will becoming friends is already getting to Victor and no doubt he will be at the party. I foresee intense teenage drama in the near future! Laura seems to be an excellent match for Jonah. I think she will continue to help him navigate his emotions as he finds a way to reconcile his anger and grief from the loss of his parents and the disappearance of James. With the support of his family, Jonah is becoming stronger. I hope he continues! Let the sun shine through!
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Poor Matt, he is sheltered from the world and emotionally abused by his father, his church and his school. Seeing two boys in love is almost beyond his comprehension. Maybe he will be brave enough to communicate with someone at the lake, If he does develop opinions that differ from the narrow minded Solomon ,he will be verbally and perhaps physically battered. If Matt wants a life, he must get away from his father! If he succeeds maybe his mother will have the courage to follow suit.
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This is even better than I imagined! Marc is orchestrating his future with Adam an he is doing fantastic job. I hate that the chapter ended, but that will only increases my anticipation for the next one! Excellent writing and so many things to look forward to! Thanks for the emotional boost!
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Jeremy did exactly what he should do as a first step to repair his relationship with Will. That is what I would want in that situation and it is what Will needed. Will listened even though it was not easy for him and he saw a real change in Jeremy. Now he needs time to think through Jeremy’s apology to assure himself that this change is permanent, but by introducing Jeremy as his brother to the flatmates, Will has made a reconciliatory gesture. Maybe the family will heal. Thank you for giving us a hopeful feeling. It has been the highlight of this day!
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Special people are drawn together. What happens next? A partnership and more? I do think more. I do!
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Therese needs a partner or at least a friend with benefits to take the edge off, She is a little jealous that Ralph has Nolan and that the twins enjoy having him in their lives. Ralph’s parents are a lost cause. Ralph should not bother trying to make overtures to them. A card for the holidays to be civil, but no gifts. I’ve enjoyed Ralph’s emergence as his life with Nolan evolves. Though I hate to see this story coming to an end, I look forward to more stories from this delightful universe!
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Jonah is doing lots of things, but in some ways he’s just avoiding his issues. I hope his therapist can break through his protective shell and help him deal with his guilt and his grief! Victor is about to have feathers ruffled to everyone’s amusement, but is definitely going to over react. Is poking the bear ever a good idea?
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Auturo and Micah are brothers! I didn’t see that coming! So many good things. Healing is beginning for some. The school is coming together. I eagerly await your next chapter. Excellent storytelling. Your character development is epic!
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So this is bonding! Marc and Adam are living their dreams! They really are a power couple and their strength together will be palpable. Marc is a force. Now that Adam is connecting with Marc, he will become a force himself. It's a given that with so many powerful people involved there will be some like Amelia who will attempt to control either Marc or Adam, but it didn’t work out, did it? Marc is a great teacher and he will school anybody who messes with his bonding! I love the drama and anticipate the impending sexual tension, as the couple navigate the family merger, bonding, pirates, and politics! Bring on the action!
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Thank goodness for the continuance! Excellent! I really enjoyed this story and I am following the next one.
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Matt is in for a few surprises and I expect he will enjoy them! How will Tom be able to extricate Matthew from the obnoxious controlling Solomon. What about poor beaten down Mary? Thanks for this sequel! This is the story I wanted to hear.
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Friend, f bud, throuple, or holiday romp time will tell. The sex was good, but relationships require more.
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Of coarse Granger is better at sex than Lady. Brentwood in both profiecentcy and frequency !
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I definitely foresee a merger! What better than a bonded mate to draw the two families together.
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Truly a feel good chapter that shows a possible positive outcome! I loved the quirky conversations. Jackie reevaluated her situation and decided to help the police . She is still an incredibly self centered person, but she knows how to best protect herself and also maintain a relationship with her son. At last the spotlight has shifted! Thanks for the delightful story! Where is the money!
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The time at the lake seems idyllic. I do wonder if Tom should find a way to talk with Mathew. The boy might be in trouble.
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What is going on? Marc and Caitlan are still at odds. Adam is about to make an appearance. Marc is not his usual confident self. The dinner, though uncomfortable for Marc, will be illuminating. Marc will no doubt appear in complete control as is befitting a Captain and an Alexander scion.
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The girls want their picture taken
gmc commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The girls want their picture taken
I think Ralph coming into his own has made Therese a better person. I hope she finds a Nolan for herself. Now that she is more relaxed she will have a better chance of meeting the kind of man who would be compatible with the twins. I look forward to the visit to the farm and meeting Nolan’s parents. I also think the girl detectives will continue to spark the interest of the twins! I loved the smart, witty banter between Ralph and Therese. Thanks again for a delightful journey as Ralph breaks free! -
Thanks for the excellent chapter! This story has so many people to love and admire. Helping the boys is stimulating humanity in so many people who have leading selfish lives. There is so much to anticipate; please bring it on!
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Brad and Will know Jeremy well enough to tell when he is sincere and when he is saying what people want to hear! I’m glad they were able to clarify their position and give each other the support to stay the course. Jeremy has to DO something to prove he has changed! Another relaxing dinner a Escorial! I wonder what Marie and John will think about Jack’s newest affair. Thor is being mentored by Will. He will definitely become a better lover and probably a better person with higher self esteem. Thanks for the excellent chapter! I’m ready to go condo shopping in New York!
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Jonah doesn’t mind stirring things up! He is planning to deliberately ruffle Victor’s feathers by running against him. He will be probably be making life a little more difficult for himself and William, but maybe it will end up being a good thing. Finding out where James has gone is an interesting development. I’m certain knowing is better than not knowing, but identifying the state is not much of a resolution. Hopefully mote will be revealed. Jonah is constantly taking two steps forward and then one step backward. He is on a difficult path,but he is slowly making progress! I look forward to his journey.
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