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All is going smoothly for now as yet another merger presents itself. The children are developing and showing early signs of carrying on in the family traditions. I think Marc and Adam will be able to face any challenges that the universe presents and as the corporation and the Five Sectors grow and prosper, more forward thinking corporations and bright people will want to become part of the Alexander-Knight empire. Such success is bound to create enemies! What lies ahead? Thanks for the double chapter. It is a great read. Of course as always, you have us wanting more. Excellent!
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I think Will and Jeremy are finally back to being brothers. I also believe Will’s advice to Brad is spot on. Brad has never been able to have a real relationship with Jeremy.He has always been the authority figure telling Jeremy what to do with threats of financial retaliation. Brad must find his own way to forgive Jeremy and to establish a relationship that goes beyond a preadolescent because I said so, and that will be possible if Jeremy has changed. Travis and Brad and Jake had clarifying moments and saved a bed for Will! JP is coming! What about the Serbians? There is lots to feel good about. But mostly I am impressed by Jeremy’s transformation. Great writing, I truly believe that it is real!
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Great story with tantalizing clues to what may lie ahead ! I am looking forward to the revelations.
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One and done! Marc has done it again, but this time with minimal casualties. Not only did he merge the attacking corporation into the Alexander-Knight corporation, but he showcased his newly developed defensive shields for the CONFED Navy. This bound to deter any further assaults. Marc does not take threats to his family lightly! Everyone seems to want babies. The family and extended families are growing. What will be next?
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One corporation with a new CEO is planning an attack on the Alexander-Knight House and the Five Sectors? Marc and Adam have become quite powerful. Perhaps a consortium is hoping to take them down, but surely the must remember what Marc is capable of if his family is threatened! Thanks for the exciting turn of events! I’m looking forward to the next post. Well done!
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Wow, a bolt hole. Secrets and criminal behavior! Marc has done his best to free the slave labor force, including giving them the technology to reproduce. I think My Lord is not too far off the mark when it addresses either Marc or Adam.illegal Two children and two more on the way! The family grows in number and in strength and standing! Great storytelling! Who has been messing with illegal reproduction and altering human genes to create a slave work force? Is it some known force?
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Jeremy hasn’t changed so much as he is thinking before he speaks or acts out, so he is presenting a more empathetic front. That outer change is enough for Will to forgive Jeremy while never forgetting his past behavior. Jeremy has a narcissistic personality so he will always put himself first, but he has learned that he must not lash out at his family if he is to maintain their support. Thor and Finn seem like a good match. The Serbian mafia! Who would have those connections? Travis does have some enemies, but neither his family or the acting community are likely to have access. Is there a bigger problem that involves the core family? Thanks for the great chapter!
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Zain and Hadrian play well off each other, with arrogance and self confidence as major character traits in both! Maybe Hadrian has met his match? Ouray and Fluer need to recover their balance if they are going to be useful in deterring the upcoming onslaught. These are strong people who need to become a team and if Zain is to be part of the team they must earn his trust. Without history, communication is required and questions must be answered! I’m on to the next chapter and hope to see more interaction between these four and for information sharing. The sheriff,Carolyn’s murder, land that cancels magic! Really, these people need to talk and soon because the danger is imminent! I am loving the growing tension as the story continues to evolve!
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Zain will be adrift in a different world without his memory. Is that really the best solution for his protection? I look forward to the reactions from our little group. These elements are most intriguing!
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Great exposition! I am looking forward to seeing where this story goes. I have waited to read any of the chapters until a good number have been posted because I knew that my curiosity would require some serious binge reading. Thanks for what promises to be an epic adventure!
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Maybe chocolate ski bunnies? Bella has been brought into the fold. Marc has plans to make everything in his realm grow. I look forward to what comes next! Marc and Adam are making their house, their corporation and the Five sectors a better, safer place to live. Thanks for the update!
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Devin and Mac are enjoying their time with Mac’s parents and are looking forward to the trip before returning to school, but Devin will not be happy until the metal plate is removed and he is able to transmute into small animals. I hope it will be as easy as he thinks to get the doctor to remove it. What a wonderful beginning for the third book! Let the adventure continue!
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Beautiful bonding with a beautiful backdrop. It’s what memories are made of! Marc and Adam are enjoying their alone time together before the world intrudes and the babies come. William has made his apologies and is part of the past. Thanks for the pleasant surprise! Great chapter!
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Finn and Thor, Will probably made another match! Jeremy seems almost human, I hope the metamorphosis holds. Travis seems to be only superficially damaged. I’m sure the soap can adapt to accommodate his injuries. Brad and Jake are on the way. The director has been taken care of, and now maybe someone can figure out why Travis has been put in Chucky’s sites! Is it possible the two incidents are connected? Next chapter please! Three is an amazing number of releases for one week, but you only whet our appetite for more. Great storytelling, I know Will be back in Boston to take his exam. He is so organized. Wade should be proud!
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Patrick deserves a celebratory event! So much better than snakes in your house! Way to go Jake. Surly rattlesnake invasion are organized by the dozen, I would still be looking for the missing snake. Thanks for a quick bloodless solution to a cliffhanger! You really take excellent care of your readers!
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Definitely the mountain air! Bella will probably travel back with Marc and Adam as part of her healing. Babies are coming soon. Marc and Adam are enjoying their time together and their future may give them a chance for domestic bliss as they are able to remove themselves from the public eye. Thanks for the update! I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
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Something bad must have happened to the director! Who helped it happen or was it just karma? Cliffhanger warning are not helpful but your assurance that another chapter is imminent does! Will and Finn should be good friends even with benefits if Travis agrees.Cool banter, suave moves, and a measured blow job.
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I so enjoyed this new chapter. I reread the previous chapter to remind me of the details before reading chapter 14. As usual it is well crafted and gives us a hint of the future and the true importance of the role that is Greg’s destiny. I hope that the world is treating you better and that you will be able have time and inspiration to produce more chapters of this wonderful world building story. Take care of yourself!
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I’m glad Will brought in the family to help Trevor. The results will no doubt satisfying, but the Curtis history may not be as easily overcome. I love that Will told Stef he received his letter. What a great way to discover the secret of the mysterious CAWS! I’m sure Stef will love revealing the information to Brad! Then there is Finn! There are so many delightful turns and twists! Thanks Mark for keeping my weekends interesting! I’m always impressed by the excellent storylines, your skilled emotive writing, and your dedication.
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Adam has put an effort into planning their bonding honeymoon in response to the bonding ceremony Marc planned. Bond mates for sure! Obviously there is a lot of good Will for their ever expanding Alexander-Knight House. I look forward to the honeymoon and the babies and the continuing fallout from cleaning out the pirates. Thanks for the new chapter. It’s a nice weekend treat!
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Halloween and Travis’s Horror
gmc commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Halloween and Travis’s Horror
Jeremy seems to recovering from the terminal fiasco. He held his own with Kris's help and won a costume contest besides. It seems the artists will have a gallery thanks to Jeremy’s efforts. Poor Travis is reeling from the attack of the director with the return of repressed memories of being raped by Curtis. Will is helping with some sexual healing, realizes that Travis needs professional therapy to get past the trauma. Wade should be able to give some perspective if he was in the loop, though I don’t see how that could come about. Thanks for the excellent chapter. It certainly make me think and anticipate what may come next!- 32 comments
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What an impressive ceremony! Marc and Adam are officially bonded. Thanks for the upbeat chapter. Adam has overcome his insecurities. Two babies are on the way and the quiet life beconds. I wonder if the life Marc has envisioned is big enough to contain his presence as his empire grows and his influence in the five sectors strengthens.
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Caroline’s love for George is more about jealousy rather than love . She behaved abominably when he returned from Russia. She doesn’t understand why she has become a pariah in Paris while George has become popular. And then he obviously has sex with a vibrant younger women who happens to be a countess! Her miscalculation continues to haunt her. George does seem to be drawn to women who politically savvy. A Russian son! What are the long term implications? Will the current liaison produce another blonde blue eyed child? I’m certain that George will help her get the upper hand with her cantankerous husband. What a delightful chapter! It was worth the wait! Always there are surprising revelations! Thanks, I have lots to think about.
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Babies! With Aiden moving the genetic mixing process to Serenity Base everything is falling into place. After listening to Adam’s fears Marc boosted his confidence but still agreed to initiating the reproductive process which will probably jumpstart the bonding ceremony. There is so much to do to stabilize the sectors, but Adam is doing his part so Marc has support. Together they are strong and they can work parenthood into the mix with the assistance of family and friends and power of the Alexander effect! Excellent chapter! I hope Aiden benefits from the help Marc and Adam have offered. It seems he has some demons he has yet to face. Once he feels safe the healing can begin.
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Will needs to make some calls! Someone is about to learn there are consequences for rape. Travis is devastated reliving past traumas as well as the current one, not unlike some horrors that Robbie endured as a teen and a young adult. This family closes ranks when one of their own has been harmed. Let the machinations begin! Thanks for the new chapter. I am looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens! Excellent work!
