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    Revelations

    Who is behind the curtain? And to what end? I’m sure that at some point everything will be make sense. Twisty, twisty goes the plot. Thanks for keeping our brains focused! Now for the Thanksgiving feast and the eventual emotional turmoil! Not all the fireworks are lighted on the 4th of July. Thanks for the new chapter.
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    Freed

    Guy Fellows is next on the agenda, but first comes Thanksgiving at Escorial! Will Jack put the move on Amber? Will Claire and Grandmaman attack Will? Will the voices rise enough to irritate JP? Will someone leave during the meal in a self righteous snit? Thanks for the great beginning of my weekend! You always come through.
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    The Opera

    I have been missing George! What a smooth return! George saved Daventry from some embarrassment, integrated Calvert into his retinue, updated the King, and publicly greeted from the King’s box at the opera house. Sex, diplomacy, a little peacocking is a great beginning for his homecoming. Thank for bringing George back for a weekend treat!
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    Burns and Scars

    Will is in charge; get over it! Guy Fellowes? That makes sense. Now comes Thanksgiving at Escorial. I am so looking forward to a juicy meal! Thanks for the Juneteenth installment! Any day you post is a holiday!
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    Chapter 49

    It looks like William and Sasha are sorted! Marc’s plans seem to be on track as well. Thanks for the new update! Well done!
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    Chapter 48

    The future looks good. I wonder if the size of the house and the corporation along with the awesome fleet and the cutting edge technology hasn’t put them in the crosshairs of some dangerous people. Liam and Marc Adam seem to have an interesting in running the empire eventually. Will and Sasha are a couple? Should Marc be worried? I’m sure Marc will investigate to ascertain if his friend is in a toxic relationship. Thanks for the great read!
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    The Inferno

    I hope Darius doesn’t get lost on the way to the hospital! I can’t wait for the aftermath. I doubt there will be any consequences for Taylor, surely her part in the kidnapping will be ignored, but the Serbains are not going to be so lucky. With Will, John, Claire and Grandmaman, Thanksgiving is going to epic! Thanks for the exciting weekend! You always deliver the best! Fire, danger, hugs and ambulances! I’m sure sex is in the near future!
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    Rapprochement

    How screwed up is Taylor?
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    Chapter 47

    Romance and fated mates for the next generation! The future looks bright for the Alexander-Knight family! The trip seems like a sort of pre-honeymoon, but with this family, it could morph into something more dangerous. Thanks for this delightful chapter! I loved it!
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    Chapter 46

    The family is evolving and the business continues to thrive. New technology has been developed and new relationships have begun. As the children grow into their own and find their path within the corporation, new opportunities will emerge. I look forward to the next next chapter as the future unfolds. I love this universe you have created! Excellent!
  11. I can’t connect the dots. The pieces just don’t fit together yet. Is Taylor part of the stalking, the kidnapping. She is such a heinous bitch, but she doesn’t seem smart enough to be the brains behind the curtain. How could she have connections to the Serbian mob? Why would Travis ever consider working with her to do anything? Zach shared some interesting information with the passport and the watch and Taylor’s simultaneous disappearance. Maybe Jake can use that information to find Travis! Thanks for the intriguing chapter! You always have an interesting twist. I need another chapter to help stop my head from spinning! Excellent storytelling!
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    Kidnapped

    Travis screwed up. No guard! No driver! He would definitely fail as a travel agent. No wonder Travis is suspicious of Taylor her presence makes no sense despite how gratifying it is to see being slapped around. Maybe the call Jack made will reveal something. Maybe he called someone who is connected with the Serbians rather than the Serbians directly. Still I wonder why Travis has been kidnapped. Will is an emotional mess. He has channeled Wade and taken on the task of saving Travis’s house, since there is nothing else he can do for Travis at the moment. Thanks for the chapter that provides some answers and gererates more questions! Well done as always!
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    Chapter 6 S3

    I think Lonny and Clint have become part of the family and the football games and possibly Christmas will only strengthen the bond. It seems the upcoming school year will be interesting!
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    Chapter 45

    I think after the next four children being boys they may need four more girls! Balance, you know. Thanks for the excellent beginning for the week. I look forward to next challenge as their empire continues to expand.Enjoy your time off.
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    A Good Deed

    Travis should have listened to Will instead of ignoring the dangers facing him. I do hope his carelessness is not too devastating! Now we may find out why this is happening and who is behind it! Will and Marie had an interesting dinner. Marie suggested a apology for Will to smooth things over, but Will would never bend to placate anyone if he feels he is right, the most anyone could expect from Will in those circumstances is that he would apologize for the manner he confronted their self righteousness. Take the test and go home to help find Travis! Thanks for weekend excitement!
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    Chapter 5 S3

    Mac’s mother seems to be coming around when it comes to the boys’ powers. Rafting seems to be a good if somewhat risky activity after a torrential rain. Maybe Mom is becoming more adventurous since she knows the boy will protect her. Clint is benefiting from his interaction with boys as well. Football games are definitely in the future! The family seems to be extending. Thanks for another interesting chapter!
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    Amiens

    Thanks for the George fix. The rubies seemed to placate Caroline. George helped Daventry out of a difficult situation. Talleyrand and George discussed the effect of Cornwallis’s shortcomings in treaty negotiations. Stupidity in government is nothing new or surprising in the 1800’s anymore than it is now. This chapter was worth the wait. Thanks again!
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    Chapter 44

    From a reader’s point of view I think your writing is excellent as is your storytelling. I have been impressed with your productivity. Because you have been so successful, I think you owe yourself a break to reassess your goals. Enjoy your break! I hope you return refreshed.
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    Chip

    Alistair deserves a reprise!
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    Chip

    In this world of course Chip has a backstory with Dillon after all it’s Oregon! Finn and Chip both seem like good friend material. Finn is smart and interesting and Chip can confirm what a lazy slob Dillon is. Will does need friends to hang with aside from casual fuck buddies. Travis and Will are living in different cities and both have busy lives so they both need available friends. Marie does need to take Will’s advice about distancing or she will have a bevy of stalkers and lovesick puppies following her around. Thanks for the weekend boost. This is me loving this chapter and eagerly awaiting Thanksgiving and the family drama at Escorial.
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    Chapter 4 S3

    I think being snarky to his mother is standing up to her for her behavior and to encourage his father to do the same; however, the more adult approach would be to have a private conversation with his mother and address the reason he feels the need to make snarky comments. The skinwalker was a surprise. How is it locating Mac? Is there some connection? Is it a threat or is it curious or even in search of help? Thanks for the interesting chapter. I look forward to the next chapter. You have created an excellent family dynamic in addition to an exciting adventure!
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    Chapter 43

    Great way to start the week! Thanks for the new update, I love the interaction with the children and look forward to the working vacation,
  23. Brad and Jeremy had a real conversation and resolved their major issues which is truly remarkable since neither of them is known for their communication skills. Will and Travis are making plans for Thanksgiving at Escorial. Considering the dinners there, they should be ready for drama and the challenge of proper voice modulation! Thor is a relationship disaster and will continue to be until he lets himself out of the closet. Will, Thor and Finn have some fancy dancing around if they are going to avoid hard feelings. Will Chip make it better or worse? And who is after Travis and more importantly WHY? Thanks for a fabulous Friday! I am so glad to see family healing and I feel that Brad initiating the apology was spot on. He finally was able to verbalize his feelings and explain his actions and lack of engagement. If he and Jeremy continue to have real conversations their bond can be strengthened and they will have a healthier relationship. Excellent writing, Mark!
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    Chapter 3 S3

    Clint seems to be looking for a gay friend and I am certain that he is fascinated to meet an established gay couple. It seems to be a combination of hero worship and validation that gay people exist successfully in society along with raging teenage hormones. Mike and Devin will make be great examples. Football games are in the future for sure! Thanks for another tour. It has brought back my memories of white water rafting!
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    Chapter 2 S3

    What a good trip! It overflows with of nostalgia. The music memories were particularly delightful. I’ve found that music is not exactly generational in that the availability of all types of music online, on satellite radio, touring bands from the 60’s, 70’s, 80’s, and musically centered movies. There are no doubt exceptions. One of my daughter’s friends once asked: Is it true that Paul McCartney was in a band before Wings?
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