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Thanks for the update. William definitely needs help. Alex will try to provide the help and therapy he needs to turn his life around. I want to see the effects of the buyout and the exploration of the wormhole and the planning of the bonding ceremony and whatever else is in the future chapters.
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The House grows! Marc is a tough but fair negotiator. In the end by buying Alex’s corporation, he gave her an opportunity to start over and leave behind the ill will her family had created. Marc also will be able to reform the corporation into a viable entity that will provide jobs and economic opportunity while it expands and strengthens the House. Amelia is working with Marc and Adam and is supporting their goals rather than attempting to manage them. Somebody needs to identify what is causing upset stomachs on the island. That makes for a crappy vacation! Thanks for the excellent update! I look forward to the next one!!
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To be continued? Lots to look forward to. I like the pace. I’m beginning to get the feel of making babies and it seems to be a group effort. 10 is more than enough, but doable especially if the pacing is stretched out. Another find? Will this ship reveal more technologies. Marc and Adam are acting as a bonded couple. Even though their lives are demanding, they are up to the challenge. Their House is set for the future and poised to grow. Thanks for the experience!
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Marc and Adam together are unstoppable! Poor Grandpa Alexander will have to get over himself if he wants the Alexander/Knight corporation to survive. If the merger is dissolved, most of the corporation will fold into Marc and Adam’s House. The five sectors are thriving and now that Adam has taken on the role of bond mate, it will only improve. I do want a reproductive lesson to understand how babies are made! Thanks for the two chapters. The talk of the Bonding Ceremony has me anticipating the event, but I am really enjoying the strengthening of Marc and Adam’s partnership both personally and professionally! Excellent storytelling!
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Steph certainly hit the nail on the head with his evaluation of the housing market. I’m still waiting for Steph and JP to find out about Will’s investments. Thor seems to be on the way to stabilizing his behavior as he defines himself as an openly gay man. Marie has added herself to the group attempting to set Claire straight. In the conversation Will explained his feelings about Jeremy and his reasons for not rushing in to immediately allowing Jeremy back into his life as if nothing had happened. Will is attempting to redefine his relationship with his brother as adults. He is willing to help Jeremy when he needs it as is evident with the terminal incident, but doesn’t want to be the whipping boy for Jeremy’s tantrums. Will is hoping for more than a drug related behavioral change. Thanks for the excellent chapter! As always I look forward to the next chapter and the revelations it may entail.
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I love it! A cliffie! Next please.
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Great chapter! I can’t wait for the next one! Well obviously I must, but Marc and Adam are going to get together and work things out. Can the bonding ceremony be far behind?
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I think Marc has recovered. I think his fetching Adam will be formidable. The rest will be a matter of communication. Marc and Adam will have a fabulous home for their children and a base for the expanding personal empire. So many people and sectors are improving their economies thanks to the Alexander/Knight household. I look forward to meal and the interactions with Adam’s parents and the coming reconciliation with Adam. Excellent storytelling!
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Marc has reformed sectors for the corporation and the House. The wealth and the power he has accumulated go beyond his initial plans, but he seems to be handling that part well in that he has found trusted friends to delegate running his “ kingdom.” It seems his personal demons have yet to be addressed. Can he really deal with them in a vacuum? Adam has done everything Marc has asked and continues to wait for Marc to initiate a reconciliation. How long will it take? At some point real communication is required and their issues need to be addressed. Great writing! I have a feeling Marc has some hard work to do if he is to make himself emotionally available!
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The pirates have been taken care of. The clean up is next and the slaves/captives need to be reintegrated into their former lives. Even though Marc is against using their situation as a bargaining chip, just by doing the right thing he will ingratiate many families and corporations who will respect him and the ethics of his corporation. Maybe after a good rest, Marc will begin to reach out to Adam. I loved the battle! Great work!
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Thor’s coming out was sweet and much better thanks to Will and Nils! Claire on the other hand is having a snit worthy of JJ at his skating best! I want to see Matt and Wade, Fab with his Maman , and the classroom visits especially the economics class. I look forward to Will’s visit to the fashion event with Jeremy and connecting with Jake and the Foundation to find a venue for fledgling artists. What a great chapter!
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Chapter 6: Strange Bedfellows
gmc commented on PrismaFox's story chapter in Chapter 6: Strange Bedfellows
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A decisive battle. Marc has made a tentative overture to Adam and the Solar Flare. The last big push is near. Is there any chance that the pirates will surrender? Marc will eliminate them if they don’t. I like that Marc did a few barrel rolls for his Marines and for his own relaxation!
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Chapter 2: The Boy from Nowhere
gmc commented on PrismaFox's story chapter in Chapter 2: The Boy from Nowhere
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Chapter 1: Beyond the Bathtub
gmc commented on PrismaFox's story chapter in Chapter 1: Beyond the Bathtub
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Just when things seemed to be going smoothly the Solar Flare jumped into the war zone with dire consequences. Marc is understandably upset. Finally we have a cliffhanger! What did they find and what does it mean? I thought I needed another chapter to continue the pirate war, but now I need one more! Please.
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Marc has an incredible long term plan, but when circumstances fell into place, he had the opportunity to make it happen now! Of course Adam knows what is happening because he knew the long term plan and he is watching all the cogs fall into place. The plan to rid the sectors of pirates and establishing the corporation is happening and unity and peace is in the future as well as the development of sectors that were impacted by pirates. Now the love story can reset as well! Marc , Adam is on the way with the help of Grandma Armstrong!
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The heat is on! The pirates! Marc and Adam! The Corporation! The future! Marc is taking advantage of the situation and moving up his timetable! I love it! Next chapter please.
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I somehow believe that Thor’s coming out to his family will be problematic. I think Will’s support will be needed. Lot’s is going on. Travis is becoming a celebrity and will have to contend with the publicity and the restraints of stardom, not to mention his stalker. Jeremy has begun to heal the rift with Will and has made an initial contact with Brad, but he is still dealing with his inner bitch. This is another great chapter! Thanks! I look forward to the next episode!
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Marc has a lot to deal with. What will the future hold? Can his bond with Adam happen? How can the fissure be healed? Marc and Caitlan have begun to rebuild their relationship. I look forward to the next chapter and hope Marc gets to a better place!
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Will automatically stood up for Jeremy in a crisis. I look forward to the next group outing which will be potentially dramatic between the Doorgate fallout and the stalker. I believe that CAWS is definitely Will’s trust and Brad and Steph will be impressed and a little jealous of Will’s initiative. What are we going to do about Thor? What about Clair’s continuing temper fit? Thanks for the great chapter and the many possibilities that are ahead!
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What an operation! Now comes the hard part. The healing will take time, but lots of people are there for support. Thanks for the action packed chapter.
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The tour has begun. I wonder what challenges will develop. Marc and Adam are in sync, they are messing their skills with each working towards their strengths. Their world has changed and will no doubt continue to change as the corporation grows. But how long before those pesky pirates surface? Well done. The fleet , the training, the Marines, the sisters, the romance! Great work!
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Having a cool party pad in a dorm is problematic. 10 people impossible limit! Maybe the emphasis should be on state of the art sound proofing! Jeremy pretentious invitation is typical. It should be an interesting weekend though I’m not sure going to a gay club that Chuck frequents is a stellar idea. Travis will no doubt be a star and an instant celebrity within weeks. How will that impact their lives? Thanks for another interesting chapter. The is much to think about including what’s up with Thor? Next chapter please.
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Let's Talk About the Weather
gmc commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Let's Talk About the Weather
Not everything is perfect. Humanity is by nature imperfect, but striving to improve is an ongoing goal. The visitors are seeing the wonders of Gaea and understanding what their lives can be with the help they have been offered.
