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A decisive battle. Marc has made a tentative overture to Adam and the Solar Flare. The last big push is near. Is there any chance that the pirates will surrender? Marc will eliminate them if they don’t. I like that Marc did a few barrel rolls for his Marines and for his own relaxation!
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Chapter 2: The Boy from Nowhere
gmc commented on PrismaFox's story chapter in Chapter 2: The Boy from Nowhere
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Chapter 1: Beyond the Bathtub
gmc commented on PrismaFox's story chapter in Chapter 1: Beyond the Bathtub
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Just when things seemed to be going smoothly the Solar Flare jumped into the war zone with dire consequences. Marc is understandably upset. Finally we have a cliffhanger! What did they find and what does it mean? I thought I needed another chapter to continue the pirate war, but now I need one more! Please.
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Marc has an incredible long term plan, but when circumstances fell into place, he had the opportunity to make it happen now! Of course Adam knows what is happening because he knew the long term plan and he is watching all the cogs fall into place. The plan to rid the sectors of pirates and establishing the corporation is happening and unity and peace is in the future as well as the development of sectors that were impacted by pirates. Now the love story can reset as well! Marc , Adam is on the way with the help of Grandma Armstrong!
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The heat is on! The pirates! Marc and Adam! The Corporation! The future! Marc is taking advantage of the situation and moving up his timetable! I love it! Next chapter please.
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I somehow believe that Thor’s coming out to his family will be problematic. I think Will’s support will be needed. Lot’s is going on. Travis is becoming a celebrity and will have to contend with the publicity and the restraints of stardom, not to mention his stalker. Jeremy has begun to heal the rift with Will and has made an initial contact with Brad, but he is still dealing with his inner bitch. This is another great chapter! Thanks! I look forward to the next episode!
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Marc has a lot to deal with. What will the future hold? Can his bond with Adam happen? How can the fissure be healed? Marc and Caitlan have begun to rebuild their relationship. I look forward to the next chapter and hope Marc gets to a better place!
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Will automatically stood up for Jeremy in a crisis. I look forward to the next group outing which will be potentially dramatic between the Doorgate fallout and the stalker. I believe that CAWS is definitely Will’s trust and Brad and Steph will be impressed and a little jealous of Will’s initiative. What are we going to do about Thor? What about Clair’s continuing temper fit? Thanks for the great chapter and the many possibilities that are ahead!
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What an operation! Now comes the hard part. The healing will take time, but lots of people are there for support. Thanks for the action packed chapter.
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The tour has begun. I wonder what challenges will develop. Marc and Adam are in sync, they are messing their skills with each working towards their strengths. Their world has changed and will no doubt continue to change as the corporation grows. But how long before those pesky pirates surface? Well done. The fleet , the training, the Marines, the sisters, the romance! Great work!
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Having a cool party pad in a dorm is problematic. 10 people impossible limit! Maybe the emphasis should be on state of the art sound proofing! Jeremy pretentious invitation is typical. It should be an interesting weekend though I’m not sure going to a gay club that Chuck frequents is a stellar idea. Travis will no doubt be a star and an instant celebrity within weeks. How will that impact their lives? Thanks for another interesting chapter. The is much to think about including what’s up with Thor? Next chapter please.
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Let's Talk About the Weather
gmc commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Let's Talk About the Weather
Not everything is perfect. Humanity is by nature imperfect, but striving to improve is an ongoing goal. The visitors are seeing the wonders of Gaea and understanding what their lives can be with the help they have been offered. -
Marc is busy expanding his marines, expanding his “vacation “ travels, proposing purchases of companies to fold into the merger, but he still has time to merge with Adam and even have date. What will our couples do to stay in the public eye? Next chapter please! What about those pesky pirates?
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I think I like the brothers. I hope Bas or someone livens them up a bit. They have been subjugated by their father only to break free from his expectations to create their own paths, In death he has brought them back together. Can this be a good thing, when all they have in is the disdain of their father? I think they can flourish if they support one another.
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Vacations are work in Marc and Adam’s world, but they will be together so monster sex! The corporation is growing and plans are in place to improve the lot of the new members especially Evelyn. I feel that Marc will have her neighbors under his control shortly. Great chapter, full of surprises for the Commodore.
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Sex, love, commitment- Marc and Adam are great together! Marc found a treasure trove and a craft within. What a find! A mystery to be solved! This story gets better and better! I eagerly await the next chapter! Great work.
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Will is right to be wary of Jeremy. If it were me I would never really trust him. I would be polite and cautiously interact at family gatherings, but to me in my heart he would be a distant cousin not my brother. Maybe over time he could become a friend if his behavior is acceptable and he makes genuine amends. Thor, Fab, and Will, how fun is that? Thanks for another thought provoking chapter!
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Drinking and communicating is not a good combination. Gatorade, candy and lots of tequila is a recipe for projectile vomiting. James has reached out and look what he got. Poor Jonah! What about Victor and his girlfriend? Did they do something?
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Let’s all go on a Summer holiday
gmc commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Let’s all go on a Summer holiday
The holiday seems to be good for everyone. The boys have met some new friends, Hansi has moved on, Arthur and Ludo continue to bond. The future looks to be stable for Damian even though his relationship with Jackie is best when they communicate through letters rather than in person. This has been a long and difficult journey that has finally had a resolution. I look forward to the remaining portion of the story. These characters are delightful and have real depth. Perhaps they have another story to tell. Just a thought! -
Surprise Napoleon is susceptible to flattery! Talleyrand gave Granger excellent advice. Comparing his issues with Caroline to Napoleon’s with Josephine was an impressive strategy. Not only did George abrogate the accusation of bedding Josephine, he bonded with Napoleon on a personal level. No wonder Daventry was impressed! Poor Winkler was sent to a sex shop to buy lavender oil. Even though Jacob and Granger teased him, he will benefit in the end, but not as soon as George! A excellent chapter, especially the interaction between Granger and Napoleon.
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It was nice that Marc took the time to help Mike and his marine as well as the other marines who failed to get contact information from their encounters. A teaching moment for sure! Adam really stepped up to help Mike understand that Marc had plans for him and to trust his Captain to make good decisions for his future. What a neat vessel the Bear Claw has become! It will no doubt help the larger than life narrative that Marc is the center of come to fruition, and there is a hint that another innovation is coming soon. The tour, building the newly merged corporation, ratting the pirates, reconciling with Caitlin, and bonding! Adam and Marc still haven’t had the time to connect sexually! It’s time to prioritize their relationship. Friends, partners, bond mates, lovers. Sleeping is nice and comforting, but it’s even better after sex! Thanks for another great chapter!
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A full house! Now Colin will have some company while Harris is working and vice versa. The Golden Boys plus Fifi, a drag or lots of fun?
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I too would like to know the details of the rift between Marc and Caitlin, but I am enjoying the crumbs that have been sprinkled as I await the eventual reveal! Marc and Adam make a good team. They truly seem to complement and strengthen each other. The merger seems to beneficial to everyone with the exception of the pirates. I didn’t expect Zorba, but yeah the was right! What an epic chapter. Thanks.
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Marc is a force of nature! His family is still catching up to what his plan has wrought! The merged corporation is unfolding into a power that only Marc had imagined! Now to clear out those pesky pirates! What an amazing chapter! Thank you for the ride and a reminder of future that await Marc and Adam.
