Thank god Shas finally told Becca off. Shas is such a good soul that I just can't imagine what he sees in her (as wife material anyways). I could give allowances for wedding nerves before, but at this point she is just being a bitch because she thinks she can. I hope shas made her sign a prenup! I also loved robin standing up for their relationship. Kier is a lucky man to have 2 such strong supporters in his corner. Thanks for another great start to my Monday!
Brad is definately giving me some bad vibes, and I really want to bitch slap Sam. What an ass. Can't wait to see how this story plays out! Thank you for another great chapter.
Loved this chapter so much! Kier and Robin are so good together. The fact that robin not only loves him but also loves his dogs and supports his racing makes him the best thing that has ever happened to Kier. Things are going so well for them though that part of me is wondering when they might hit a speed bump on the racetrack so to speak. Don't get me wrong. I love how sweet the two are, and I would happily devour chapters of them happy and in love, but that nagging little angst loving part of my brain is waiting for a potentially destructive misunderstanding.
I have to say I am really enjoying this re-write. You have done a fantastic job adding more depth to the original story and adding more substance to the characters and their interactions with each other. I even find myself becoming invested in characters, like Harrison, that I didn't think much about the first time around. Looking forward to your next chapter!
Beautiful. You can almost feel the heat any time Kier and Robin are near each other. They are definately hot together. I hope eventually Becca does redeem herself because right now, she is a total bitch who does not deserve Shas. Shas also deserves better than the person she is showing herself to be right now. At least Robin sees it and is on Kieren's side. Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Another great chapter, thank you!! I love that, although he is upset with him, Shas has not written off Kieran. I also love watching Kieran fall in love and grow as a person. Who doesn't love watching a bad boy learn how to love? Robin has also grown as a person, letting go of some of his pre-conceived prejudices against Kieran and allowing him in. They are a fun couple to root for. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I agree with a previous review, 1000 words are too short when you can only get your "chapter fix" once a week. It's good to see Yuri exerting his own will and seeing him come out of the prison his mind became. He and Benny are going to make an unstoppable team as Alphas for the Tigers. Thank you for another great chapter Cia!
Ok I just fangirl squealed when I saw you posted a new chapter. Embarrassing but true. Lol. Loved this story and although I am sad to see it end it was a great ride, cheering on Noah as he discovered his inner strength and grit. I love how Eli didn't complete him...he complemented him. After 20 years of being completely dependant on someone else for his happiness, Noah definitely didn't need someone to complete him. Thanks for the great story Rob. Can't wait for Peri's story next!!
Great chapter! I agree with other reviewers that I like how often you post updates. It makes the story move along smoothly and you stay invested in the characters. Can't wait for the final 2 chapters! I hope Kayden is ok because you really don't have enough chapters left for Damien to lose his mind if his kitten doesn't make it.
Poor Kayden. He finally speaks up and isn't believed. I worry what Roman is going to do to him now. I understand Damien's point of view and that he is between a rock and a hard place, even though I wish he believed Kayden and caught on to Roman calling Kayden "little tiger"
Poor Josh. He's kind of spiralling right now. Cory is an ass and a horrid friend who just used him as an easy and convenient lay. Josh really needs to run, not walk away from that kind of friend. I hope the next few chapters have him discovering that he deserves better than what Cory or a random hookup at a bath house have to offer.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Benny really needs to be the one to take down Shestun. He is going to make a great alpha! On a side note, Dav is still one of my favorite characters. I'm happy he's there for Benny when Benny had his back for so many years.
Fantastic chapter! I am happy Luke has A friend like Jame who cares about him enough to bitch slap him. Everyone needs a friend who will tell it like it is, even if it's not what you want to hear at the time. Looking forward to the next chapter and the grovelling.
Thank you for the warm welcome everyone. I think my only problem with this site is going to be a serious lack of sleep while I lose myself in the stories.