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  1. LitLover

    Chapter 22

    Stay tuned for more details, Drew I love your excitement. Thank you for another great review
  2. LitLover

    Chapter 22

    More details will start to come out, but M does need to be careful. I'm very happy to have your attention. Thank you for your review and all of your support, Def. I appreciate it.
  3. Awakening your Muse... the words are so true. A muse can be fiery and consuming and, if you're not careful, can go out cold and you're left with ashes. The hanging... I like that you used the soldier's perspective. I felt like I was standing there beside them.
  4. Wow. That was... hot! (Fanning myself) I feel like a voyeur reading this , but the imagery was breathtaking. I could almost hear the panting breaths and the racing heartbeats. I hope everyone has the opportunity to feel that level of passion in their lives.
  5. LitLover

    Chapter 22

    Thank you I'm really happy that you're enjoying the story. When I started this, I didn't expect the plot to head in the direction it has, but the story just kind of took me here. The fact that other people are enjoying the ride makes is a wonderful compliment. Thank you for your review and your support Dr.P. I appreciate it.
  6. LitLover

    Chapter 22

    Jenson's emotions are already pretty raw where Kel is concerned, so doubtless this will cause him more anxiety, especially while M is too far away for J to help him. Thank you for your unwavering support of the story... and me.
  7. LitLover

    Chapter 22

    More details will start to come out. We'll have to see how this all affects J or M. Thank you for reviewing and your support. I appreciate it.
  8. LitLover

    Chapter 22

    It is pretty convoluted, but you're right, grief and anger can make people to some crazy things. J isn't able to help them like he would like to and that will be rough for him. Thank you for review and your support, tim. I appreciate it.
  9. LitLover

    Philip

    I wonder why Philip is feeling guilty about what happened to Tait? Did he know Tait's ex? Did he introduce them? Or did he chicken out telling Tait that he is (so obviously to everyone but Tait, I'm sure) in love with the man, leaving Tait open to marry someone else? So many questions rolling around inside my head. I like the flashbacks. It's a good way to get to know the people who've been in Tait's life and how he came to be where he is right now. Great chapter, tim. Looking forward to delving deeper into Tait's story.
  10. LitLover

    Chapter 22

    Chapter 22 Merrick was led through a maze of corridors and down a long staircase. He didn’t recognize the area, and knew it wasn’t how he came into the building. As if sensing his unspoken question, the senator turned slightly as he stepped onto the landing at the base of the staircase. “We’re going through the tunnels to the visitor’s quarters. Under the circumstances the Maser would like to keep your contact to a minimum until the investigation begins.” The tunnels ran in different dir
  11. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    I think this is one of those cases where even supposed friends could be dangerous to your health. Like you said though, M is a bright boy Thank you for reviewing and your support, tim.
  12. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    I think this is one of those cases where even supposed friends could be dangerous to your health. Like you said though, M is a bright boy Thank you for reviewing and your support, tim.
  13. Carly has lost any respect I might have been able to muster up for her. What she did... the way she played God with so many peoples' lives... no amount of jealousy can justify that. She trapped a man who she KNEW was gay into a loveless marriage using a child that wasn't even his. She played and slept with a young man who actually liked her just to become pregnant. She tortured the man by dangling a little girl in front of him and threatening to take her away if she didn't play along with her ever changing rules. How can someone like this sleep at night? I hold to my thoughts of her from last week... Carly is a psychopath. She doesn't care who gets steamrolled in her plans as long as she gets what she wants. Without Craig's intervention, even if she loves her daughter now, it would only have been a matter of time until Bailey did something that would have caused her mother to turn on her too. Likely involving her wanting to see Jared. I know Jared should know what Carly did, but my heart aches for him having to hear about this. I like how Craig handled the situation though. It's good that he realized she lied and remembered some of what happened back then. Hopefully they can get the new agreements drawn up quickly. This was another great chapter, Gary! You are a master at touching a chord with your audience... even if that chord is wishing you could slap a character. lol
  14. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    lol he might try, but he's with his father and sister and I think they're probably just as stubborn as J is. As for being a pawn? At least he knows so he can be vigilant.
  15. This really does a romantic soul good. Michael is such a cute little boy who adores his father and seems to have attached himself to Patrick already. Patrick is so good at reading the emotions and motivations of everyone he meets, except for the man he really wants. I love that there is some mystery between the two of them. They are able to get to know each other. That was probably one of the most romantic ways I've heard to ask someone to be their Valentine. Thank you for this wonderful valentine's gift Oh and I asked my husband about Peter Schmeichel and he grumbled because he's an Arsenal fan lol
  16. The past never seems far behind some days, does it? This one made me tear up and wish I could help the boy who still carries that pain.
  17. Hands whisper over cooling skin... I think that was one of my favourite images. Michael is a lucky man to be the recipient of such soul deep love. Another beautiful poem. tim. This one was very good for my romantic soul.
  18. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    At least he knows he's being used as bait, so he has a chance to protect himself, right? Thank you for reviewing and your support, Def.
  19. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    I don't think Merrick realized how far reaching this was until that moment. Now that he knows, hopefully he can keep himself and his team safe while they try to figure out who was involved. Thank you for your great review, Dr.P.
  20. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    One thing Merrick prides himself on is that he is good at his job. I can't imagine him keeping something from J, especially if J has information/insight that could possibly keep his team safe, even if he doesn't want J to worry about him Thank you for your support and a great review, Tim.
  21. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    I can only guarantee that M is not King Stark. As for an attraction? I think M appreciates confidence. Thank you for reading and reviewing, John.
  22. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    I can only guarantee that M is not King Stark. As for an attraction? I think M appreciates confidence. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Johm.
  23. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    J doesn't know for now. We'll see how he reacts when he finds out We'll find out more about the 'why' soon. Thank you for your review and your support, B.
  24. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    Merrick does appear to have allies, but sometimes your allies aren't any better than an enemy. I hope you continue to find the story intriguing.a Thank you for another wonderful review, Gary, and for all of your support.
  25. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    I don't know it this will compare to the Game of Thrones, but I hope will find it interesting Thank you for another great review and all of your support, Drew.
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