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  1. skinnydragon
    Truly entertaining, Dayne! But then, each of your WLM chapters have been. More than once, you've beautifully described a scene with lots of people talking over each other, and you always make it seem like the reader is right there, catching these bits of conversation. That's a fantastic talent you have. Like the others have mentioned, the last part of the chapter, in introspection, put a perfect bit of punctuation to this section. You're a very talented writer! Thanks for this chapter and this great story!
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    Mike and David always seem to be misreading the other. (I know, I know, who am I to complain about that? ) But it's difficult to understand how they've been together for 8 years. Of course there have been hints that things were different before David lost his job, and maybe that was the catalyst for this growing tension. Aside from that, you would think, knowing Mike was behind a surprise party for him, David would have cut him a little slack. Also, Vicky glomming onto the 'attraction' with Rain was a little disquieting, both for David and us. Another great chapter in this complex story, lux!
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    Thank you, Ron! Yes, it was intense to write and rewrite too!
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    This was a very entertaining series of "stories" Hunter! I enjoyed them very much, and they really said a lot, comparing the expected reactions to the actual ones and their side effects. Well done!
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    NO! You're not allowed to have a regular life outside GA.
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    Thanks Ron! Unfortunately, from the chapter you're on, you won't like what happens next. Try not to OD on the story. Some people binge-read it and have never been heard from again!
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    Chapter 10

    skinnydragon commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Well, it was a good ride while it lasted! Some very well written scenes in this one, Ron. The only hope is, Travis and Raliegh's confrontation with Dorian, a member of the Pride harassment committee, will spell their doom. The alternative would be for Dorian to hire a hit-man with Dad's credit card (do they take credit cards?). btw shouldn't the secret service be around soon checking up on Dorian? That would make an interesting sidebar for T&R to consider.
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    Dear friend, I we ever meet irl, I--um, may need to take a wee step backward to protect myself. These were beautifully, if terrifyingly, well written. I'm confident you were channeling someone else when you got the inspiration for these. Maybe a politician from The States or something. btw I've seen one of those giant hogweed thingys. Nicely wrought, Parker.
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    Thanks Ron! I'm glad you are enjoying it! It isn't all light and fluffy though--just a warning
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    Gone from sight Locked away Gone from thought Far away Gone from life Cast away - David *** Twoey Erik, Mom and I were having breakfast. He’s been extra sweet and caring since I sorta drove him to getting my attention with a slap on Wednesday. You can tell how bad he feels about it, poor guy. Mom brought something up. “I haven’t seen your friend David around for such a long time! How is he doing?” “I see him in my math class. He
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    Thank you, Def! Like you said, he can't help himself with Donny. Maybe it's the combination of realizing Donny recognized what the doctor didn't (at least in David's mind) and his raging hormones, amplified by sexual fantasies of Donny. Whatever it is, nothing short of a crisis will derail this Donny-Express. The doctor will do a clumsy (IMHO) job of explaining the therapy in chapter 109, leading David to very, very bad assumptions. Just what he needs, right?
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    Thank you, Parker! That was a very thoughtful description. Your last line, that David will hurt everybody, and therein lies his danger was very insightful. More dangerous will be if he ever realizes this.
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    Thanks spikey! I liked your line "He also sees what he wants and goes for it." Maybe that's exactly what David needs to realize his true orientation. Matty's subtlety was totally lost on someone like David, who reads even the most obvious advances in the way his mind has been programmed to respond. Twoey, likewise, misread David. Waiting for his angel to come around to realizing what his orientation is, was doomed to failure. David was NEVER going to be able to do that on his own. And so, Donny. Team-Donny, yeah. Maybe I should post half-days so we'd have 26 more chapters and get enough time for Team-Twoey and Team-Donny to coalesce. Oh-oh. What about Team-Matty?
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    Thank you, CG! Well, the one good thing about Donny is that he seems to be pushing David toward 'know thyself' rather quickly. At least he seems to be advancing his agenda faster than Matty ever did, haha.
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    Thanks for the comments, jess! Not-gay David isn't ready for gay yet, but is probably reaady for not-straight. David is about to sense what you have about the Dr. Keating consultations, which will lead him into a fit of depression. Luckily, for the short term, Twoey and Donny, Donny!, Donny!!! will distract him.
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    Thank you, Hunter! Actually, 13 days, which is even more worrisome. David listens to Dr. Keating, but seems to act independently of the advice. A character flaw or raging hormones? The deadline takes on an even stranger possible meaning after chapter 110.
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    Thank you lux! David/Donny: someone will get hurt, but will it be one of them? Twoey has a few paddles he doesn't know about yet, but soon will.
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    Our damaged hero, David (from the previous entry and from "18 Weeks of Twoey"), is near the end of his journey. He has become convinced he will be sent away to an insane asylum in two weeks. He wrote this, in despair, as he considered his fate. Gone from sight Locked away Gone from thought Far away Gone from life Cast away
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    The Bitch Is Back

    skinnydragon commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Bitch Is Back

    Yes! A great story and greatly missed. Now Corbin, jeez! Sit down and think.
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    Chapter 9

    skinnydragon commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Aw! I was hoping Travis would walk in, see Jerry about to throw a punch, and defend Dorian. But then, he'd probably have just joined in. I think maybe (hope maybe? desperately hope maybe?) Dorian is quickly approaching a defining moment in his life. Interesting chapter, Ron.
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    Oh, Dayne! You've been reading ahead!
  22. skinnydragon
    Hmm. David killing Erik, now that's a thought. David gets the chair and meets Danny. Donny and Twoey console each other and live happily ever after. Alex bullies Martin into becoming straight again, and they live happily ever after. Curt and Mark decide they're really straight. Cory settles down with Randy. Matty gets Chuck, and they have the most athletic relationship since Kitten and Wolf. The End
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    Wow! An awful lot in this chapter, Tim! The nasty neighbor got put in her place very nicely. That was certainly good to read. The total dedication Patrick showed to Peter and Michael, by closing to be with them during the difficult time ahead, was also good to read. Fiona's visit leaves the only little mystery for us, and can't wait to get to that. btw you've mischievously dragged that out for enough chapters to make us scream "get them together, already!" But then, who am I to complain about that. Thanks for sharing this with us!
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    Chapter 16

    skinnydragon commented on Hunter Thomson's story chapter in Chapter 16

    It's good that Devin was able to explain Sean to Bryce, even though the circumstances were so frightening for him. At least Bryce got to see the damage first hand. It will surely go a long way toward a mutual understanding, and that can only be good. It will probably be good for Devin too, to begin to move past this little barrier. All in all, a good chapter for Devin and Bryce!
  25. skinnydragon
    A great chapter and great honor! I had a feeling that's what the envelope was, at the end of the last chapter. I must have that Spidey-sense too ...haha.
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