Robertaber

Nice chapter and great story i am officially following u as a author

Nice chapter im wondering how this will go meeting Marc's family and how will Damien and Marc get around the arguement they had hopefully marc will admit that to a point he was wrong to just go off and train all the time.

I totally agree with robert Rex great tension and honestly I think u should have uploaded the other chapter the same time because I think we are all excited to figure out what happens specially with the relationship ending fight btw to a point I agree with Damien about Marc with the whole shutting him out thing and I think he deserved that slap to the face that Damien gave him.

Well uh nice chapter sorta hit a few nerves ther in the middle about gay being unnatural and how veer a more or less burned his nude image in her mind and totally disrespected his privacy. Anyway other then that stuff it was a good chapter.

I usually don't read stories like this but I really thank for the first chapter u did great and I could to a point relate to Ezra just dont put to much depression in it k alittle then like sad then happy moments in that order is think would keep people entertained with some but not to much emotion

I agree with the guys above can't wait for Christmas 16

Nice chapter can't wait for abit more

Hey um can you continue this story please

Nice story so far can't wait for the next parts

Nice i loved the first book and the first chapter of this one is great are you going to update it anymore?

First thing awesome storys i read the first modern high then just finished reading all up to the last update. If like to say the first one really was a tear jerker but in some parts it was abit uh confuseing like ok so they had the chat after the coma and my first instinct is ok everythings sorta fixed but then they don't talk to eachother at all so that was one spot that to me didnt make much sense. Anyway good job so far on this one as for a suggestion mabye have Zachary do alittle vampire stuff like well if possible do some telekinesis or mind reading something like that and for Jacob you could mabye do some where he for example makes something but something complex like hmm mabye something alive since you mentioned it dureing the time when he was talking to the crystals. Anyway thats all for now can't wait for more

Awesome chapter update i do admit I was hoping for it to go abit better with Cyrus i would have thought he would listen to his pack conscious can't wait for the next one .

lol well im glad you enjoyed it lol, if I may ask how is it not realistic?

I awoke to hearing a beat in my head as if someone was hitting a drum in a steady rhythm. I looked around Adam’s room shocked at seeing that it was empty with nothing making the beating noise. It slowly intensified as someone approached the room. It was so loud I could not distinguish between it, and other sounds; it took my whole attention. I screamed out in pain as it started to pound down into my brain. Suddenly in ran Sam with a shocked and scared look on his face. “Justin, what’s wrong?”

I sat still thinking, trying to put together a good way to ask my questions. Dash, a little annoyed, pleaded, “Come on ask us something. I know you have questions. Don’t think, just ask.” I was having trouble thinking of how to ask my questions. My mind still clouded from my telepathic conversation with Lupus Albus, or Lupu for short, not to mention seeing the state of my old home burning into ash. Finally, I sighed and looked around for some paper, finding that maybe it would be easier to wri

Nice chapter when do you plan on adding more chapters?

you could say that besides think about how freaked out you would be if you suddenly start hearing things when nothings there here it was more face to face and easier for him to manage.

Justin's POV There on the left side of the street, where my house once stood I only saw a pile of burning and burnt wood. I started tearing up, as we got closer to what use to be my house. Jordan pulled beside the driveway and parked the car. He and Adam stepped out to look around, while I sat in the car still in my shocked lifeless state. I was so preoccupied in my own shock that I didn’t notice something approaching the car from behind. I jumped at something walking on top of the car and

Justin’s POV Adam had my hand in a death grip dragging me back to his house. He must have been extremely horny because he was in a full sprint. At this rate, we would be at his house in minutes. “O.K., when we get to my house I’m going to tear those off you. All you got to do is sit back and relax alright, Justin?” I couldn’t talk since he was running me ragged. Finally, we made it to his house; surprisingly it was empty aside from two horny teenagers. We ran down the hall to Adam’s room. He

first its only been a couple of days plus justins been proccipied and shocked several times so i mean he hasnt had the chance of thinking of them

Justin’s POV “What’s going on here, Dash?” I yelled due to the massive amounts of vibration. It was like an earthquake. The whole house was shaking. He just went to a full on grin as he finally let my hand fall away from the door. The door almost immediately stopped shaking, and the red glow dissipated into nothing. “What the hell was that and why did it happen?” I demanded. Dash still with his grin replied, “That, my dear Justin, was why you’re so important to us I looked behind him real

thanks for the reveiw scary I honestly try to keep the readers geussing when i write thats why theres so many cliffhangers to make them keep reading lol anyways the ch are so short due to two reasons 1 i work better doing alittle at a time and two it makes it easier to edit if somethings wrong.

I sure will and i hope you enjoy it as much as the others

I will do my best.

Justins pov I looked up blushing, unable to look directly at him in embarrassment, as Adam looked at the tent in my boxers admiringly. “Anyways, let’s head to bed. Tomorrow’s a busy day now that you’re awake,” he said looking back up to my face. The next morning I awoke to hear Adam coming back in from what I assumed was a bathroom break. It still being dark I couldn’t make out much other than the outline of his body walking in. As he turned, I could just barely make out a little bulge. It