Ben Highlander

Is this the end? Noooooooo

Hey Cole, I'm loving this story. I'm reading it on my tablet so I find posting awkward but I will say this :you spin a good yarn and I'm looking forward to chapter 7 which is next on my agenda. Much appreciated!

This is the most alluring and perfect story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and It is a different perspective on a story I'm writing. Clone Sagas, as the name suggests, includes clones and I am exploring the notion of having an adult that has no back story. it is in it's infancy but you did a great job exploring other aspects of the same theme. Congratulations. I'm definitely going to read some of your other stuff as well. I loved how Hani was disillusioned but not embittered by his rent days, and it really only empowered him to search out his love. I'm glad for him. It is the cry of every bottom boy's heart (even a bottom boy in a man's body) to find a man that fits him, and makes him feel complete. It is deliciously articulated and I loved it.

Sasha I great start. Amusing premise. I am keen to read more. I love sci-fi and this is the best kind: funny and interesting. Well done!

It's hard for me to vote because I think that one should post as often as possible with what length one can manage. I would rather post a longer chapter but would rather post a short one when I can, than leave it too long. Make sense? so I vote, as a compromise, short often

Off to a good start! look forward to reading more.

I want an Alex. No need to say anything I know how this sounds But that's the reason we're all gay. Is cos we need a man to love us. Can't wait ti see what happens... Ben H

Well, you have my attention, for sure. And I'll be sure to leave some encouragement every time... like little bread crumbs. Ben H

Look, I'm not gonna lie: I like the amped up sex, but I feel I'd like you to take more time describing it. You spend so much time talking about, and building the story of the family and the science and everything else. I barely get an erection out of this and I want to be able to ejaculate with them. If this isn't the stated goal, then I accept it because I like the story so much. Just my 2c worth. I mean incest is hot! Let's wring the most out of it! But great going!

Having recently been the recipient of very few reviews for my longest story, I am keen to make sure I don't make the same mistake. I appreciate the diligence with which you are building the history of these men (a concept I find incredibly hot I must say-- the fact that there is a society almost completely devoid of women, combined with the amazing ability to have mind-sex at the same time as physical sex) as well as creating a mythology of the psychics that is equally exciting. Well done an I am looking forward to a lot more. I love sci-fi and men and this combines both! Blessings Ben H

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Hey my new friend! Well done. Yearning, sighing, starving Pining, dying, craving Freezing, chasing, longing, Yielding, Feeling, Rest

I really liked it short and sweet. So sweet. Is jy 'n afrikaanse boikie?

welcome!!!

Welcome all!

don't overthink it. you have permission. now write what comes out. stories write themselves once you start. let's see the pages

Love it! Funny, camp, romantic(?) Will be carrying on! Ben H

Intriguing. Will forge ahead! Nice writing. Dense style but worth the effort Ben H

Just read chapter 1. I like it. I am intrigued by the curly blonde head and Timmy already and hope for Andy's sake that he gets some attention cos his shower routine is gonna get old soon (for him) Will read chapter 2 and get back to you! Ben H

You took me there. the moment had me. thanks!

you're a sneaky shit

Still loving it. It is so important to create a mythology of gay-friendly people to begin to displace the mostly negative perception that western paternalistic sexuality has foisted upon us. I'm loving it.

What a gentle, delightful story. The young duckling that doesn't know he's already a swan. Beautiful. Thanks so much for this story. I can't wait to read more, but if this were all, it would be enough. beautifully written. Thanks so much! Dampies

Krista, you have replied and satisfied me. I have realized also that people have grown to identify with my main character. He has a voice and to dilute that wouldn't be beneficial tx Cia as well.

I'm writing a story (see sheepinwolfsclothing in my signature) and it has been exclusively from one POV for 8 1/2 chapters. Now I'm tempted to introduce another. Is it too late? I suspect so, but it may be of benefit to my story. on the other hand, it may be more enticing to hint at the other POV through only the observable reactions of others. Any thoughts?I suspect the latter would be best...