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Ben Highlander

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  1. Is this the end? Noooooooo
  2. Ben Highlander

    Chapter 5

    This is the most alluring and perfect story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and It is a different perspective on a story I'm writing. Clone Sagas, as the name suggests, includes clones and I am exploring the notion of having an adult that has no back story. it is in it's infancy but you did a great job exploring other aspects of the same theme. Congratulations. I'm definitely going to read some of your other stuff as well. I loved how Hani was disillusioned but not embittered by his rent days, and it really only empowered him to search out his love. I'm glad for him. It is the cry of every bottom boy's heart (even a bottom boy in a man's body) to find a man that fits him, and makes him feel complete. It is deliciously articulated and I loved it.
  3. Ben Highlander

    Chapter 1

    Sasha I great start. Amusing premise. I am keen to read more. I love sci-fi and this is the best kind: funny and interesting. Well done!
  4. Ben Highlander

    Part 1

    Off to a good start! look forward to reading more.
  5. Ben Highlander

    Chapter 1

    I want an Alex. No need to say anything I know how this sounds But that's the reason we're all gay. Is cos we need a man to love us. Can't wait ti see what happens... Ben H
  6. Ben Highlander

    Prologue

    Well, you have my attention, for sure. And I'll be sure to leave some encouragement every time... like little bread crumbs. Ben H
  7. Look, I'm not gonna lie: I like the amped up sex, but I feel I'd like you to take more time describing it. You spend so much time talking about, and building the story of the family and the science and everything else. I barely get an erection out of this and I want to be able to ejaculate with them. If this isn't the stated goal, then I accept it because I like the story so much. Just my 2c worth. I mean incest is hot! Let's wring the most out of it! But great going!
  8. Having recently been the recipient of very few reviews for my longest story, I am keen to make sure I don't make the same mistake. I appreciate the diligence with which you are building the history of these men (a concept I find incredibly hot I must say-- the fact that there is a society almost completely devoid of women, combined with the amazing ability to have mind-sex at the same time as physical sex) as well as creating a mythology of the psychics that is equally exciting. Well done an I am looking forward to a lot more. I love sci-fi and men and this combines both! Blessings Ben H
  9. Ben Highlander

    part iii

    Please PLEASE tell me the story doesn't end with iv? PLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE
  10. Hey my new friend! Well done. Yearning, sighing, starving Pining, dying, craving Freezing, chasing, longing, Yielding, Feeling, Rest
  11. Ben Highlander

    Chapter 1

    I really liked it short and sweet. So sweet. Is jy 'n afrikaanse boikie?
  12. Ben Highlander

    part i

    Love it! Funny, camp, romantic(?) Will be carrying on! Ben H
  13. Intriguing. Will forge ahead! Nice writing. Dense style but worth the effort Ben H
  14. Just read chapter 1. I like it. I am intrigued by the curly blonde head and Timmy already and hope for Andy's sake that he gets some attention cos his shower routine is gonna get old soon (for him) Will read chapter 2 and get back to you! Ben H
  15. Ben Highlander

    Starlight

    You took me there. the moment had me. thanks!
  16. you're a sneaky shit
  17. Still loving it. It is so important to create a mythology of gay-friendly people to begin to displace the mostly negative perception that western paternalistic sexuality has foisted upon us. I'm loving it.
  18. What a gentle, delightful story. The young duckling that doesn't know he's already a swan. Beautiful. Thanks so much for this story. I can't wait to read more, but if this were all, it would be enough. beautifully written. Thanks so much! Dampies
  19. Still loving it. Why you're not out making money with your stories, I don't know!
  20. I DON'T HAVE A LOT OF TIME TO REVIEW THIS BUT STILL A W E S O M E ! !
  21. I love sci fi. Never thought I would find it here, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!
  22. Ben Highlander

    Chapter 1

    1. I am hugely turned on by incest 2. I love sci fi 3. It is interesting and the sci fi aspects make sense and draw me in. I'm in. Can't wait to read ch 2, but I have to balance it against my own writing. No worries, I will persevere and am now a convert!! Well done... <3
  23. Hey Basketballboy! Welcome! Look forward to interacting with you!
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