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Thank you for the chapter! What a nice update on everyone. Now then - Tech3. It sounds like a codename for something refined. I sense a rarified origin and lots of research and development. Wonder how it will shake out in the larger universe? It’s cute to read about the children growing up into their own persons. I hope their stories will also be as interesting.
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The Passport and Cartier Watch
Northerner commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in The Passport and Cartier Watch
Bish is going down! Question is which one? Imagine having crossed wider Schulter-Crampton family so bad that part of your plea bargain involves living under a new identity in Denton, TX. For life. Not that there’s anything wrong with Texas - quite the contrary, but… Denton. Let’s see how swift the retribution is. -
Travis should know better, but cut the dude some slack. ADD, a busy life, a long-distance relationship, plus the occasional slip-up and things are bound to go south every once in a while. No CAP without some drama! Now, is Taylor in kahoots with the kidnappers? I’d vote yes, and would have some henchman hired by Jake make her a meth addict and a valley girl as revenge. Guess I’m blood-thirsty since it’s back to the grind tomorrow 😈 Death by Oxi it shall be!
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Happy belated birthday and thank you for this chapter! The distract with baubles tactic worked. It’s a tale as old as time, and surprisingly current given events in the news cycle as of late.
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Thank you for a wonderful chapter! The boys are full of surprises - starting with a skiing trip, now branching out to a cruise line empire. Love it! Enjoy your break, and come back refreshed with new ideas! You deserve it.
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So, there he was. The Will. Only getting the first half of the old Dinner and a Movie game on. Is he losing it, or just stealing for the prey? We had the Land Whore a while back. Are we getting the Harvard Square Lothario as well? I’d love to know, wouldn’t you?
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Loved this chapter, reading about how the family’s grown and how they handle their day to day. What a treat! Thank you @P. E. Knapp
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Yay! Thoughtful Brad is back and he’s a considerate dad. Not just power moves and business. A welcome surprise! We’re being setup for a blaze of glory, an epic showdown at Escorial for Thanksgiving. Chip, Finn, Thor and Brad - what a band of rascals we got at Harvard. Is Will settling down with Travis, or is there villainy afoot? Tune in for the next episode. Thank you @Mark Arbour!
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I love the family dynamics and how Adam and Marc are working as a team. With this latest addition the Alexander-Knight conglomerate has grown to capacity without changing things up. Here’s to hoping they’ll not fumble at this juncture - these inflection points are when things can go pear-shaped in business. Thank you for a wonderful chapter and safe travels @P. E. Knapp
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The family dynamics has almost gotten wholesome…it’s a nice change of venue, but expect some other form of drama soon. Whatever evil did Muskogee do? First the old Merle Haggard song Okie from Muskogee, now used as a metaphor for scumbag people. IKYK it’s not bright lights big city, but it’s not Gary, IN either. I hope Chris is still good so that Jeremy stays in a good place for a little longer, that said - what’s up with the other plot threads? Suspense is rising, well done! The pace of posting is impressive, whets my appetite. Thank you!
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Oh wow, that was a very businesslike war! Makes you wonder who goaded Basalt into stirring the pot? Family first for our protagonists, but the new toys seem nifty. I wonder when Marc is due for heroics? Cant wait to read what happens next!
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And action! Things are in motion, I wonder who is the schemer behind the corporation going after the boys? Surely, they can’t be stupid enough to think they will pull this off on their own? This is a riveting tale! I can’t wait fir the next chapter to drop. Thank you!
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Haha, the sweet life of being a busy baby parent! That’s the wholesome part, who built Haven and made the slave cast will decidedly be less so. The suspense is building. Thanks @P. E. Knapp for another wonderful chapter!
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And the Jeremy rehabilitation was mostly successful. Travis looks like he might make it in the entertainment industry. As for the classical whodunnit, I’d wager it’s someone looking to put pressure on Travis, a plot involving the bigger family, or their interests seems far-fetched. Still, exiting times ahead. Here’s to new beginnings!
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Amazing that the boys got inspired to dabble in high-end winter resort magic! It feels like as they have several sectors to roam and play in they will have tons of fun coming up. Why do I feel that we’re being taken on a ride that might soon turn serious?
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Sounds like Adam and Marc is having a great time! It’s like they’re nibbling on the delicacies of life before the children arrive. I suspect they will be very busy soon. Thanks for another wonderful chapter, it’s been an absolute joy reading it.
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Coziness overload! I wish we’d all be able to retreat from our 9-5s, wrap ourselves in quiet and just wind down. Thanks for a heartwarming chapter!
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Ooh, what a lovely chapter! Plus, skiing! One of life’s great joys. I like how the boys are easing into settled down life. Something’s gotta give, but the ride there sure is enjoyable! Thank you @P. E. Knapp!
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The plot thickens, it’s coming together just like a roux simmering in the gumbo that this story is becoming. I can’t wait to see what team Jake uncovers about Chucky, who’s probably not long for this world. The real work is then exacting revenge on the shadowy figure behind our assailant, whoever that snake in the grass is… Thank you @Mark Arbour for squeezing in 3 chapters in a week, most impressive!
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Interesting and fun chapter! What a treat, thank you @Mark Arbour! I liked the cliffhanger, then left us with another, hinting at a a threeway romp. Just, wow. I liked the rattlesnake comeuppance, it’s been too civilized in the CAP world for a while.
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Will finding a way to act slutty? Well color me surprised!
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What an impressive chapter! Thank you @P. E. Knapp for bringing so much joy to your readers!
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Aww, babies and protecting strays. It’s a lovely future they’re building. Marc has to console Adam as well as Aiden. I hope he’ll get some healing too. Thanks for yet another lovely chapter!
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Marc is in no nonsense mode! Old trouble finds him just when everything is going well. Adam dies the corp governance like nobody’s business and there’s a heavy wake. Wonder when the dust settles?
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Wow, the boys sure move fast. Family planning, business, then a derelict ship to top it all off! Next they’ll put the guacamole and sour cream on that 7-layer dip and we’ll get ourselves a bad boy of a serving!
