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Such a cosy moment between Hugo and Alec. This domestic bliss will not last forever, so good on the boys to make the most of it for now.
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Well, Eleanor is an anagram of lone ear, so I hope she listens to Templeman! That said, it’s getting toasty now with all the chess pieces on the table and a fine mess to sort out. I’m getting antsy to see this resolved. Wouldn’t it be nice if Sinclair had to stay below the radar, living out his days in Newark? Anagram that! Both the UK and NJ versions are dreary.
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I feared Ezra was Snagglepus, but he’s started to show some resolve. I still think that Sir Lord Mason the most inbred fits Dirk Dastardly. Muttley, of course is Sinclair.
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Hugo you dolt. See a good thing? Grab it! Interesting that the boys are in a big city, yet seeking solitude. The way they fumble about solving the greater riddle means they have lots of time for exploring their true feelings for each other. Why do I have a feeling that Mr Sinjin and other players know far more than they let on?
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If you advocate strict meritocracy in the wrong circles you certainly face an uphill battle. The in-group out-group dichotomy is very real. The wheels of economic pressures slowly grind the old notions to dust, but it’s fascinating to see how far incompetence and inherited capital can take some people. No parallels to real world events, or people, of course lest I’d be harassed by the powers that be.
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Haha, old Blighty doing what it does best - arrogantly throwing caution to the wind. It’s only important that the same old Eton mess of people lacking any perceivable skill but their family names run the show. I can’t help but notice the parallels to real world events. It’s very much an endemic problem - not exclusively a UK specialty. The Carters are both in a fine mess now. It will take massive effort to straighten this out. Fingers crossed.
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The Torsten twist was unexpected, yet welcome. I think Alarik has much to offer, and it will be good for him. Wolf is a worry, let’s see what happens.
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This is joyous! I wish you a successful recovery, sir!
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I love that they’re getting into oily misadventures. You gotta choose place and partner carefully though.
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Chapter 21: Strength vs Agility
Northerner commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 21: Strength vs Agility
Mmm, he can practice his porn tips guzzling in order to get stronger. I see what you did there, that classic cheat code was a real trip down memory lane. Now, let Shawn try the Konami code during intercourse for extra points, power up mushrooms and extra lives. UUDDLRLRBA. Might hit the prostate just right… -
Intriguing that Stoker, given a spare watch, was able to tag along. It must have a deeper meaning. Of course, he cures Hugo’s loneliness and takes him down a notch, but beyond that it feels like there’s a purpose to his presence. Plus, he’s a good lay, so at least there’s that. A multipass for time travel. Most handy.
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On the discourse of Disco - bring the boys to a circa 1950s setting, with Martin Denny’s orchestra playing a tropical lounge, booze them up real good, and kick back to see what happens. Or, expose them to jazz, soul, house… the modern world is bizarrely diverse. Or, the near state funeral of Ozzy Osbourne (RIP). Now, that, would do their heads in. It’s interesting to imagine these two prehistoric bumpkins, straight out of a Jules Verne novel, trying to make sense of modern tools like computers, disposable lighters and fashion. Now let them ingest MDMA for a total hoot.
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The steampunk turned steamy. It was high time for Hugo to get off his his high horse so good on him! It’s going to be interesting to see how these two will interact with each other from here on out. Also, we’re given some tantalizing bits of how the larger world is structured. Can’t wait to read how the guys untangle their situation.
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Lovely to see the guys really working as team, using each other for strength and support. They’ve mopped up,well and are now consolidated. Imaonder what adventures are awaiting them? As always, the kids are fine. Less to worry about. Life’s good.
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Hmm, interesting that Templeman’s got a read on Enrico, and Sinclair is misjudging things. The potential for intrigue is rising. If Enrico isn’t planning a dirty bomb - is he working with the PRC or Norks in order to get fissile material? Questions questions… maybe it’s not even nuclear? Anyway, waiting with baited breath for the next chapter to drop. Kudos!
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Was thinking out loud that Miranda probably had a devious streak as we’ve seen with Jake. Also, who’s to say that our esteemed author hasn’t cooked up an intricate scheme just to foil the obvious?
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The chessboard pieces are really flying now. Will the mercenaries be foiled, and by whom? Our Carter on the scene will have his hands full. Meanwhile, it’s fascinating to read that Russia is, for once, a productive state, given recent developments to show the contrary.
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Chapter 20: True History?
Northerner commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 20: True History?
Nerd meets jock. Will sparks erupt? Or, will our boy wonder have to think on his feat, weaseling himself out of a sticky situation? Quite the cliffhanger! The boys are now being introduced to how the world really works, and it won’t stay a campfire adventure for long, I suspect. -
Is it sister dearest all along? My money is on mother. Who knows who’s she’s in cahoots with? Both Will/Travis and Jeremy/Kris are making headway, even if it comes in squirts.
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An interesting development for sure. Who knows what the guys will do once transported. The friendship angle is a promising setup - no heavy attachments, just good support. I hope they get a bit frisky if the opportunity presents itself.
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Dream tech for any politician or their ilk. A very sinister setup, but once you roll back the curtain you’ll soon realize that the real power is usually in the hands of the most corrupt people you’re likely to come across.
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The dice is cast now, to use another metaphor. The vultures have begun to catch the smell of Enrico, but they’re not yet circling. This is really tense - I wonder how the sub will be brought back in the end - and at what cost? Good job on posting the chapter, it’s saving my sorry self some downtime at Schipol airport. Good thing I had a bunch of catching up to do. Thank you!
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Chapter 18: And Peng Makes Four
Northerner commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 18: And Peng Makes Four
And so it begins! It’s not exactly Hogwarts, so it’s interesting to see if any totalitarian brainwashing will be added to the curriculum… -
So, being a watchbearer he gets to witness places strewn across time. Wojciech is off to the races. I’d like to see what’s in store and him gaining some knowledge of the game.
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Oh wow, last I walked the streets of Cambridge the town certainly impressed me with academic gravitas. It’s delightful that it all could change due to a magical artifact. This is an intriguing beginning of an adventure. More please!
