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Bravo! I have come across (without even the shiny charm yet!) a shiny: Bronzor, one of those spiders that look like yarn...you can't miss it instead of white it's red...a venomoth, a snover, a rockruff (all three are blue)...I had a heart attack when I saw and caught a pink Dratini...meanwhile, my pregnant bestie caught a shiny dung beetle on the desert plateaus!! Instead of dung, he's rolling a ball of gold!!
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Yes, I am so proud of him and he's not even one of my characters. 😂
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Yes! Yes to all of this. Exactly. He does indeed need to evaluate what he is doing and set better goals for himself, and he will get his chance. Though, he's not going to like it.
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Yes, Michael is actually a cameo character from another story of mine, Tuesday Staff Meetings. Both stories are unrelated, but he's matured from back then and I still feel an odd proudness about that. And prophetic indeed.
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Ah, but Cove doesn't want to hold him hostage for real (trap him on occasion, yes, but hostage for life, no).
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Yes, me too! I'm glad he still has his sister, even if they're not super close. And YES, the one person that needs to hop on the Alex wagon is Ed himself. I couldn't have said that any better! Luna (the author), you reading this? 🤣
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Chapter 2- Dangerous Dimples
Thirdly commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 2- Dangerous Dimples
Oh yes, it can be a REAL struggle for some moms. Ashley's mom Leslie is gradually getting better, but it's not just postpardum depression that affects her, she also has other struggles thrown in the mix. It's been really rough for them as a family, even one that keeps its distance present day (Cove isn't cutting Ashley's mom completely out of her life or anything like that, he's taking his cues from Leslie and how ready she feels in regards to her interactions with Ashley). -
Glad you've been enjoying it so far.
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Oh, there's definitely drama. 🤣
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If I had to guess I'd say Luna wanted to keep the focus on Alex and Ed, not delving too hard into the other characters. But, if the gnomes on the ceiling were any indication, maybe Ed was a bit more like Alex in his youth than he'd ever like to admit...🤣
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Ed took a few calming breaths, and then finally knocked on the old wooden door. Wasn't it blue the last time? Ed wondered while narrowing his eyes at the flaky, dirty door frame that had dozens of paint layers over each other, the newest being a snot green. Mom would have hated this. Ed thought, remembering that green was her least favorite color and that she had even forbidden him as a teen to paint his room any shade of the color. The bastard never cared. He even wore it on purpose to pi
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The Epic of Gilgamesh in a Nutshell
Thirdly commented on Refugium's story chapter in The Epic of Gilgamesh in a Nutshell
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned... -
In his defense, Wilhem is just the kind of guy who gives off a creepy countenance but is really just a good guy. Unkempt and not the most polished, but good, nonetheless. As for where Ed is, we'll find out Wednesday! 😇
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Pssh. Ed is still gorgeous, and will always be gorgeous, even though he doesn't consider himself good looking anymore. And, at the very least, he's downright sexy in Alex's eyes. 🤣
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That's because I've been posting my friend's story Plattenbau consistently (that one is completed already) and only update Ash whenever I have the next segment properly laid out. So, my Ash chapters get hidden between Plattenbau updates. 😂
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Wilhelm's bark...appearance? is worse than his bite? 🤣
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It had taken Alex almost three weeks to finally gather up enough courage to finally confront Ed about what had happened at the party. He knew he had to apologize to the older man for his terrible behavior and that he had almost pulled on his shoes. But, regarding his confession, he was still unsure on what to do. Sure, he could have easily blamed it on the alcohol and said that he didn't mean it, but he doubted that Ed would actually believe him. Especially not after their passionate kiss.
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"No." Alex had expected everything from being laughed at to Ed kissing him passionately, to even getting punched for saying something like that. But a simple, unemotional ‘no’ was definitely not what he expected. For a few moments, all he was able to do was to blankly stare up at the big guy before asking him what exactly he meant by that and why he was rejecting his confession of love. But Ed just shrugged, seemingly indifferent to it all. "It's just how it is." He mumbled and turned
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Exactly!
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*just sitting here glad people are enjoying the criminally underrated story I also enjoyed reading* 😏 Told you, Luna.
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"Are you Alex’s dad?" A boy asked, his speech slightly slurred from having already drunk too much. Ed raised an eyebrow and then grumpily retorted "Do I look like his fucking dad?!" The dumb kid seemed stunned for a moment by the harsh response but then a cheeky grin spread across his face. "Ooooh, I get it! You are his daddy!" Ed's eyes widened in shock. He hadn't thought that anybody could ever even say something like that so publicly, let alone in such a carefree way, even wh
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@DaddydavekI hope so!
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It wasn't nearly as bad as you say it was, and I hope I caught most of them. I kept falling out of editor mode to laugh or react to what was happening as I read it, so...🤦♀️
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Was meant to be sauntered, not slandered. What an interesting typo. Thanks for catching it! 😂
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Yes. Also, no one asked how Cove knew Ash made a mess even though they used protection. But, there was indeed a mess. 🤣
