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why does everyone think Emily will move... sure she had an interview but was it job related?
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He could have had a melt down but he is moving forward. It could come back to haunt him later, you never know. So New York seem like a possibility but we shall see what happens next.
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TJ is learning you could say and he''s falling head over heels for J.C. We will see the twins more soon. TJ will be growing his group of friends too in the very next chapter
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Emily will not be agency and Beau will know soon enough. They guys are smart but they are down to earth. Yes the Doc will resurface... we know the who (a music group duh!) and now we need the when,why and how. Yes our boys are progressing very nicely. I am letting TJ move forward. He's got a new sense of freedom.
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We will see.
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He's making shoes I haven't decided when he will reappear yet but he is not dead. I had Audrey and Seymour's names picked out before I started this... I've never seen the whole movie. My parents and I were talking about it a few weeks ago.... TJ knows now what happened but it doesn't hold him back. He has a bit of fun in the next chapter. "Feed me Seymour" ::in my audrey voice::
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I sat and listened to Uncle Brayden tell me what happened to Dylan and Sebastian. “So they are gone?” I asked “Yes and they won’t harm anyone ever again.” “I still don’t believe this.” “It’s the truth TJ, once we learned what happened to you and as your older brothers we had to get you justice.” Jordan said “So you just went out and killed them?” “No, we were dispatched to do so. I know this makes no sense but they had to be taken out. Between their molesting kids and dru
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::erases all mention of the cone of silence:: Well what about 99? A good name for CC? lol
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Not going to lie... I was thinking about that as I wrote it.
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He does and it's a door I may close for good.
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That's my specialty
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He is coming around and moving forward which is a huge thing. We get an abbreviated summer in the next chapter.
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I made it through Columbus Circle and all I heard was horns as I dashed across the street. I had just gotten inside the park when I was tackled to ground by someone. “Ok Kellan let him up.” Uncle Brayden shouted “You are fast TJ, but not fast enough.” Kellan said with a smirk “Dude, how did you dodge all those cars in the circle. I was sure you’d have gotten hit” Jordan said “Boys go back to the restaurant and tell Emily I have TJ.” Uncle Brayden said “Don’t even think about
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TJ will be doing better very soon. I promise. He is learning that their are more and more lies around him. I do a time jump in 18 to get him to college. He is doing better at that point. It's their father's place. Jack is a very successful lawyer don't forget that. I had found a two story place for around $36 Million a few months ago and tried like hell to get my friend to buy it. I told him I would rent the in-law suit for $5 a month He didn't think I was funny and he could have afforded the place but wants a brownstone in a specific place. He is why I am very familiar with this part of the city.
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He avoids getting hit that is the start of 17. He learns about the additional family in 18. That area of NYC is very congested and busy so at that time of day there would tons of cars to avoid. I've seen people run out into the street and narrowly miss getting struck.
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TJ will learn their fate by chapter 18. We will also jump to him starting school.
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I rewrote the middle part based off feedback. I am filling in some gaps that we will NOT see Dylan or Sebastian again. Dylan's mom has a heart and is concerned that TJ gets the help he needs. TJ's dad worked for the Army but moonlighted with the CIA, Brayden was CIA and so are Kellan and Jordan. A lot of this plays into who TJ is. He is having a hard time with a relationship because he was raped. He is trying to move on but is stuck in second gear. I promise by chapter 18 things will get back on track as we will Jump to TJ and J.C being at school.
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Nothing publicly will come out BUT wait for the end of next chapter. Its got more curves mountain road.
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I'm glad someone was on hand to revive you. I wanted to give Jeff someone to be with. I am not sure where Ron is going with Dancing but this is what I have happening. I know from how Ron has written Dancing he probably has a lot of people wonder if there is any straight people in the school so I made a joke about it. So think about this. "I saw Grayson and Beau talking and Beau got this huge smile and patted G on the shoulder." What could they be talking about and how would that upset TJ. It is address in the next chapter. After TJ avoids being run over that is.
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No you were not. It made sense to me but if my readers can't follow then it does no good. Thank you for letting me know.
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Ok... I changed it again. Let me know if reads smoother
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Re-read the section and let me know what you think.
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Ok let me add some clarity to that part. I figured it was obvious that they took out Dylan and Sebastian The people who did it was Kellan and Jordan
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The conversation between Emily and Brayden?
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Which part?
