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MrM

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  1. Éirinn go Brách https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Be3XeghxjgM
  2. Joraan sat back and looked at Moira for long moments. Something in his eyes opened something up in Moira to feelings. Joraan was more affected by all this than he had been letting on…Moira could feel this now. “I have a way of telling you better than just description, if you will allow me.” Joraan said leaning forward, holding Moira’s gaze. Moira acknowledged with a ‘go ahead’ gesture…eager to understand. From somewhere, Moira could not fathom where, Joraan produced a lyre. I
  3. Saving Private Ryan Just about every scene in that film punched me in the gut. Nothing gets me going more than when I see our Men in Service laying it down for us. My family has lost too many to war. It really brings up so many emotions and Saving Private Ryan was and is possibly the greatest war film ever made. It is a one nightmare after another. Its just....awful. American Sniper I was so shocked by the end. I didn't know that had happened...and after all he went through! Also a lot of his devestating experiences he had when he was doing his job. Just gut wrenching!
  4. Hehehe! That might be fun.
  5. MrM

    That Guy

    Being in the same boat as you James, I tend to act similarly. I consider any kid that needs help as my personal responsibility if they aren't getting the help they need. They all become my kids in a way.
  6. Yes...wolves circling and circling one another.Yes...Jimmy is a lot of fun.
  7. MrM

    Tahoe

    Oh good! I got your attention! Yes...you are supposed to dislike Brian right now. He's 'rough' right now at the beginning. You will find things starting to shift and I set up the drug and self-abuse angle just for the purpose of roughing him up so that he can be smoothed out. More interplay is coming as you will see.
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    Tahoe

    LOL...my last comment on Chapter 2 was meant for this comment, MrR. I'm glad you like where the story is going. True...they both need to have the rough edges spanked off of them.
  9. I liken it to two wolves meeting for the first time and circling.
  10. Trust me MrR. They've started...boy have they started.
  11. MrM

    Tahoe

    Geemeedee, Perfect! Just what I am looking for and I am not being sarcastic! I am pulling some of this out an oriface in my lower posterior so I need the reality check. I shall, in future chapters: 1: Refer to SF as The City when Brian talks about it. 2: Make mention as to why Brian is kind of pivoting right now and not engaging in the amount of effort and time it really takes to enter neuroscience. The idea that he is now thinking of competing professionally as a cross-country skier can forshadow these developments. Thanks by the way, you just bought me a chapter! 3: lets just say that Sabrina has a little Jame Gumb in her from Silence of the Lambs.
  12. ~~~~~~ Brian I pull in to the parking lot at the Auburn Ski Camp lodge. I'm glad the parking's good and wide. My Land Rover is big and I hate 'compact' spaces. I usually have to take up two compact spaces, which pisses parking attendants off because it challenges their vast authority. Fucking idiocy. The parking companies always manage to hire complete douche nozzles as parking attendants. That's why they lose money from no one parking in their shit unless they absolutely have to. The lod
  13. MrM

    Chapter 41

    Its true! I've never felt more comfortable than with a bunch of 'freeks' who were completely comfortable with who they are and what they want out of life. On the other hand, I get really nervous when I'm with a bunch of pretentious idiots uncomfortable in their own skin.
  14. Your teenie bopper have SO much more fun than I ever had at that age.
  15. I have suspisioned for a while now that the increase in Gay identifying men and women may be a function of two variables. n = Greater acceptance and tolerance of the orientation x = (controversial) A phenomenon being generated as a force of natural population control...not man made.
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    Chapter 1

    Ohhhh....Comsie. This story just breaks my heart. I can only hope that God is more merciful than this to one who's life was so broken through no fault of his own. Probably won't be any more to the story, but this vingette was potent beyond any story I've read in a long long time. Well done...
  17. The cute factor is what sold him. Hopefully, his ease at fame doesn't alienate him from a jealous entertainment industry that hates that a teenaged girl can 'discover' stars better than they can.
  18. "They writhed together like a Chinese finger trap.” *cries*
  19. I'm saving my fantasy one for a bit, Scotty. It might be publishable as a selling novel one day. I've never seen its subject matter done seriously before so I may have come up with something fairly unique. My poem 'Lost Sentinels' is taken from the subject matter of this story. At any rate...I have no intention of stopping Snowflake now. I just wanted to know how ratings worked here. As I have said, many websites use Raings as a default sort. Things rated low at the outset are immediately buried. Yelp is a big offender of this and it loses places business. Anyway...thanks again for Beta Reading and for the encouragement! ❤️
  20. If what the Religious Right said was true and God delivered AIDS to this world....then I believe it came down in His tears. Queerlings remember to be safe....and remember those that didn't know and paid the price. ....since we were doing Elton John songs. This one is the saddest of all songs for our community.
  21. Everyone deserves a chance to walk with everyone else... Amen See Boyhood if you haven't seen it already. Its simple and it grows on you...and then claims you.
  22. Incubus
  23. Telegraph
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