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  1. CLJobe

    The Pirate

    A pirate's lair
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    Chapter 13

    Thanks
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    Chapter 13

    Maybe we should get together except we would probably forget right after the door closed
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    Chapter 9

    Great, appreciate your comments . I hope you enjoy the rest of my story.
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    Chapter 14

    Thank you for reading it.
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    Chapter 14

    Thanks. If all of us help just one child, in some manner, bringing a smile to their face, we would have made a big start.
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    Chapter 14

    You knew I was joking. I'll send you one in your dreams, then you can go to the fairs in dream land. They say that is a beautiful place with beautiful people
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    Chapter 14

    Thank you. I appreciate your comments. New story up tonight
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    Chapter 14

    Thanks, I'm glad you have enjoyed this story. Now go out and buy a food truck,😉
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    Chapter 14

    I have two short ones while a longer one is being reviewed. I received a lot of comments concerning spelling and other grammatical errors. Sometimes Grammarly messes up, just like us humans. I'll post a new short story tonight
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    Chapter 14

    Thank you
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    Chapter 8

    Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying this story
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    Chapter 7

    Thanks, I'll take loyalty over duty any day.
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    Chapter 13

    Funny, why is it you have to be old to have humor. I have no problem making jokes about myself but at 16, I would never do such a thing. Life has a way of mellowing us out. They called it a thick skin but that isn't true, it is acceptance of ourselves
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    Chapter 14

    Thank you for reading and commenting. I agree, I'm sure there are similar examples in this world. I couldn't live in a world without love, caring, acceptance and charity toward those who are hurting because of not being accepted for who they are.
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    Chapter 14

    Yes, he has shown when others thought these boys were worthless, he had showed these boys had exceptional abilities. Thanks for reading and writing the review.
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    Chapter 14

    A food truck, if properly serviced should last. Being at the Park he probably could leave it parked but he would have to give up the fairs. I think Jim took good care of that truck, regular service helped a lot. No, Jim didn't adopt JimJim, being the age difference, and the concern Jim showed to Jim Jim, he adopted Jim, a little reverse to tradition. Thanks for reading my story and commenting
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    Chapter 14

    Jim was cleaning the food truck after serving dinner. Andre was taking left over food to the kitchen where the boys would finish it off for their dinner. As Jim was cleaning, he was thinking, “I can’t believe I’ll be 50 tomorrow.” He looked around the food truck and it looked like he had just brought it home. He was proud that for 32 years he was doing what he loved best, preparing food for satisfied customers. “Jim, you coming to dinner? If you are, you better hurry as the boys don’t plan o
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    Chapter 13

    The last chapter coming
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    Chapter 13

    I'm sorry, I forgot to post. My 83 year old mind slips up now and then
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    Chapter 13

    Karma usually bites you in the ass.
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    Chapter 13

    Thanks, Thanks for the advice, be sure I take these comments very seriously.
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    Simba Ch 23

    Living on a water tree house. Unusual but I'd agree that the movement of the water would tend to give you a good sleep. Interesting idea, good chapter
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    Chapter 13

    I had to go back and read what I wrote, I did indeed misspell fair, the problem is my computer likes to play with me. Sometimes when I begin to type in a word, it likes to finish the word. However, when I read this story, I did miss the fare. I have enjoyed your comments, we'll see what you do on future stories.
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