The chapter title made me wonder if new travails were about to afflict the farm and our two heroes. Instead, you wrote us a fine, beautiful scene, a conversation that needed to happen. Thank you.
Tomas and Fletcher are fun characters to write and create for. I’m only sorry it took me so long to bring their stories back to my pen. Thanks very much for reading!
I could not agree more. We need far more of Carlos, and much less cultural direction from above. He wasn’t the biggest fan of my poetic work, but I think he might have liked these.
i.
You can talk
about Jesus and sin
and we must watch you pray at the game,
grooming impressionable youngsters for your faith;
yet you say we must remain silent
and hide our pride away
from your eyes.
ii.
Our story
is not for you to write,
or edit according to your whim;
it’s not wet clay to shape or shatter as you please,
but long engraved on true hearts that shine
with the same pure, bright flame
as your own.
iii.
You’re very welcome! I enjoyed returning to these characters after a long spell away from them. Tomas has indeed seen his life changed more than he ever hoped for or imagined. After the holidays, I shall have to think on what’s next for them.
The family is religious in my background notes; the parents emigrated, bringing rich traditions with them. As a younger man, Tomas felt the need to connect to these via Catholicism as a way of making himself feel worthy. His seminary experience only served to amplify his feelings of unworthiness. Tomas just discovered that his mom and siblings are more fiercely loyal to family, and specifically in this instance to himself. It’s a very joyous discovery. Thanks very much for your comments and for reading!
It’s a series of snapshot stories; each builds a bit on the previous ones. They kind of grew, and then I got involved in other matters. It was fun to return to these characters. Thanks for giving this a try.
Thank you very much for reading this addition before your daylight fades. I'm glad you thought it fit the season as I did. I'm sure the other chapters will keep until bedtime!