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  1. Irene is fun to encounter in my imagination. Perhaps she realizes that while Heinrich hired her and pays her, Rick is the real backbone of the business. Rita wasn’t prepared for her, that’s for sure. Neither was she ready to hear about the railroads in exhaustive detail from Harold. Hope your Christmas was lovely - your comments certainly brightened mine!
  2. I wish you a wonderful Christmas too! Your comments are a lovely present to unwrap. I am glad the cookout was evocative to bring you July warmth in midwinter, and to make you hungry. Rick concentrated on letting Irene and Harold neutralize Rita while his father seethes with indigestion. What did the old man think, that they’d get to wedding planning or something? Thanks so much for reading!
  3. I enjoyed this story very much. Thank you for bringing it to life in my imagination.
  4. Irene’s not one to keep her opinions to herself, so it must gratify Rick to know she’s in his corner. She’s certain to give Senior an earful. Doubt the old man will be much chastened though. Thanks for your comments. Have a lovely holiday!
  5. Indeed, a leaky rowboat with a broken oar might be perfect. Not sure if she’d set foot in one, though. Thanks for reading! Have a lovely holiday!
  6. Perhaps we just heard the first faint strains of the early measures. Excellent analogy. Thanks for reading and may the holidays be bright.
  7. Rick got to put Rita in a bind without having to corner her himself. While it’s not a huge victory, Rick can feel satisfied in her discomfiture and in his father’s irritation. He has managed to get a small measure of revenge, perhaps. Heinrich Senior can let his stomach churn over the weekend, and Rick can feign complete innocence. My great thanks for reading, and my best wishes for a nice holiday.
  8. A kind of music sounded through the Ernst and Son machine shop. Rick hummed aloud. It might or might not have been an old Tammy Wynette tune, “Stand By Your Man.” His mother had liked that song, and it stuck with him. Whether he was off key mattered very little right at that moment. Cleaning the shop was a joy; his heart skipped a little as he made everything tidy for the arrival of Heinrich Senior. Memories of the previous night replayed themselves in Rick’s head. Gus held my hand. Y
  9. Merry Christmas to you, brother
  10. If I could sit with you on Christmas Day for just a fraction of the afternoon and laugh at bits of wrapping paper strewn across the floor, and ribbons gone astray, inhaling scents to tickle the gourmet, from which no nose or stomach is immune, enough to make the toughest grumbler swoon, and dissipate the everlasting grey; I’d save for you my very favorite joke, the one that’s guaranteed to make you smile, as maple longs snap merrily in smoke perhaps you’d take a hug in friendly style, the warmer, brighter spirits to convoke - if I could only sit with you a while.
  11. Parker Owens

    Chapter 6

    Thanks for this story. It was quite lovely. I enjoyed the ending, though I also felt a pang for Adrian.
  12. Boone and Coy have let their tensions dissipate with the excitement of investigating a new town and looking to buy land. The people they’ve met so far seem okay, but time will tell. The boys are right to treat everyone with caution and wariness. In the meantime, Boone and Coy can go examine land for themselves, knowing they don’t have to go any farther. Great chapter!
  13. Could Keith come to my house to help me with the meringue mushrooms to decorate my buche de Noel?
  14. You are most kind. Authors here live for just such encouraging words as yours. Many thanks!
  15. Parker Owens

    A Little Heat

    I quite agree. Edward has deep, deep issues that Adrian seems unable to help the man deal with. He should cut Edward off.
  16. I’m very glad you liked this Rita-free chapter. Rick certainly did, and I’m sure he’ll remember the experience for a very long time. Thanks very much for your encouraging words and thoughts.
  17. My cars, regardless of size, age, gravitas, are called “little car.” This included my first, an enormous 1973 Mercury Monterey, which steered like an aircraft carrier.
  18. I’m enjoying this series immensely. Thank you!
  19. Parker Owens

    Duetti

    Thank you so very much for your encouraging comments. I’m glad you enjoyed the chapter. Jared’s wholly unexpected response to the bikers could shift Rick’s view of the world, perhaps. Thanks again for reading!
  20. Sort of like hurricane categories? Warnings for Category-3 Heinrich Senior landfall are now in effect for Eagle Lake...
  21. Sometimes the woods can hold a symphony, for those who can hear it. Gus was enchanted. Rick won’t forget this day, not a chance. I’m glad you weren’t out off by all the detail. Sometimes it’s hard to know if it’s getting to be too much. Many thanks for your thoughts and for reading!
  22. Parker Owens

    Memorabilia

    Jason’s story is heartbreaking. You want to reach out and make it better somehow. But you’ve left the door ajar for hope, which I appreciated. Well done.
  23. Rick might find that altogether too good to be true. But it seems as if they’re firmly friends, at least. Thanks for your thoughts and for reading this chapter!
  24. The whole of Independence Day took three chapters to write, but by the end of the day, Gus and Rick have established a firm friendship. Now if only Rick can believe in it. Yes, there are specters still lurking, even in bright, sunny, Eagle Lake. I’m glad you liked this chapter. Thank you very much for reading!
  25. How could Marta not fall for a gear head and mechanic like Jared? And the boy must be taken by the unusual Marta, too. Rick has been a goner for a while, now; maybe the man is growing on Gus. He stayed for fireworks, after all. I think you’re right that Zoltan and Magda must be unsettled by what they returned to find; Eagle Lake fireworks aren’t their usual milieu. But the champagne seemed good with bratwurst. Thanks for your thoughts and for re-reading the chapter!
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