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Rick wasn't ready to encounter Willy, even though he appears sorely abused by the passage of time. Gus must wonder what chased Rick out of the bank. He seems like a nice guy, and may be forgiving of Rick's quick exit. Heinrich is indeed an old, cantankerous ass. He seems to have shed redeeming qualities as he has aged,which is not a pretty sight. Thank you for your reflections and for reading. Have a wonderful New Year!
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I'm very glad you found so much to think about in this chapter. Senior certainly seems to have been a difficult husband and father to live with. Trudy and he seem to get along, but perhaps that's because she has her own money. It's hard to feel sorry for Heinrich, but I can at least understand forgetting one's age and working too hard. Not working for Rita may not be a viable alternative, as long as Heinrich continues to insist that she's going to be his new daughter-in-law. You're right that there seems to be a lot of financial activity that concerns Rick, but from which he gets no benefit. That hardly bodes well for his continued well-being, even if he manages to see the Rita threat off. Thank you so much for reading, and for your thoughts! Happy New Year!
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Time has certainly transformed Willy Kohler. The years appear to have been kinder to Rick. Even so, Rick wasn't in any frame of mind to face Willy at the bank, or anyplace else that day. Heinrich Senior's withdrawl/transfer is a regular practice, and the old man has always been prudent, even as he pinches his pennies. As for the music festival, Rick seemed intent on going, no matter what - that is until SexyHunk made an appearance. Thanks very much for your thoughts, and hope your New Year is wonderful.
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Thank you! And may yours be wonderful, too.
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Your characterization of Heinrich Senior in three words is perfect. Rita's presence at the closing is natural; she brokered the sale as both buyer's and seller's agent. Her commission will be substantial. Rick was not ready to face his demon, and certainly not at the bank. Thank you for your response! Hope your New Year is happy!
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Indeed, indeed. Rick was not prepared to face his demon in the bank. Thanks for continuing to read the story. Happy New Year to you!
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Rick's thought that the old man is feeling sore and aching after his exertions is probably right. But it would take more than a heavy day of work to send Heinrich to the hospital, cantankerous cuss that he is. Thank you for reading! May your New Year be happy and joyous.
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Rita brokered the rental for Cedarcrest with Zoltan and Magda, with an option to buy. It appears they were taken enough with the old lodge that they wanted to buy; as broker for the buyers, she would want to be at the closing. You're quite right, though - Rita seems to have many strands in her web. Thank you for reading, and I hope you have a lovely New Year.
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“How the hell could you let this happen, boy?” Heinrich Ernst was having a bad morning. “Let what happen?” Rick shot back. “You know damn well what I mean. When we close the books at the end of June, there’s not supposed to be any accounts due. Your girlfriend –” “Dad, the accountant told me that’s almost impossible. Practically every normal business has something due at the end of the year.” “Don’t try to sidestep the issue, boy. The point is to start every new fiscal year c
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It was not much different in my place and time.
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Chapter 16 Explorations
Parker Owens commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 16 Explorations
Coy and Boone finally stopped circling long enough to figure out how to be themselves together. You pictured this beautifully. I can imagine them as fully happy now. That’s a lovely present in itself.- 102 comments
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Three points of view, three very separate understandings of reality. How differently they each color the events described. You portray these very well. I wonder what Margaret will do with Gary after he turns sixteen. And will Richard be as ineffectual as the years pass? I fear for poor Karl.
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Yes, it was such a sweet occasion for Rick, wasn’t it? Thanks for reading! Hope your holiday is wonderful.
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Did you enjoy Heinrich getting something completely other than what he expected? Rick played his cards perfectly, and escaped the event with the pleasure of watching Rita get skewered and Heinrich seethe, all while having completely plausible deniability. Hope you have a lovely Christmas!
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Patience and ignoring Heinrich has always worked for Rick in the past. By now, he has honed his resistance skills to a fine edge. Yet Heinrich must plan on winning this siege. Thanks so much for your thoughts. Have a wonderful holidays
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Did you enjoy Irene skewering Rita? Perhaps we just saw her deflate a little. I wish you and yours a wonderful holiday!
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And Merry Christmas to you, too, Tony. Thank you!
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Irene is fun to encounter in my imagination. Perhaps she realizes that while Heinrich hired her and pays her, Rick is the real backbone of the business. Rita wasn’t prepared for her, that’s for sure. Neither was she ready to hear about the railroads in exhaustive detail from Harold. Hope your Christmas was lovely - your comments certainly brightened mine!
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I wish you a wonderful Christmas too! Your comments are a lovely present to unwrap. I am glad the cookout was evocative to bring you July warmth in midwinter, and to make you hungry. Rick concentrated on letting Irene and Harold neutralize Rita while his father seethes with indigestion. What did the old man think, that they’d get to wedding planning or something? Thanks so much for reading!
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I enjoyed this story very much. Thank you for bringing it to life in my imagination.
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Irene’s not one to keep her opinions to herself, so it must gratify Rick to know she’s in his corner. She’s certain to give Senior an earful. Doubt the old man will be much chastened though. Thanks for your comments. Have a lovely holiday!
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Indeed, a leaky rowboat with a broken oar might be perfect. Not sure if she’d set foot in one, though. Thanks for reading! Have a lovely holiday!
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Perhaps we just heard the first faint strains of the early measures. Excellent analogy. Thanks for reading and may the holidays be bright.
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Rick got to put Rita in a bind without having to corner her himself. While it’s not a huge victory, Rick can feel satisfied in her discomfiture and in his father’s irritation. He has managed to get a small measure of revenge, perhaps. Heinrich Senior can let his stomach churn over the weekend, and Rick can feign complete innocence. My great thanks for reading, and my best wishes for a nice holiday.
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A kind of music sounded through the Ernst and Son machine shop. Rick hummed aloud. It might or might not have been an old Tammy Wynette tune, “Stand By Your Man.” His mother had liked that song, and it stuck with him. Whether he was off key mattered very little right at that moment. Cleaning the shop was a joy; his heart skipped a little as he made everything tidy for the arrival of Heinrich Senior. Memories of the previous night replayed themselves in Rick’s head. Gus held my hand. Y
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