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  1. Butcher56

    Chapter 1

    I think Marc is going to be the only person who is going to be able to captain any ship that his family builds as he keeps getting training for something or other. He has his captain’s certification now but I don’t think it’s for the bigger ships. He has been training with the CONFED Navy and been to Officer Training School and he even stayed longer to complete his training in battlefield training and he also got to train the Navy crews in the jump techniques so they would know how to use them properly when they were needed. Some of the people didn’t like the fact that he was the one who was training them until they were told that he was the best person to do it because of the fact that he spent so much time in the asteroid belt and it was his family that built the ship they were on with his ideas to help them with the jumps.
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    Chapter 41 S2

    I’m glad that Devin is out of the hospital and doing better. I’m glad that he allowed his mom to help him with some things that he needed help with other than his nightly routine. Now Mac has to go talk to his faculty advisor to see if Devin can take his classes remotely so he doesn’t lose the semester and he also has to let the professor at the dog park know that he won’t be coming for a while as well as get to his own classes and then get the work from the classes he missed the day Devin was released from the hospital.
  3. I’m glad that Ralph has finally stood his ground and told his father exactly how he feels about the way things are going to be from now on. He tried for years to be the way they wanted him to be but he just couldn’t do it anymore. No matter what he did they weren’t happy about his choices always having something to say about it, he finally told his father that he was going to live his life the way he wants to and not the way they want it to be. He has a successful business they’re not happy about it but he said too bad they don’t like that he has a boyfriend either but he’s not going to do anything about it because they don’t like it. Way to go Ralph!
  4. Such a sad story but so well written. I think it covered the fact that the war that started on October 7, 2023 changed so many lives in so many ways it’s left a lot of death and suffering for many people who may never recover from it.
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    Chapter 39 S2

    I hope Devin is going to be alright after getting hit in the head by the branch. I’m glad that Mac was there with him so he got to him quickly and called for an ambulance because he was unconscious and he was bleeding from his head wound.
  6. I’m glad that things turned out well for the Nelson family after the adoption ceremony for the kids that made them true Nelson’s, then 2 years later the wedding ceremony between their newdad as they call him and Skylar ‘Lewis who they call newpop. They are all very happy and very proud of their new family now that they don’t have to worry about their old parents anymore.
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    Quack, Quack

    I guess that’s one way of getting the duct tape off of your dick, piss it off. Why any guy would want to duct tape his dick to make it bigger is beyond me for one thing it’s not going to make it any bigger than it already is.
  8. This was a powerful chapter with a lot of danger to a lot of people. With the rockets being fired at so many locations at once and the fact that there were so many casualties and hostages taken. The friends of those who were in Israel are now all back in New York to offer their support for each other as they wait for news of their friends in Israel, they know that one was kidnapped by Hamas fighters.
  9. It seems to me that the Governor General needs to be more careful about what she says around the ambassador from Amixorp. Since the change of ambassadors has been made no one in the Australian government knew about it until now, so when the Governor General said take me to your leader ambassador Henderson replied as you wish, she tapped her watch and away they went. Brett is away from earth now for two years so he can get additional training in diplomacy and such things as well as taking advantage of additional training in space craft. Thanks for the great story so far and I’m looking forward to the next part of this story when it comes out. I always enjoy reading the stories that you write.
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    Chapter 12

    I don’t think this is going to stop Kaylec from going after Q or Jacob just because the council of nine said that he is not allowed to go near them because of the things he’s already done without permission from anyone above him, plus the fact that he brought the prince of the Nave into their property thinking that he was going to be the way to eliminate Q in order for him to be put back in charge of the Nave which he claims he is rightfully entitled to. After the meeting with Zenial, Jacob knew he had made the right decision to not link with Sunny, who knows what would have happened if he had.
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    Chapter 8

    Jacob has been through a lot lately and he still hasn’t recovered all of his powers yet after finding out that he’s a Skai. He’s learned a lot from his new brothers who have told him why Kaylec is so mad at Q and him, it seems like Q killed his lover is a battle that Kaylec was the one who planned the whole battle to kill Kyrios and then the Nave showed up and killed his lover due to the fact that he went after Q even though he was told not to take him on himself. Jacob has decided to go back to school and he has found all his belongings are now back in his dorm room.
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    Chapter 15

    This story has taken a lot of different paths and has been a great read so far. I hope Jacob can find the answer to his past life before he showed up in the body of a 10 year old boy alone in the woods. He pledges to The Brother Hood and then finds out all kinds of weird things start happening around him that he can’t explain and then he starts to figure things out himself by accident . Then he becomes the little to the head of the house and he starts to figure out more things although he is still confused by it all. Now he’s finding out exactly what Q is after he was attacked in the mall.
  13. This was a very good story about how a boy wound up on a porch one day and he turned out to be the nephew of the man who lived there. He had been thrown out of his home by his parents for having accidents that caused things to either get broken or burned and he was abused by them for it although it didn’t show because there weren’t any marks on his body. He was the lucky one his older brother and sister had gotten the worst of the abuse from their parents because they had been subjected to sexual abuse. Their uncle was smart enough to get ahold of his brother and make arrangements with him to help him get a house big enough for him and the three kids to live together after the parents were taken to jail and it was found out about the sexual abuse. He was able to adopt the kids and they all became very successful in their careers that they chose with two of them getting married and having families of their own and the other one staying single due to the fact that any girl he dated started reminding him of his mother and he couldn’t take that. I’m glad that I read the story it made me think about the fact that the uncle did what he did because of the way he was treated by the kids mom when he was a teenager and they had lost their parents, the kids mom was his sister and after she kicked him out of her house he lost all respect for her and her husband. Neither parent survived very long the dad died nearly 8 years after being sentenced to life imprisonment with the possibility of parole after 35 years, all the beatings he took before he was sentenced were too much for his body and he died from apparent natural causes. The mom after she suffered her beating and was hospitalized she lived for 7 years not really knowing anything about anything before she died from complications. The aunt who was the sister of the dad was killed in prison after the other prisoners found out what she was in prison for. The uncle married a man who made him happy and the kids liked him as well. I think the story turned out great.
  14. Butcher56

    Forgiveness

    This was a great story, it’s sad that Connor was kicked out of his home because he was suspected of being a werewolf without any evidence of proof. He’s with Soren now and I think between the two of them they’ll make it.
  15. Butcher56

    Epilogue

    This was a great story, I loved the way you wrote it. The Baxter boys were in a bad spot in the beginning and then they were going past a construction site and they were taunted by some of the crew there. As they were trying to pass the gate the way was blocked by 3 big men who wouldn’t let them pass by. Max being the biggest one of the 3 took it upon himself to make sure that the boys were safe and that Michael would be locked at to determine what was making him sick, it was determined that he had pneumonia and needed to be taken to the hospital for treatment, Charlie wound up staying with Max and his family while Michael was in the hospital. Through the time he was in the hospital he had befriended a man who had no one visiting him so he started sharing some of the food that Stacy brought him. Harry was the man, one night he had a heart attack and was transferred to the ICU for treatment. When he was released from the hospital Michael and Charlie moved in with him to care for him and they became a family and made it a permanent thing. Michael has gone back to college and is performing in clubs to help with his expenses, Charlie is a automotive technician at a shop owned by Stacy’s brother which is where he did the work to restore the mini cooper s that Harry had bought for his son although he never got to use it because he had died.
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