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  1. Butcher56

    BF Chapter 33

    I'm sorry to see such a great story come to an end. This story started out with Anton living with his father and was under the impression that his mother wanted nothing to do with him. Then Anton meets Simon who starts talking to him about how his grandfather knows Anton's grandfather and that they were very close friends, and that Isaac had the catamaran that Anton and his grandfather started rebuilding. After awhile Isaac finds Anton's grandfather in a nursing home for dementia patients, only he didn't have dementia he was suffering from amnesia, Anton's grandfather is released from the home and moved in with Isaac and eventually found Anton's mother and half brothers. Anton's mother had just recently lost her husband and father to Neale and Jedd in a trucking accident, only it turns out that it wasn't an accident as it was determined that the vehicle had been tampered with. Any way as time goes on a lot goes on as they're targeted by a drug cartel who doesn't want some information released as it would put their business in jeopardy. I'm glad that Anton made it back after being gone for two and a half years with no memory as to who he is but he eventually saw his old research vessel and that triggered his brain to remember who he was. I hope that this time he stays around, for the sake of his family and friends who are also employees in Hamilton Charters. Thank you for writing such a great story about a wonderful young man who has to fight like hell to get to where he is now. I hope that the company comes back to life after almost shutting down for good, this way people will know that everything is going well for Anton and his family. It was sad hearing that Issac passed away rather suddenly from a stroke I’m sure that was a hard thing for Jasper, Anita, their sons, Simon, Marcus, Neale, Jedd and the rest of the crew and employees who knew him.
  2. Butcher56

    BF Chapter 32

    I agree that we finally have closure on Mathew and that he's a paramedic in Perth. I doubt that Roey or Emma have forgotten Anton and will be very happy to see him after so long. I hope that Anton showing back up after 2 1/2 years doesn't cause another heart attack for his grandfather, due to the fact that he's had so many medical issues already. I think they'll have a better business with just the 1 yacht, since the catamaran was sold. It will probably be better for Neale and Jedd to have Anton home again, hopefully he won't take off again. I loved this chapter along with all the others, it's a really great story.
  3. Butcher56

    BF Chapter 31

    I'm glad that Anton finally got his memory back and that he's back in Australia. His grandfather has the boys who have been dealing with the loss of their brother, now 2 1/2 years later he finally got his memory back and has been hiding out on the trimaran and then decided to play a joke on Simon and Finn, to which Finn fainted twice. I hope that Anton will take the time to go home and see his grandfather and brothers. Neale will be close to 18 years old now. I hope that Anton will get in touch with Jasper and Anita as well. Another great chapter in the story of Anton and his friends and family.
  4. Butcher56

    We Are Family

    I'm glad that this story continues for awhile, I love the story and the charters in it. The way that the characters just interact with each other it's like they know what is needed to be said or done when the time is right. I really like how Devon can get people to open up and tell him about what they're feeling at the moment. Each character has their own strengths and weaknesses, such as Robert who is struggling with the fact that his friend was attacked and they're both being held in the caverns and not allowed to contact anyone on the outside, Devon just went over to the table they were sitting at and spoke to both Robert and Marty as well as listened to them, Robert was upset because he thought he was going to miss out on the opportunity of becoming a big time CEO of a fortune 500 company. Both Robert and Marty were told that the VUN is doing everything they can to get everyone home again they just need more time to get the story about what happened in Transylvania at Dracula's castle to be such that when everyone goes home they'll be able to say that they were attacked and then they were held in quarantine for awhile to make sure that they were healing from the attack and make it appear to be some kind of medical reason. I hope that this story continues on more and more. Thanks for writing this amazing story.
  5. Butcher56

    The RIS

    Eric I'll say this about the response you gave to back2basics, I hope that by writing these great stories that you're keeping Daniel's memory alive that as you said "by making him a vampire he doesn't die and we'll be together forever" , I hope that you'll always have Daniel in your heart. In this chapter the VUN has now found a possible ally in the Romanian Intelligence Service or RIS as the agent Vasil says. This was possible because of Alin who knew Vasil from a previous encounter, Vasil was investigating a murder who had been completely drained of his blood, Vasil found Alin feeding off of a cow and almost shot him. Alin helped Vasil with that case and a couple of others, so when Alin saw the broadcast about the attack he knew who to contact for help. I like the way Dragon kept putting Robert in his place when Robert kept whining about having to get back to the United States so he could resume his life because he wasn't the one who was bitten, Dragon told him that he was to sit down and shut up to give them time to figure out how to get the people who were bitten back to where they came from but also to be able to keep them on the formula. I loved this chapter as well as the story and can't wait to read more about the characters and whether or not they're able to get the help they need from other countries.
  6. I have to agree with all of the other posts and that Don & Sue are not going to be the best parents for Robbie they're both homophobic. Sue started out being nice to Robbie about him being gay and now that her family was there she goes off on him. I hope that Robbie can get out of the deal with Don and Sue about the adoption and also be able to get away from them as it's not going to be a very good place for Robbie to be staying since everyone is turning homophobic. I'm hoping upon hope that this situation will get better as time goes on. Alex has me worried because he tends to do things without thought to the other person, just like what he did for Robbie when they were together. I love the story and can't wait to read what happens next for Robbie.
  7. Butcher56

    BF Chapter 29

    I agree that Quokka has written in that the crew rescued Mathew and Anton was told by Jasper that he had rescued Mathew and now had him on the catamaran. Anton has done it again took off with no thoughts about his brothers or the pets. And now Anton's on a cargo ship bound for Malaysia to drop off a load of scrap metal to be recycled metal with no memory of who he is but he knows about navigation and knew that the ship wouldn't reach Malaysia for 5 days. I hope that Anton will finally remember who he is and that he has family and friends that will miss him. As far as Anton's anger issues I agree that he needs to get some professional help.
  8. Butcher56

    Chapter 45

    I'm inclined to believe that in the case of Mr Crappa Will & Liam would be more mischievous than they were at 14. I hope that the coaches will be able to work it out so that Liam can be a student coach for the baseball season, that way he won't miss being in the game or on the team. Liam said he might be able to bring Ollie up to speed with pitching so the team could have a pitcher. I feel bad for Liam as he's having to put aside the idea of becoming a professional baseball player due to the fact that after he was attacked last year in the gym and his pitching arm was broken and after it healed and he went through physical therapy for the arm he's had trouble with throwing the ball with out a great deal of pain. I'm glad that Lee found some friends at school to hang out with so he won't be alone next year when Will & Liam won't be there any more because they're seniors this year.
  9. Butcher56

    BF Chapter 28

    I'm also wondering what is going on with Anton, he's usually an easy going person and now it seems like he gets angry really easily. I feel sorry for Jasper and Simon for enduring Anton's fits of anger. I hope that this short cruise will be a way for Anton to calm down. I think maybe Anton should think about some counseling for his anger issues. It looks like the office is going up on schedule even though the upper level was delayed. This was another great chapter.
  10. Butcher56

    BF Chapter 27

    Hopefully not too much drama. I really like your style of writing, it just seems to draw you into it to where you appear to be right in the middle of the story almost like you're another character that is just there as an observer.
  11. Butcher56

    BF Chapter 27

    I think that by the way Anton is planning ahead he wants to keep the family close by. I hope that Emma enjoys her new nesting box and the enclosure that Anton designed and built with some help from Neale and Jedd, after Emma was placed in the enclosure she didn't move right away then after Anton put the food and water dishes in Emma saw that she was in a new environment and she went to start exploring. Thanks for writing another fantastic chapter. I'm loving the story very much.
  12. Butcher56

    BF Chapter 26

    I'm glad that Quokka has the writing style he has. I'm glad that Anton fired the landscaper since she decided that she new what Anton wanted even though Anton had told her that he's going to terminate their business because she put plants in the design that he had said he didn't want in there. After Anton terminated the landscaper he went the next day to order the materials he needed for his landscaping. While in Geraldton he and Sarah ordered the furniture they would need for their new homes. This was another great chapter.
  13. I loved this chapter, Robbie and Nathan holding hands in public was something I didn't expect. I'm glad that Robbie's finally out of the closet and isn't going to hide the love he has for Nathan. I hope that Don finally comes down from his perch and accepts Robbie for who he is and then the adoption will finally be settled.
  14. Butcher56

    BF Chapter 25

    Another great chapter. I'm glad that Anton was able to get the approval from the town council to build the office and residence on his property. I like that Anton was thinking ahead and asked the landscaping company to set up a wildlife refuge on the back side of the property. I'm not quite sure what Anton's plan is for the research vessel, I guess I'll find out in the next chapter.
  15. Butcher56

    BF Chapter 24

    Great chapter. I'm glad that Anton is planning ahead and has made a call to the marine contractor about changes he'd like to make to the research vessel. I hope that their day long sail on the Frontier goes well. I'm glad that Sarah and Oscar have accepted the offer from Anton for Sarah to be the administration manager of the company as well as Anton providing the place for them to live. I hope that This relationship Anton has with Rachel will continue as it seems like she's trying to build a friendship with Anton especially since they haven't seen each other for awhile. It appears that Emma's mending very nicely which is good because she has 4 eggs to care for until they hatch.
  16. Butcher56

    Plan to Plan

    Another great chapter. I'm proud of Devon for thinking about the other's before he thought of himself. I wonder what Lucian is thinking about and why he's so willing to die. I don't think all vampires are gay but in this story most of them are gay. Being gay isn't a prerequisite for becoming a vampire. I hope that the request for a sympathetic person from Interpol comes through and that they'll get the help they need from them. Wayne and Amasis is going to be an interesting relationship, we'll have to wait and see what happens between them.
  17. Butcher56

    BF Chapter 23

    I have to agree with everyone else that Mathews pov is needed in order to get the full story about what happened to him when he was at the bar. I hope that Anton does go with the idea of becoming a Wildlife Carer for the Jurien Bay area as Rachel Martin has suggested. I think it would be good for him to do to help him feel better about himself especially since he has decided to take more of a managerial role in the business. I wish he would talk this over with Marcus and his brothers before making a decision. I'm really enjoying this story as it doesn't seem to be lacking in the drama department, I think Anton would be a great Wildlife Carer especially since he would legally be able to keep Emma and her young with him. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what Anton decided to do about the offer from Dr Martin.
  18. Butcher56

    Chapter 21 - Adam

    I must agree with everyone else that this was a great chapter full of emotion. When Paddy held Reiley the first time I just about started bawling like a baby myself. When Paddy was holding Reiley and then asked Adam about calling him dad instead of papi, Adam couldn't speak for a moment due to the fact that he was overwhelmed with emotion that Paddy wanted to call Adam dad so that Reiley would grow up calling him dad or daddy. I hope that they'll be a great family without Anna interfering with them as they raise their daughter. I'm sure that the things that Paddy said about them going home and becoming a big brother for Reiley. Thanks for writing this amazing story.
  19. Butcher56

    BF Chapter 22

    I'm surprised that Anton has made some significant changes in the crewmembers on both yachts. I hope that Jasper will be okay with the changes despite his grumbling about having to train new stewards. I'm glad that Anton is planning ahead and has made an offer on some property so that he can build an office for the business and a residence for he and his brothers. All in all it appears that Anton has to hire about 4 new people who fill the slots of the ones that are changing positions. Great chapter, I can't wait to read more about how the changes Anton wants to make come about as well as whether he gets permission from the town council to build the office and residence.
  20. Butcher56

    AS Chapter 25

    I too am sad to see the story end. It was a great story, with the VIP charters it seems like the crews of both boats will be busy for awhile. I know you have other stories in the works, and I am going to be reading the next chapter of beyond frontier as soon as I finish here. I wonder if you might consider another story with the same characters in it as a continuation of the At Sea story, say a few years into the future. I hope that Carlton might be able to find some time where he can possibly find himself a guy who is willing to be at sea working along side everyone else when on a charter. I hope that Brodie gets to the point where he would be able to walk again by continuing to do his exercises and working out in the exercise gym on the cat. Thanks for writing these great stories, I really like your style of writing.
  21. Butcher56

    AS Chapter 24

    I'm sorry to hear that this story is going to end after one more chapter. I guess all good things must come to an end, although I would like to see it go further. I think it would have been better if Carlton had told the contractor's where they could have their meals, instead of getting mad at them for eating in the dining room mess. I hope that with both boats working together they'll get a bit more business, in fact the first charter for the Trident 3 is already set up with the Royal Prince of Denmark and his wife and security personnel will be the trial run to make sure that everything goes well. I hope that Brodie gets better soon as he's a partner in the business and it would be a shame if he were to die now. I think he really needs to let someone know if something is wrong with him so it doesn't end up like he is now. Thanks for writing these great stories.
  22. Butcher56

    AS Chapter 23

    Another great chapter in the story about a family trying to make sure that their nephew has a chance to succeed in the future. I hope that there won't be any hard feelings over Brodie and Carlton purchasing the original trident to try to breakk away from Jay and Jacq having to provide a job as well as living accommodations. With the purchase of the trident Carlton, Brodie and Amanda are moving to it and will be providing fishing and scuba diving charters for people. I think that this is a great opportunity for the three of them to branch out and provide a service to those who are interested in these type of charters.
  23. Butcher56

    AS Chapter 22

    I agree with your comment that it'd take quite a few high priced charters in order to pay a debt of 12,000,000. I agree that the rest of the family felt the same way that it's too big of a risk. I hope that Jay and Jacq will see it from the others side and really think about having such a big debt hanging over them wouldn't be beneficial to the family. Maybe the boat they're going to look at is the original trident, that would be surprising if it is and then have Jay and Jacq meet them at the boat and show them that it's the original trident.
  24. Great chapter. I think Robbie and Nathan are a great couple, I feel like they were ment for each other. As Karen said Nathan talks about Robbie all the time and was very upset when Robbie was in the hospital. If Nathan's right about making a gay porn movie staring Robbie and Nathan it'll be interesting to see the final results. I'm glad that Robbie and Nathan are having a great time together doing what they want.
  25. Butcher56

    Chapter 15

    I'm hoping that this trip to Paris will a real bonding experience for the guys. I think Robbie is still leary of getting thrown in jail for the murder of Neil. I hope that during this trip that Ella doesn't wind up pregnant by the look she's getting from Darius.
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