Carybr
-
Posts
258 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help Center
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by Carybr
-
More Normal, and the Holidays
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Normal, and the Holidays
Very nice resolution to the conflict between Roger and Beth, well done! -
If there is anyone reading this for whom the idea of male sex is new, I'll just say this: Putting a condom on your partner can be a pretty exciting part of foreplay. If he has any objections, that's when there can be a discussion. No surprises, no too-late situations.
-
I can see Jason's point. Working security and then discovering that putting up with sexual advances ( whether from men or women) is a condition of employment can be a nonstarter.
- 8 comments
-
- 12
-
-
-
Good ending thanks
-
Getting Serious, and More New Problems
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Serious, and More New Problems
Zach and Jackson each say the other was violent. Each has some "proof". This ought to be interesting. But it is concerning that Jackson gets angry with Dominic when he doesn't understand something.- 25 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
-
Discussions and Decisions
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Discussions and Decisions
The Dallas dream was exactly what I thought. Why not make this chapter a Dallas Dream and end the story properly? You were almost there. -
I keep wondering about his illness (and now we hear there was an operation). Just curious.
-
Truly an amazing chapter. The worst thing that can happen right now is for a character to wake up in the next chapter and it was all a dream.
-
Such a great start to a story. I am looking forward to following this one. I wonder how Mr Noone pronounces his name? Is is like the time of day (noon) or like the two words "No One" or some other way?
-
Greg got Brian’s memories in a very powerful way. It will be interesting to see what good he can bring from this situation.
- 20 comments
-
- 13
-
-
-
-
Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
I was curious about Jackson's disfigurement until I saw his facebook portrait - wow the guy is hot. Even with the scars. Did you (author) do the art?- 21 comments
-
- 10
-
-
Works that way with Humans as well.
-
Deus ex machina ending.
- 194 comments
-
- 12
-
-
-
I'm really looking forward to the Wednesday meeting with the legal people. Especially if a certain piece of paper gets put forth and discussed.
- 19 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
Why the Heck Does He Do That?
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Why the Heck Does He Do That?
Yes, can't have Cory injured from falling for Roy. -
Such a great chapter, left me in suspense. No telling what will happen next. But I'm hopeful!
- 229 comments
-
- 20
-
-
-
Why the Heck Does He Do That?
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Why the Heck Does He Do That?
This looks like a great start to an interesting story. Cory gets a full view of Roy and falls out of the tree. That’s pretty funny! -
RIP Carlos. We'll miss you.
-
Family Life: homophobia rules
Carybr commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Family Life: homophobia rules
Colin needs to separate himself from his family for his peace of mind. They are manipulative; mother is not infirm; he can just say "Peace be with you but I'm taking a break for a few months. When I return we will see if you can be civil."- 18 comments
-
- 11
-
-
-
How about copies for the readers?
- 18 comments
-
- 14
-
-
-
-
-
-
The boys’ stories break my heart. Let’s hope the healing goes well.
- 159 comments
-
- 15
-
-
-
-
Nice chapter. This is how I visualize the castle.
- 145 comments
-
- 18
-
-
How wonderful; Colin is speaking up for himself!
- 15 comments
-
- 12
-
-
-
It's Like Snowballs Rolling Downhill - In Summer
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in It's Like Snowballs Rolling Downhill - In Summer
This is certainly good news! I wonder if things will keep getting better or if the situation will suddenly worsen. -
Seth at last has some closure on his troubles. Good ending.
- 17 comments
-
- 12
-
-
