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Questions 1. I have run for miles, afraid hidden from view from prying eyes My pounding heart an atomic blast No matter how fleet I cannot outrun you and I cannot bury you My seeping blood does not banish you Though the dead are buried you are immortal, waiting for me to die Can I pay my way to sanity? 2. When come the end of days will we know the truth before the sun explodes killing our descendants in an instant? Will hum
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Another excellent chapter. Jamie and Mike need some together time, as we all do. Nicely done.
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Antler cable pattern ... and charts read.
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I thought I was alone in feeling this. I don't try to figure it out; I want the story the author has written. Lead me down that garden path ... of course it doesn't always work. Thank you for another great article.
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Looks good to me! Shame about the peppers. I love peppers.
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Happy National Panda Day ... this is a rare brown/white panda. Isn't he lovely. Hug your panda today!
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I also enjoy meat, but not a lot of it. I believe we are meant to eat it, but i don't think it's bad to reduce the amount. I've tried tofu in a variety of ways. I liked some in an awful pad thai; the tofu was the best part. i enjoyed it. I add beans to ground beef to make it better and 'go farther.' I don't see why we couldn't use tofu to do the same. I enjoy non-meat meals and a good veggie burger too. Just eat good food. Thanks for sharing, @drown, i love it!
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A Murder Is Announced
Mikiesboy commented on lawfulneutralmage's story chapter in A Murder Is Announced
This is an excellent chapter. You show us Jamie as he attempts to escape his reality. I understand that more than I'd care to recall. However, Mike seems to understand even in the face of not knowing the truth. That is love and trust. Then things start to get a bit weirder and more mysterious. I like how this is unfolding. Then we have the Sergeant's brogue. I hope everyone took the time to hear him. It's very well written, and the best way to hear it is to read it aloud. Such fun.- 113 comments
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I found this on a salon site: Bangs’ is a very American term, whereas everywhere else tends to use ‘fringe’. That being said, you’ll probably hear ‘bangs’ being used across the UK, and you can thank American YouTubers for that! But just remember that it means exactly the same thing.
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Infodumps about characters' looks are overdone and dull. The worst is the 'looking in the mirror' description. Let the characters describe what they see. For example, Mike sees Jamie and looks into his soulful blue eyes. Let Jamie show us how long his hair is when he pushes back his long bangs, etc. If it's done properly, we can determine Jamie's body type from what is shown in the story. He runs, works out, etc., so the reader can see his body type. We don't need to say he's muscular and has stamina. Readers are smart, and while they may not all think Jamie looks the same, they are happy with the character they see. For me, that's what matters.
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Leon Kennedy's hair is not what you typically think of as a fringe ... bangs was a better option.
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Thank you, Reader. I'll have to decide on a project to make with cables. It should probably be something simple like mittens or a hat. I'm making myself a sweater right now with no cables. I'm nearly finished with the back; only the front and sleeves are left to go.
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great bangs... no pun ... lol
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I'm not confused... if I had been, we'd have talked about it.
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That's just a fools errand, that is. Those would be my last words ...lol
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Here's a little more... this is also not blocked so doesn't look finished.. it's just practice.. tomorrow i am going to make antler cables.. from a chart.. woo hoo. This sample is 3 different types of cable.
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i have my ways, Mr. Bond ... bwahahaha
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Those are long bangs. .there are lots of different styles of bangs.
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You're not old. Leon never did much for me personally. Neither Leon nor Pierce is my cup of tea, so to speak.
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Again, whatever works for you ...
