Mikiesboy

There isn't an arms crossed with foot tapping emoji....

But it's cake ... Happy Birthday @Thorn Wilde

It escapes me, the reasons for living as does the joy in just being me life is all questions, and I ponder the reasons we are here at all Live in the present, people like to tell me I would, if I could figure out how It’s the future that I consider And the inevitable for which I wait I am aware that time is passing Understand what I’ve lost is my fault But I can’t seem to change what I feel Or believe in the lies about hope

That's their issue, not yours. i am certainly not liked by all, and well, that's how it is. And that's okay.

Well, you could write: This book contains; nudity, sex (of all types), violence, rape, suicide and blankets. That works.

i love you too. i enjoy your comments and thoughts. i like to hear what you have to say.

There is no need to go overboard. Stick to the basics, like they do for films. This story contains offensive language, nudity, scenes of rape, violence, suicide.

i'm glad you enjoyed it ... prompts are short pieces, it's possible this might be more at some point as i explained in other comments. I appreciate your comments and time. Thank you.

oh, i know you weren't.. just talking about things that's all. but to me prompts are just short pieces ... however i've written lots of things from short beginnings.. The Searcher, Changes and After the Past all come from first chapters i wrote years before they were written into longer pieces. i think, somehow they write themselves when i'm not trying to. They were chapters i liked but at the time i wrote them, there was nothing more. So i put them in a folder and every once in a while i'd read them. Then one day ... the story was ready. Maybe some research was needed, but the story was there. Will that happen here? i dont know. Maybe. But it's not ready now ... not yet. nice to have you back xoxo

that's great news...

Currently snowing, blowing.. white out conditions. Happy Spring!

i asked @Wayne Gray to read the first edition of this prompt for me. We discussed that this could be much more a novella at the very least. I had to research what is written here, not for a long time and frankly i was very lucky about what i came across. In order to make such a story right, i would need hours and hours of research. i would have to learn enough about Turkey, Dionysus, Midas, and Phrygia to make it real and believable. Since there were no cursed coins, i would have to make that up, which is fine but again, it would have to fit. And planning, mysteries need much planning, an outline certainly, character building, scene mapping ... it could be a great project. It would take a year minimum. Changes took 13 months to research and write .. this would be much longer i think. It could be less if i didnt have to work. But i do work fulltime and that, home and Husband, all reduce the time i have to write. So yes, most of us are likely aware of what could be. Short stories are just that... they have a beginning, middle/climax, end ... they are not just cut down longer pieces. This story would not fit the short story format i don't think, not without a lot of gaps. We all have our own talents ... and should celebrate each others. xo

i am glad you enjoyed the story. i do my best never to write what is expected. Stravor suddenly changing would have made him no longer the man he was. To me, the fact he was ready to open himself to Keter, to declare his need and love was enough and more than he'd ever done before. Anymore would have be too much and unbelievable. i do appreciate your comments and information though. i will save it my notes. Thanks again.

i've no idea what they say, but it makes sense considering what they are talking about.

Well, they just need to be quiet because i have to write this other story. The characters in this deserve it. Thanks though, dugh xo

Thank you ... you may know this, but i need to say it. Your comments, your words just mean so much. They are greatly appreciated. They make the hours of work, research, editing, and rewrites just completely worth all of it. Thank you.

well it hasnt so far, but this might ...

Thank you ... i hope you find answers to all your questions.

Right now @Wayne Gray have a large story we are writing together. Not sure how long that will take us .... A story like this would be isn't easy or simple to write. Thanks though, dugh. love you you and mum xoxo and the pup.

See my reply to Wayne ... not sure about that but thanks. i'm glad you like it though. xol

Thanks, Wayne. i've never written a long mystery ... this would take major planning and work. Maybe if i could actually write everyday ... i dont know.

i'm pleased You enjoyed it Michael. Thank you. xo

The robe is doing its job for sure. I am working on a huge project with @Wayne Gray at the moment. Not sure about starting another

Thank you, Kitt. Oh, i dont know ... this would be a massive project to do properly.