Thanks so much, Dodger ... this story is a journey, on many levels. I like fantasy but only so far ... i don't like unpronounceable names or places. I want it different but not so different i am uncomfortable and things are too unreal.
Thanks again for reading .. i hope you enjoy the rest, if you choose to read on.
Stravor lay prone before Hemothracene’s blood-red statue. Waiting. On his hip the Sword of Harman vibrated.
The Searcher drew in a deep breath. The Sword is unquiet as am I. Oh, stop this. He continued breathing deeply; steadily. Control your thoughts, and so yourself.
Time passed in the silent Hall. Stravor fought to tame his straying thoughts as he waited for his God.
“You are unsettled, Searcher. Why do you come to me thus?”
The voice of hundreds was loud in his head. “I beg
This is a great AAA! So nice to hear from a newer selection of authors. I like the question and it's great to know GA is working for them. We have a lot of intelligent and supportive readers here. I love the interaction as well.
Thanks to all the authors who replied! Thanks for bringing us this, C!!