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Mikiesboy

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  1. Mikiesboy

    Discontent

    I'm sorry this is late, Jeffrey. Thanks very much for reading and your insightful comments. xo
  2. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    LOL.. you're right. This really isn't a 45,000+ word story. It all ends in the next chapter! Off with his head!! (oh..wait this isn't Highlander!) Does Stravor have the power to choose??? Stay tuned ....
  3. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Thank you, Jeffrey! i read over the next two chapters last night ... and things are going to start to be more interesting as their journey begins.
  4. i have a ton of things to do too .. but..it is tempting, Mr..Gray. break out the cider!!
  5. Mikiesboy

    Beneath the Skin

    oh that's happened to me.. with some rather unpleasant results.. but i understand. happens. it's a good poem.
  6. I notice no comment from @Wayne Gray about this. Hehe. It's a thing we'd have to talk about ... a lot.
  7. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Thanks very much, Wayne. I appreciate you reading and commenting.
  8. Mikiesboy

    Death's Door

    Thank you, AC ... your comments touch me very deeply.
  9. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Frankly, there are no simple lines in this story.. is Stravor a good guy or bad? Will he or won't he? Nothing is easy. I was worried people might not like the trip to the market .. it is mundane and everyday .. but to me, it helps to build a 3-d character.. This big tough man, washes a boys back, he picks a flower, he buys and enjoys sweets, he wants quality baskets. Each thing shows more and more about him. And so we wonder why he does what he does. Shade is an interesting character. Thanks for you great comments, dugh.
  10. it's a WAYNE-FEST ... works better than a WAYNE-IN .. LOL
  11. nice day off.. quiet around here .. currently trying to write some quatrains and our new fridge arrived today.. which was very nice.
  12. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Thanks, Parker, i am glad these small details work for you .. they are needed, in my opinion, to make a world real. It's a long journey, full of the unknown, fearsome things, truth and more. I hope you'll enjoy it.
  13. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    it doesn't happen and when i say things need to feel real, this is what i am talking about. The world doesn't have feel real to me .. it needs to feel real to the characters that live in it. Thanks AC for everything...xo
  14. Wayne is a good writer and i enjoy spending time with him. We have fun exchanging ideas about writing and our work. His story Guarded is good and yes.. silverwolf is terrific.
  15. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 1

    i enjoyed this very much. Jerry has a boyfriend and someone i think will be a good friend as well. Nice.
  16. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    UGH.. i know what you mean... sometimes i'm glad for it.. but mostly NOT!
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