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Mikiesboy

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  1. I notice no comment from @Wayne Gray about this. Hehe. It's a thing we'd have to talk about ... a lot.
  2. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Thanks very much, Wayne. I appreciate you reading and commenting.
  3. Mikiesboy

    Death's Door

    Thank you, AC ... your comments touch me very deeply.
  4. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Frankly, there are no simple lines in this story.. is Stravor a good guy or bad? Will he or won't he? Nothing is easy. I was worried people might not like the trip to the market .. it is mundane and everyday .. but to me, it helps to build a 3-d character.. This big tough man, washes a boys back, he picks a flower, he buys and enjoys sweets, he wants quality baskets. Each thing shows more and more about him. And so we wonder why he does what he does. Shade is an interesting character. Thanks for you great comments, dugh.
  5. it's a WAYNE-FEST ... works better than a WAYNE-IN .. LOL
  6. nice day off.. quiet around here .. currently trying to write some quatrains and our new fridge arrived today.. which was very nice.
  7. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Thanks, Parker, i am glad these small details work for you .. they are needed, in my opinion, to make a world real. It's a long journey, full of the unknown, fearsome things, truth and more. I hope you'll enjoy it.
  8. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    it doesn't happen and when i say things need to feel real, this is what i am talking about. The world doesn't have feel real to me .. it needs to feel real to the characters that live in it. Thanks AC for everything...xo
  9. Wayne is a good writer and i enjoy spending time with him. We have fun exchanging ideas about writing and our work. His story Guarded is good and yes.. silverwolf is terrific.
  10. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 1

    i enjoyed this very much. Jerry has a boyfriend and someone i think will be a good friend as well. Nice.
  11. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    UGH.. i know what you mean... sometimes i'm glad for it.. but mostly NOT!
  12. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Thank you, chris!! I'm always pleased to know when you enjoyed something.
  13. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Thank you, Sir. I appreciate your comments xoxo
  14. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    yes a trip through the wilds is coming .. and we get to go. Don't worry though we wont be in any danger ourselves.
  15. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Stravor (maybe you are thinking Strider from LOTR when you wrote his name) I tease you xo .. Stravor is not shocked...surprised a little maybe. You left me a lovely comment on this story mentioning the 'magic' tag. These people know of witches and magic ... so no, it was a real surprise. There are other Searchers in the world in my head, but we don't meet them here in this story. But people know who they are what they do .. and what the swords do, so avoid them like the plague. Oh, so much more coming about Keter, Dayson, Galeth ... lots more... Thanks for reading and you wonderful comments.
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    Making Ready

    Yes, we will all go on this trip with Stravor, Keter and Shade. There and back again (but this is no hobbits tale). I'm glad you are enjoying this.. thanks very much for reading and your comments.
  17. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Think about why Stravor would pay for the boy. And why he tells him things to keep him sweet. And what kind of man Stravor really is ... the souls in the Hall of the Dead didn't get there by accident. There was no trial.. Hemothracene wanted them and the Searcher was sent. He was the executioner.
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    Making Ready

    Yeah, there will be more as you know with Stravor and Day. I seem to keep writing about horses ... they sort of fascinate me. i think there is more going on in there than we give them credit for.
  19. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Thanks molly .. i'm glad this chapter worked.... there's a bit of excitement with the bar fight, but really it's just a 'get to know you' type of chapter.. .a little ground work
  20. Mikiesboy

    Making Ready

    Yes, Reader you are correct that time and more words will tell.
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