Jump to content
2026 Anthology - Read here! ×

Mikiesboy

Signature Author
  • Posts

    29,544
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by Mikiesboy

  1. Thanks very much, A. xo
  2. Why alligator? Well, in the original poem is the word Eternity .. 4 syllables. Since i had to write this poem to complete the exercise, i needed something to write about and i needed a 4 syllable word. I looked at a list of 4 syllable words. Alligator jumped out at me. Could it be a term of endearment? Sure, why not. So, that is why i chose alligator.
  3. a sad beginning but all in all a good week of poems. thanks
  4. I used the Prompt you can find here So after a lot of figuring it out here is my 'road map': (‘Of old,’)( spake the priest;)( spake the par-son)( and prea-cher) – 12 (‘Af-ter death,)( O my Friends,)( af-ter death)( is E-ter-ni-ty.)’ 14 (‘Not so,’|)( cries my Spi-rit,)( ‘not so,)( O wise tea-cher)! 12 (It was), (and it is),(and it e-ver)( shall be) – 11 (Now, now)( is E-ter-ni-ty!)( Is it)( for thee?)’ 11 And my own new poem using the road map: S
  5. Mikiesboy

    What I Leave

    Thank you, Thorn. i think lots of us question ... it isn't always a bad thing, or a sad one, as you say. xo
  6. Mikiesboy

    What I Leave

    Thank you, AC. Sometimes life is just hard ... i am coping better than i used to, i just try one day at a time.
  7. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 13

    Thanks BB.. i appreciate you reading xo
  8. Thank you very much .. I'm glad you enjoyed it. i enjoyed writing this and the first one.. they mean a great deal to me. xo
  9. Mikiesboy

    Proof

    i do know ... it means you are His, you are open and you trust and believe. it means you will do anything for HIm.. i know.
  10. Mikiesboy

    Proof

    my sweet brother, i know this feeling well ... many hugs and much love. What you write is love, and trust and obedience. xoxo
  11. thanks very much... i appreciate you reading this.
  12. Mikiesboy

    Brotherly Love

    i liked his reaction too ... Charles is basically asking, 'What are your intentions with respect to my brother? Because Wren, I know what I'd like them to be.' Charles is who we'd all like to have in our life. Someone we did not have to announce ourselves to. Someone who recognized it, and accepted it. Someone who gathered us up and said, "i love you, just as you are. you are loved and not flawed." A rare thing. A beautiful thing.
  13. Mikiesboy

    Brotherly Love

    Coming out is internal ... nice chapter.
  14. Mikiesboy

    Chapter 3

    Enjoyable story...but where will it go from here. We finally meet Oskar...it's just the beginning i think.
  15. Lots of twists and turns, and an unexpected, yet satisfying end. Worth reading!
  16. it's pretty over there.. worth a streetcar ride maybe
  17. it's a long walk over to woodbine/vicky park..
  18. we even have beaches....and a nice boardwalk .. and a neighbourhood called The Beach... i grew up in the northern part of it. http://www.torontoneighbourhoods.net/neighbourhoods/east-end/the-beach?overview
  19. Thank you for reading this. Thanks for the hugs, they are appreciated.
  20. Mikiesboy

    Secrets

    i'm an Anne Rice vampire fan ... and my own.. hehe
  21. Mikiesboy

    Lust

    perhaps just the beginning...
  22. Mikiesboy

    Lust

    poems do not need and often should not rhyme ... i like this
×
×
  • Create New...