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Another great story has come to an end , thank you again for a very interesting and informative story, I look forward to your next story
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Ray has tried he has laid out his feelings, reasons and emotions, Casper is in a bit of pickle he is not really happy at James's but he doesn't want to go home , a little bit of a problem, father's place is a no go as us Tasha's, he has a lot thinking to do , James playing bowls with him has a little bit of a naughty streak
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Great chapter, interesting that the idiot learnt a very great if stupid lesson,loosing an arm for nothing except loosing the bracelet as well, a package deal if ever there was one, it does seem that the story is running into the end zone
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Ok so uncle has definitely turned out to a low life, great that Bobby has settled into the new school, strange meeting I am sure that they know that it self destructs however I think they want to use it as an device to instantly kill someone if they don't follow instructions, it really seems to be an underhand strategy, interesting times ahead, Chaz is wise to get a backup system in place
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Great Chapter, so everyone has had a talk and all single talks have had a mutual benefit to everyone, so far at the moment everyone is happy, I wonder how long this will last ?
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Interesting chapter, so Caleb did release her to gain her soul, and she hopefully killed Leanne, no I hope that they can get back to "earth" or at least where everyone else is, Charlie is a bit of cynic it would seem, brutal but honest
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Chapter 15: Disturbing Decree
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 15: Disturbing Decree
Holy hell, that I did not see coming, I hope that the territory is next to mace's territory, I wonder if that is why his wolf was sad , he is not quite ready for that however I see lots of help and assistance to get over this crazy bump in the road, this was yet another awesome chapter? -
Interesting chapter, so the system can be bypassed, I think that he will work to remedy that. It should prove interesting, at least the general is satisfied
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Interesting developments, Noah will no doubt get him on board he will take the deal I am sure and end up not paying anything back
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Bonus Chapter: Small Worlds.
mikedup commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter: Small Worlds.
Interesting chapter a bit more background information, Caleb seems to be becoming very useful -
Awesome chapter, karma they say is an absolute b*tch payback tends to be bigger than the first attempt to try it , everyone is doing great , I wonder when the next brick is going to drop and cause some drama
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Great chapter, and happy New year to all of them , so the uncle is his box In New York, good riddance, at least his parents are aware of what happened, so onto another semester at school, and progress on The wrist bands
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Awesome chapter, there is always someone who has a thorn in his side and tries to get their side a better deal , and screw everyone else, they also tend to be bullies, but they often get taken down in the most spectacular fashions, CJ and Rich are a really formidable team CJ is of course world wise , and Rich can tap into it at any time I am sure
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Great chapter, I am glad that Bobby and his dad had a chat ,I think that the break while he stays there is going either break the family up or do what's right and put the uncle firmly back into his pathetic little box and send him back via courier to new York
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Marvelous chapter, I loved it , uplifting and emotional, Loe needs to reassess his ideas , but Matt and Seamus are so good together, it smolders with lust and sexual energy, just brilliant
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Well that was needed to be brought to the front now that everyone knows, and maybe just maybe we are almost on the same page, it is what happens next that is important, people need to be found and rescued rather soon
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Interesting chapter, the "uncle"is a prize d*do and not a good one at that , he is selfish and arrogant, bobby's mother is a weekling in regards to her brother as he just dominates her , I just wonder why his father keeps quite about this, at least he has a sanctuary at the cottage
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Bobby is going to be an awesome friend and "brother" to carlito they have just clicked, he is no doubt going to study like crazy if nothing else but to prove his uncle is an idiot, great that they got the contract to start, no doubt to do the entire job in bits and pieces ,it will take longer but that is no longer an issue I think
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Great chapter, I recall saying that Tristan didn't break the window and it seems that I was correct the stupid graves did it, Tristan could have some fun with the twins, I think that grandpa is going to have some serious discussions with them
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Crazy good chapter, intense seems inadequate to explain everything that happened, that they saved the houses is great , the change of focus on the embers is good idea, kill the embers and you stop the fire from restarting, strange but awesome interaction between them
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Interlude 5: Casper Sullivan
mikedup commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Interlude 5: Casper Sullivan
Interesting chapter, father can help but it seems that every time father helps it is case of a return help is required or at least a payment in kind -
Awesome progress, let's hope they accept the different offers , it could be the start of world supply to governments who need security cover
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Great feel good chapter, Bobby has made his first friend at new residence. I suppose getting the job in parts is far better than getting nothing from all the work they put into it
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Oh hell granny is going to be really p*ssed now I think, Caleb has his work cut out
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Awesome chapter, it looks like they are going to have really good time at the cottage by the sea
