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Father seems to be quite a manipulator, Freda I think is a little bit crazy but in good way she will no doubt help Casper his anger runs very deep, I think that she will help him unleash his capabilities
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Well the family had to expand and any new additions are welcome, it seems that they have a little Italy where they are
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Cadet Second Class • II
mikedup commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • II
Awesome chapter, I think that the recruits realised that he is not one of the crew that will take any crap about anything, the dig sounded like fun dirty but fun , interesting times with boxworth as a room mate -
Condolences for Charlie, but such is life, there is but one guarantee about life is that there is definitely an end or use by date, some of us just don't realise that, the brothers are serious it seems about protecting their sisters
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Bonus Chapter Two: Tuva.
mikedup commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter Two: Tuva.
Wow that was a rather brutal chapter, but I suppose evil comes in all sizes and shapes. 1 down more to go -
Yes I think that the dogs will bring the boys together as a family, the girls were wise so as not th to have to clean up after accidents
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Casper is definitely out of his depth , however I think he will learn quite a bit James must be wondering what happened to everyone
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Interesting chapter it seems like this is the best time for the 2 of them to get to know each other better, I think its now or never
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Interesting times, I wonder how long Tasha will be "free" before they try to capture her again , because no doubt they will, James is making some progress
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A sad and emotional chapter, Frank is going to do well going forward, he will treasure memories but also make new ones,
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I think that almost everyone is a bit of a whack job, they are nuts , Casper finally realises that they were trying to get him going but by beating him is just so surreal
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Sh*t happens in big chunks when it happens, you respond you get up and deal or you stay down and fail. Another awesome chapter,
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Like father like son, Frank is going to be well looked after, Vic is really a special kid
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Bonus Chapter One: Bex.
mikedup commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Bonus Chapter One: Bex.
Interesting background, so his sister is also one of them , interesting to see that happens next, drama in Abundance no doubt- 12 comments
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So wow, what a way to suddenly become a parent , he is taking it very well, I am glad that he has a least some help
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Ok I did read it but I did miss the last part and I now makes sense , sorry about the query, and thanks for for fixing it
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Ok I will do that I think that I missed chapter 40
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Sad but that is the reality of some of the kids at school today, yeah I was waiting with baited breath to discover what was in the trunk but Vic took priority this chapter, I also think that the family is about to expand but 1
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Interesting and intense it seems that they enjoyed beating her, James did rescue her but I think that the cost will be high
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Wow what cliffhanger, pity the treasure hunt was so quick, now we wait with baited breath
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Ok so James will be thrust into the air , drama ahead in a big way I think, Casper is getting monitored no doubt
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Intense chapter, very descriptive and so very visual I could feel the heat from the fire, glad they got out
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Interesting chapter, so now we have a treasure hunt on our hands , I wonder if there is any indication as to where on the farm
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Interesting chapter, exciting and adrenaline pumping, a great tour in Alaska I can't wait to hear what the phone call is about
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Interesting that no one realised that he had the phone plus I so de what James will be able to accomplish, interesting times
