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Awesome chapter, typical family members circling around like vultures, I knew bloke who when he reached the age of 70 he told his kids that he was going to go and ski 🎿, when I asked him about skiing ,(no relation to me) he said skiing was an abbreviation of "spending the kids inheritance," I had a really good laugh about that
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Chapter 3: Desperate Detective
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 3: Desperate Detective
An awesome chapter, I would not trust Shaw he is like a snake 🐍 he will side with Stefan I think unless Vinnie corrects him once and for all , Stefan now knows his adversary is getting to be very able to fight is all his abilities -
Very interesting chapter and this story is sad but I hope that they get a place where they can live a better life, my heart bleeds for him having gone through it when I was 13, in the seventies there was no help and no one would have believed me anyway , it was a family friend, you learn to live with it but the pain never goes , the worst part is that he f%*#ed with my head mentally, . Ok off my soap box now
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Excellent chapter, you have definitely got me hooked to this New story, I cannot wait for the next chapter
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Interesting chapter, and an interesting start to this New story ,
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Great ending to a really entertaining story, so thank you yet again for the inspiring read
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Great chapter, I wonder if his father got sent to Hades, twisted and bitter to the end no doubt, sad about his grandfather's but such was life then. It does seem that Rome is coming to an end
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Great chapter I agree a lots of bits have come together to make a complete, his grandfather is now fully on board
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Great chapter, I think that he is correct change things that you can change, accept things that you cannot changed and move forward with your life and family and friends
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Great chapter, I agree his father will say the same thing that it taste off, he will never accept that his son has done brilliantly well ,in spite of all the road blocks he put in place, he is an arrogant ass.
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Great chapter, an awesome hunt , grandfather is going to make everyone's life crazy but entertaining I think,
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Great chapter, I hope that grandfather's health will improve, I think that the villa will need to be enlarged again , the more the merrier
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Great chapter, excellent harvest, shared by all who cared , including Apollo,
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Wow that was a really intense chapter, drama galore but they now both know that they can rely on each other
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Great way to keep the boys safe plus to help them, great chapter
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Chapter 2: Slippery Shadows
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 2: Slippery Shadows
Great chapter and really informative about his training, I love that Vincent and his wolf talk to each other and assist each with helpful hints and advice, a new adventure in the monastery awaits I am sure -
Major oops a double posting
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Awesome chapter, a slew of new boys freed from slavery, the villa is soon going to the size of a small village, with its own heart
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Awesome chapter, a slew of new boys freed from slavery, the villa is soon going to the size of a small village, with its own heart
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Great chapter, very descriptive about places in South Africa along with local foods and desserts
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The villa compound has certainly done very well, I would think he would make rooms big enough for a family unit , but different times .
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Awesome chapter, the villa has exploded in how many residents are living there "if the animals are included" everything is going well for everyone
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Great chapter, his brother is angry with his father but things will settle down again, he needs to open his own stall soon
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Chapter 1: Faithful Friends
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 1: Faithful Friends
Awesome chapter, and welcome back ,I know it is only a couple of weeks, but it feels like months ago , we have some interesting times for Vincent and his training. -
Great chapter, he has the baker wrapped around his finger , I wonder what changes his brother could effect in the senate
