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  1. WolfM

    Chapter 41

    Thank you M'Lady
  2. WolfM

    Chapter 41

    Thanks CG Planning is a good thing, how it turns out remains to be seen. True mates would only be a pair, usually, beyond that they would have known long before now that they were mates, be it by smell, touch or some other way, it would have been a driving force that they would have figured, beyond falling in love with each other. Ethan and Aiden where physically drawn to each other while Cody, Casey and Darius chose one another. That does not mean that on some level there wasn't something working to guide them together. I know the ending of Aiden and Ethan's scene would annoy some, but I also figured them using a play space like Aiden created might as well; especially with Aiden being the first one bound and locked up for Ethan's pleasure (both of them really ), but while that can be considered an act of humiliation to some, it can also be done in an act of love if both parties are into that and Ethan was the one that initiated it by request. For them, it is just one level of their sexual experience that they have taken part in before and probably would in the future.
  3. WolfM

    Chapter 41

    Thank you Centex It has been a learning process for me as I write this and I try hard to keep improving. I had to kind of keep an eye on how much I put into the planning session. I would get one idea and then another would pop up. I got to the point I was trying to figure what I could push to another chapter The roses, jockstraps and notes were fun for me. Earlier in the book, Ethan had shown his love for Aiden's jocks, so it seemed like the perfect item to use in creating a trail to the playroom. I knew how I was reading it, that it was more than just plain sex, but I wasn't entirely sure how others would read it. I'm happy it came out how I hoped. I knew for sometime that I was going to bring Casey, Darius and Cody together officially, and as a break to Aiden and Ethan's play time felt right. They had been building towards that for a while. Elevating Aiden and with him, Ethan, to become the Alpha Designate couple (I couldn't think of another name for it) the Alpha is just insuring the continuation of the pack and it is two powerful wolves that are being given the responsibility. It doesn't mean it is a sure thing as someone could challenge, but given Aiden's feelings on duty, he is the natural choice.
  4. WolfM

    Chapter 41

    Thank you Mike
  5. “Alphas.” John greeted his colleagues. “I’d like to thank you all for accepting my invitation to this meeting. It’s nice to see those of you here in person. To the rest only able to meet us on video conference, I understand logistics, scheduling, and distance can be a pain. However, it’s important to have you as part of the discussion. This is why we have the technology after all.” He waved his hand towards a man many of the others did not recognize. “Also joining us is the representativ
  6. WolfM

    Chapter 40

    Thank you CG. The Alpha has two groups that he wants to bring closer. He knows a lot of the new arrivals will most likely stay long term in the pack and become full members and he wants them to feel it is their home. He also doesn't want to show favoritism to the new people over his existing pack members.
  7. WolfM

    Chapter 40

    Thank you Centex. Hopefully inquiring minds will find what they want soon and that's all I'm going to say on some of those questions for now Physically, Aiden is more than strong enough to take over as Alpha since no one short of Ethan could potentially best him; though Ethan could only do that with his extra abilities. It would be a lot for Aiden to take on if he were to step into the Alpha position too soon.
  8. WolfM

    Chapter 40

    Thanks Rbenn... I'm just going to say you will have to wait and see
  9. The drive south on the Trans Canadian Highway had an almost hypnotic effect on the passengers in the SUV. Even Darius had to concentrate to stay alert as an endless row of trees lined the blacktop and concrete path. Snow banks encroached on each side of the highway making the two-lane road feel a little narrower. The three young pups’ eyes closed as they slumbered. Whether it was the excitement wearing off from being picked up by this new group of people or the calming sound of the road under th
  10. WolfM

    Chapter 39

    Thank you Anton Jackie is a full alpha so like her husband, she can do a full wolf or she can do a hybrid shift or in the case of when she eliminated her son it was only her hand and arm that shifted. Likewise, Ethan is just as much an Alpha as Aiden. Personality and choice on how to serve would be the only difference; so yes, Alpha or male Luna would work.
  11. WolfM

    Chapter 39

    Thank you Azure. The primary characters are fairly easy with their development. I sometimes find when I'm writing that I look over the chapter and ask myself if I've given secondary characters the time they deserve.
  12. WolfM

    Chapter 39

    Thank you CG. JP is putting a tremendous amount of in Aiden, but so far Aiden has proven himself to be duty bound in the protection of others. I can see them in my head too. It's all good until they start talking amongst themselves and won't let me into the conversation.
  13. WolfM

    Chapter 39

    Thank you Gee. I agree with you on the end feeling a little rushed. I didn't really notice it at the time, but you're right. I think I spent too much time looking at the house on Google Maps to consider putting more detail about it into the story or some of the details on Marie and the kids.
  14. WolfM

    Chapter 39

    Thank you Poet. I wish I was a faster writer so I could post more often
  15. WolfM

    Chapter 39

    Thank you Avid Everyone expected that code to be for a computer and to be honest, it was one of several possibilities I was toying around with until I started playing around with locations in the way Aiden did.
  16. WolfM

    Chapter 39

    Thank you Centex. The way I originally laid out the story when I wrote the first seven chapters (which was suppose to be the half way point to being finished) I wanted the pack to be accepting of Ethan. As the story developed, that inclusiveness grew. The friendliness was always there among the different shifters, but Ethan kind of opened their eyes to it becoming a stronger community. Aiden could probably be considered loyal to a fault, not that it's a bad thing. He knows where his loyalties are and he is devoted to that. Duty and service to the pack are more important than power and money. I may not live someplace I can build a playroom yet, but at least I can build one in my imagination and my Lycan world can have one
  17. WolfM

    After the 30

    Reading your poems always make me smile. Thank you for writing
  18. “Aiden, we’ve tried every variation of that code. It didn’t work. I think he was having fun with us. The computer’s encryption’s pretty damn good, but the tech guys will eventually crack it.” “It isn’t a code to unlock it, Alpha. It’s a location.” The pack leader stared at Aiden. “Okay, talk me through what you’re thinking. Those numbers don’t work as map coordinates. We tried that.” “I may not understand this guy, but we’ve developed a rapport. There’s something important to find,
  19. WolfM

    Chapter 38

    Thank you Smoothy. Always nice to know I can improve someone's work day
  20. WolfM

    Chapter 38

    Thank you so much, LadyDe! J-P becoming likable was more an accident than anything, but one I'm happy I made. I had fun with his conversations with Aiden and decided that was more his true nature instead of the ruthless business/gang leader. While he's engaged in countless acts that would make most want to end his life, like a gem stone there are different facets that reflect things differently.
  21. WolfM

    Chapter 38

    Thank you Centex! This was one of those chapters I was a little nervous about, considering how well liked the last one was. Now I can start breathing again I thought about a honeymoon to a warmer location or someplace they could go wolf for a while but decided a nice little two or three day get away was best for now. Seeing winter pictures of the falls, it is someplace I would love to visit and it is considered a romantic destination any time of the year. Aiden's step grandfather (in my mind at least) had to be accepting since he would have known about Aiden and I couldn't see Craig stay as Beta for a man that wouldn't accept his son. To me it was important to have him go to the wedding, especially with him being an Alpha. I'd say the Security Director is still trying to figure out the reports on the mystery wolves, but as he thought to himself, that information isn't something he would give for others to make use of.
  22. WolfM

    Chapter 38

    Thank you CG. I think I had google maps open in the background the entire time I was writing about the trip to Niagara Falls. After seeing the pictures of it both frozen and running, I'd love to see it a couple times through out the year. It's been fun to build Alex and Nathan more into the pack. While they do have a business to run and everything their doing is good advertising for that, they are also trying to give back to the community.
  23. WolfM

    Chapter 38

    I'm kind of surprised no one has asked this sooner. The three are not true mates like Aiden and Ethan, but they are more than fuck buddies. All shifters have a true mate somewhere in the world, but not all will find them. If they don't go out into the world in search of their mate the best they can hope for is falling for someone the old fashioned way and eventually imprinting on that person. Best I can describe the three is building into a polyamorous relationship. There is a romantic aspect to what the three have with Cody being the primary link in the group, but regardless there are strong feelings between each of them. In a way it make sense that the one who would be Aiden's enforcer and Ethan's chief protector would become involved with the two that are also tasked with protecting Ethan and Aiden.
  24. Turning towards their friends and family, the newlyweds’ cheeks blushed from their extended and heated kiss. The guests cheered, clapped, and whistled after the judge presented the couple. Ethan tried to contain his excitement as snowflakes formed in the air around him. They doubled in numbers as his mate leaned in for one more kiss, causing additional cheers and catcalls from their friends. Aiden dipped his head in respect to the pack elder and extended his hand. “Judge Vale, thank you so m
  25. WolfM

    Chapter 37

    Thank you Wolf
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