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  1. C. When

    Chapter 14

    Liam's behavior seems to fit less of a spy and more like he is close to Rowland... I'm happy Tareth has found Kye but I imagine it will be hard for them. Between him and Ashton, Kye should have a good support system to deal with what happened and what is coming. The next chapter seems like it will be big; I'm excited.
  2. Happy Birthday Glittery Antlers!
  3. Not a great group but the chorus keeps popping into my head from reading Pour Me Another and seeing it so much.
  4. C. When

    Chapter 15

    Viktor and Nobu seem to be on about the same page at last. It will be interesting to see if Vladimir and Nobu manage to cooperate for what they want. I'm excited.
  5. C. When

    Chapter 13

    I'm upset that I didn't wait longer to start reading, because I really enjoy this. This is an interesting group and I can't wait to see what becomes of them.
  6. Does art based on nature count? A small town NC cafe. They knew what they were doing. The rock is usually photographed from higher angles for some reason.
  7. This one is just catchy enough to get stuck in my ear.
  8. C. When

    Chapter 6

    This chapter was quite intense and reminded me of the pains of reading stories as they come out. I always end up obsessed with your stories.
  9. As we passed through the decorated market, lit by the orange glow of ancient lights that simulated ‘sunset’, Marius dragged me across the ‘town square’ at the center of the market past the tall pine tree that grew there, and around the small tables toward the ancient collections stall located against the far wall of the Market Bay. We weaved our way through the throngs of families with children dashing about, the various people surrounding stalls, haggling for the best price, the lines at the
  10. A young couple’s date seems to be ruined by a blackout. The ancient ship that carries them may be dying as they find romance. This young couple faces a challenge, will they find a new home before their ship fails?
  11. C. When

    Chapter 22

    The fact that Dt. Cornish's mentality is plausible, is terrifying.
  12. I think I fixed the punctuation issue. Thank you, I do like it when people remember to talk to each other.
  13. Thanks, I definitely will after I work on some holiday stories.
  14. Prompt 323 “Can I talk to you?” “Can I talk to you?” At Aaron’s serious tone, I stopped stirring the batter and turned around to see him standing in the kitchen doorway. Seeing my ordinarily confident boyfriend troubled, I was a bit startled and definitely worried. “Yeah, what’s wrong?” “Max… What am I to you?” he asked and I just stared at him for a moment. We have been together for a few months now and although ‘I love you’s hadn’t been said, I didn’t think there was a question
  15. Trust me when I say I'm not a natural but thank you for thinking so.
  16. Thank you!
  17. I may revisit this in some form but I will probably let it stew for a while.
  18. Everytime I see a new chapter I get very excited and extreme nervous. I wonder if he will get stuck in Blackburn.
  19. I want to write a longer story but it is a bit scary since I'm out of practice, but maybe someday I will use this story.
  20. Thank you, is it strange to say I'm glad that it made you feel that way?
  21. [color=rgb(40,40,40)][font=Arial][size=4]Prompt 458 – Creative[/size][/font][/color] [color=rgb(40,40,40)][font=Arial][size=4]a yellow rose, a goodbye note, a stuffed rabbit, balloons, and a fork.[/size][/font][/color]    [color=rgb(0,0,0)][font=Arial][size=4][background=transparent]He sat down at the table for ‘breakfast’ at noon, gazing around the small lifeless apartment. The few pictures on the wall were meaningless designs; the once beautiful living room sat unused; the sparsely stocke
  22. C. When

    C Shorts

    An anthology of prompt responses and short stories. This is so I can practice my writing while being able to share my stories and receive feedback.
  23. Henry Gamble's Birthday Party (2015) the most interesting part of this movie was every character felt human regardless of their beliefs. It should be available on various platforms in May 2016. (I saw it at a film festival) He Hated Pidgeons, I only saw the trailer but I want to see it and it seems passionate.
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