Boy In Doubt

Can you tell that we're lazy?

I'd rather NOT die in a movie. Fine, the good guy... Would you rather be a secret agent or a naked chef?

It actually seems pretty good, dude. I mean, I suppose it's too early to tell what type of story it'd be, whether it's a drama, a comedy, a bit of both. But so far the scene seems alright and well written. You've made it quite clear which characters are speaking and when and you've established the setting without going off on a tangent. So no worries, you're on the right path. And as for getting the story to go where you want it to go, I find that it helps to have an outline of the plot so you don't lose track and have some sort of goal. I assume you've already got an ending in mind (it's okay if you don't)--and if you do then it'd be good to take notes, write down ideas that come to mind that can be used as sub-plots, twists, things that can move your story along and get to your desired ending. Of course, it's not necessary to rely heavily on the outline as this can kill your muse and that's the last thing we'd want as writers. Have a structure but be flexible as well. If something doesn't feel right or if you find your characters not acting like themselves, feel free to make some changes. After all this is your story and you need to listen to your inner voice too. So yeah, just my two cents. Again, from this extract I think you're doing well so keep it up and good luck with the rest of your story.

If he really is real, can you ask him to do my laundry?

From scratch as long as a friend or family member helps out 'cause I couldn't cook if my life depended on it. Good luck with your Thanksgiving dinner, kjames! Would you rather stuff a turkey or be the turkey?

Woo! Happy anniversary!

Can you prove that you're not?

No, can I hear you say "hey hey hey"?

The submissive one... Would you rather be Meryl Streep or Anne Hathaway?

Can you say..."ouch"?

Hot and Cold - Katy Perry

Is "Womanizer" the single from the "Circus" album? I don't know much about her latest but I like "Gimme More" and "Piece of Me" and a few of her older songs. The third album of hers I think was the best. There are people who tend to avoid pop music these days (either 'cause of the artist's lifestyle or just 'cause they don't think it's mature enough) but whatever. If it sounds good to me then I'm gonna listen to it. So yeah, I might give Circus a try. Won't buy it just yet but will definitely listen to the singles.

Wanna cuddle to stay warm?

Yes, but the question is do you have enough?

Mmm...would you like cherries on top?

If I say yes will you get me some milkshakes on the way back?

Are you gonna get me purple fuzzy handcuffs then?

Aww, can't I do both? Fine, be a rockstar (so I can get people to date me!) Would you rather be a cow, a sheep or a goat?

Graduate I meant graduate in JUST your undies. Would you rather be the New Kid in School or a Desert Dropping?

Reading a new story yet somehow I'm playing this game. Would you rather run around the block in your PJs or graduate in your undies?

Oh I don't know--why are you carrying a whip?

Why do I get the feeling that you're sadistic?

How about '50 First Dates'?

If I say yes will you take me there?

Will it be a romance movie?