Gyrefalcon
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Commenting after the story is already finished but before I get to the end is odd, but I can’t help myself. What the hell? Do people in Australia actually just up and move off of long held family lands? You have two parents who sacrificed and saved and invested in an airbase land that had national notoriety, and their son just gives it up because his Vet practice has competition? Is the cattle business that fickle in Australia? All that acreage is nothing? They can afford to renovate a Lighthouse, build army barracks, a campground, and buy massive acreages of ranches (stations) but will turn it all over because there is a competition on Vet business? I think I’m lost.
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I was thinking you’d go simple and say “Shield.” Rampart definitely rolls more heroically off the tongue! 😄
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Great story... but you should know that “God Save the Queen“ and “My Country ‘Tis of Thee” are the same melody as you indicated, but it’s not the US National Anthem.
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If you read this chapter after watching an episode of Cosmos, you’d almost think our American was Carl Sagan!
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Just read that chapter with Andre Bocelli singing “The Prayer” in the background while sitting next to the fireplace drinking a glass of amarone, with the Christmas tree lights illuminating the room. I’m sure it’s too late for you to recreate that serendipitous set of events if you’re reading this comment, but let me just tell you, the chapter was certainly enjoyable and the mood was perfect!
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Can’t wait for the sequel! This was a very entertaining story... worth being called a novel! Hurry up with that writing. Don’t let your hands or imagination get cramped! 😄
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You know, it wasn't the first time Billy had a condom on. Bobby put one on him the first time they did anal.
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It's the third party he'll have gone to at Jamie's house within a single school year. Why is he acting like it's his first time?
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Is it too late to edit this chapter and republish it? You ended with: "got to get that boy's address so I can stalk him outside his bedroom window...". But he's been there for an interview and then two parties!
