Sir Galahad

Too funny. I think your sex life is a total rainbow!

A Massive 2011 to all @ GA

I could freeze the picture & count but frankly I can't be arsed. But technically there are no boys in the picture, they're all stick people.

Yeah, it was finally great to have some time off & actually be in my own country for a change. New years resolution, keep tabs more on here, been a long while. Hope you had a good un Tiger.

I love vampires & this has the makings of a great story especially with the unknown waiting outside at the end.

Well, that was cheerful! It did make me chuckle in places despite it's somewhat sombre tone. Well done.

Excellent. This chapter certainly lays the groundwork for what I imagine is going to be explosive second chapter. I would never have guessed that a Makriam mage would have been his ally and a cute one no less. Is this the start of something more I wonder? There is some wonderful imagery here, in the style we have so become used to from you. Very well done indeed.

I for one really like this story, especially the changes you made from the original. You have great possibilities for this, & I'm looking forward to seeing a lot more. Well done

Another excellent chapter in what is fast becoming one of my favourite stories on here. A lot of questions answered, but a lot of things left wide open. All I can say is that he's got some serious training down the road. Rather him than me! lol. Oh and Dragon... get a move on with the next chapter otherwise I'll nag.

Wow, where did that come from & I’m not talking about the cliffhanger! Lol. Great chapter and a little more of the mystery solved, but even more created. You’ve created great interaction between Matt & Gary, and I totally got Gary’s anger at the end of the chapter, but didn’t see the result coming at all. His frustration has been subtly building up since chapter 2, and what a way to let it go! I wonder if that’s one of the talents that have been hinted at. Be certainly interesting to find out. Grrr, so many questions. I also liked the way you handled his first feeding, where he was so hungry he didn’t see a person, only food. I wonder if he’s lost his humanity as well; poses an interesting question. Can’t wait for chapter 4 now. I case anyone is wondering, I have copied my reviews of this story from eFiction and placed them here. I think it's unfair for an author to have done the work only for the reviews to be wiped. SG

What I like about this story, especially after this chapter, is how you have totally thrown the vampire handbook out the window. I never guessed the light walker ability at all, with the extras attached. Now the title makes sense. I like the soul bonded element, rather than boy meets boy & falls instantly in love, very well done. I was worried for a second it was going to be stereotypical. Katrina has me intrigued I have to say, you keep teasing us with that side, but still I'm hanging on wanting more.

Hey Rory, belated welcome.

Bangles - Eternal Flame. Not really a sad song, just reminds of something from way back.

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Burden Released

Happy Birthday!

There's always one whore who's out for what she can get. Be selling her story to the tabloids next, mark my words!

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Welcome Make that 4-1

Free Lunch

Scorpio Great lovers, passionate, exciting and dynamic. Oh, and modest too.

I know, it's a cross we have to bear! He's a seriously cute guy, and the dancing whilst odd, was kinda hypnotic!

Bloody marvelous Tiger. Granger's had more ass in this story than I can ever remember in the rest! Not a bad thing by any means, you can't keep all those seamen cooped up like that without letting them stretch their legs! (Sorry couldn't resist the seaman thing) He's got his own ship, and the thought of all those sweaty hard working men underneath him must be kinda exciting for the Commander! It certainly sounds like the perfect job to me, any vacancies?

I've read some of the stuff you've deleted, all I'm saying - what a waste! Don't shoot me down for saying it, I gave you my opinion then and I'm giving it now. Before you delete again, get a second or third opinion, because most of it was really good! You have no idea just how talented you are dude!

Jesse McCartney Aussie Songstress - 2 words I LIKE GUY ON ME