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You and your colleagues do important work. 💜 Thanks for reading! Happy Christmas. 🎄🎅
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💜 Yes, indeed. Thanks for reading. 😊
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I'm not one for writing HEAs but I'd like to think Alan made a new start. To what? Being at peace with himself, making a friend or two, having some connection to his local queer community.
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As other people have commented, regrets can be poisonous. And yet... Alan gets another chance. One he appears determined to grab with both hands.
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Thank you for spending time with my story. Again... 😉😘
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Happy Christmas to you too, @drsawzall 🎄🎄
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As I say in another comment, nothing much happens in this chapter. What it does however, is set up various situations which will drive the plot forward.
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You think? 🤨😄 Yes, they superficially have the same lives but there are as many if not more, differences. Alan thinks about his past through a sexual filter. We have never (as yet) had that from Eric.
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A comment from my email regular which made me roll my eyes.
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The ways of a domineering partner are many and varied. 🤨 Unfortunately.
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More insights courtesy of my email inbox...
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Yes, Rob has the potential of being a guide, but his lived experience as a gay man is already looking pretty different from what Eric might expect it to be. We'll see...
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Yes, and without expecting anything in return. I think Alan finds it particularly difficult to accept that the help is offered without strings or without him having done anything to deserve it.
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Happy Christmas to you, Carlos. 🎄🎄 Here's to a better 2022. 🤞
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@JeffreyL You have my thanks. And Eric's. 😉😄
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Sorry... if you're fairly new to my writing, you may not be aware a lot of my stories are short (2k - 15k). Readers can imagine what happens next.
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The kiss reminded him of chemistry lessons in school, when if the right two elements were put together, they’d explode. Alan leaned forward to peer at the TV screen, drinking in the men's beauty, their ardour and sexiness, and the rightness of it all. Even his faded, ancient sweats momentarily swelled in the crotch. Then a lifetime's worth of regrets, hidden secrets, and loneliness welled up; tears oozed out, one by one, until slow rivulets flowed down the lines in his face. A groping hand
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Alan loathes Christmas. He expects this one to be worse than usual. Then one of his neighbours calls.
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Yes. This isn't the most exciting of chapters but it sets up a number of things which are important later on. Well spotted.
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I wouldn't hold your breath about the phone. 🤨 Eric's going to need more convincing. A lot more.
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The following day, Emily Standish took a break from hanging curtains and washed up instead. Normally the dirty things didn't add up to much, given they had yet to move in, but there were all the containers and a flask from her picnic. Taking them back home the previous day had escaped her mind. A frank appraisal with a removal company concerning their quote had been swiftly followed by the carpet suppliers now reporting her second-choice pattern for the living room out of stock. The two unsatisf
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@Mawgrim I've no idea how I managed to miss your comment. Sorry. 😳 Yes, the general thought was James being tethered. That was too predictable and didn't really fit the general tenor of the story. I remember loving writing this. Horror is good fun. 😱😄
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Yes, and he chides himself for letting go of what he'd practised. He's definitely trying. I think it helped to be in a space he knows well.
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That's an intriguing comment. What out of the conversations here gave that impression, I wonder? Rob's 'chiselling', yes. Eric's rebuilding? Not so sure.
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Yes, he is. And he's starting to learn how necessary a social tool it is to be able to start and continue them.
