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Karl 1960

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  1. Karl 1960

    Chapter 3

    Good story. I agree with Graeme the coach is looking beyond football and getting the boys ready for the real world. Looks like Shawn and Ryder will become friends.
  2. Great story thanks. I loved the way it ended. Looking forward to reading Broken Boy.
  3. Karl 1960

    Snow Battle

    WOW WOW!!! Just what I wanted to happen. A great chapter. Thanks.
  4. I am very glad that Billy's dad pushed Brett to open up and talk about his life and what is going on within himself. Both he and Billy went to far but teenage boys hormones will do that. Good story. I enjoyed W.A.R.book 1 and now this book 2. Thanks.
  5. Karl 1960

    Chapter 13

    This was a good story. I am a little sorry it is over but I did enjoy it. Thanks.
  6. Karl 1960

    Chapter 1

    Awesome story of love between two people, who happen to be young guys. I liked that there wasn't a lot of grief other then the lost of a best friend by Chris because he trusted him with his secret. I agree with Petey just a nice story which I got lost in. Thanks.
  7. Karl 1960

    Chapter 12

    Another great chapter. I agree with the other comments about what a good person Zac is standing up for Kenny after what he did to Zac.
  8. Karl 1960

    Chapter 11

    I agree with skinnydragon (How in the hell did you and Kenny become such good friends) that was the best line in the story. Kenny is a total asshole I just hope he gets his hate thrown back at him. I like Zac's dads attitude. Good chapter.
  9. Karl 1960

    Chapter 8

    I am glad Zac came out to his brother Billy. I know it makes Billy feel better about being gay knowing he has Zac to talk too. I like Marty for the way he talks to Zac about Adrian and taking a chance. Good chapter.
  10. Karl 1960

    Chapter 7

    I guess Zac found out Kenny wasn't the true friend he thought he was. Very sad for Kenny actually. Zac will be fine with the help of Marty and Valeria. I have to wonder how Kenny will react when he finds out Adrian is gay. I hope it throws Kenny's pitching game off. Great story. Thanks.
  11. Karl 1960

    Epilogue

    Thanks for this story. It was a different type of story but I enjoyed it very much..I will look forward to your next endeavor.
  12. Daniel may not be gay but his relationship with Nathan is much more then just a friendship there is love between them. I can see problems if Robbie and Nathan would become boyfriends. Robbie's relationship with Daniel would be in trouble.
  13. Robbie can be and asshole at times saying all those things to Nathan and then taking them back. If I were Nathan I would out him to the whole school. Robbie needs to make up his mind if he wants to pretend he is straight then he needs to stop flirting with the boys.
  14. I agree with skiiny Robbie is headed for problems if he doesn't watch himself. If he wants to present himself as being straight he needs to ignore that Love Letter from the guy. I still think it could be a set up even it says it isn't.
  15. Wow. This was and amazing chapter. I loved the introduction of Bobby. Keep writing.
  16. Good story. I love the idea of 2 gay guys getting together with 2 lesbians and pretending to date. I am sure that because of the time period 1950s they had to hide who they really were.
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