Jeff Burton
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I know a small group of Milwahii raiders that could definitely handle a visit off the Mormons lol I’m going to have to blow the dust off Jonah and Jace when I get done with wizards.
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Wow this thing is ugly. And the only thing that might be uglier is the Galapagos which I can’t talk about yet. it also looks vaguely familiar in a spinning tail kind of way. You’ve taken blasphemy to heights even I didn’t see coming lmao.
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Ben was so wrong about Riley in book 1, Christ 😂 Riley did such a good job in the last 2 chapters at practically disarming Ben it was like watching a street urchin disarm a bomb without precision, just randomly reaching in and pulling shit hoping he doesn’t get blown up in the process until something clicked. i wasn’t sure what I was expecting for this sequel but it sure as hell wasn’t this. ❤️
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Oh too much to process in this chapter. Plus I’m behind in reading it I’ll try to be more eloquent in the next comment. 😂
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At first I thought the best part of this chapter was the negotiation, negotiating the Telly code was 😂 And then we get to the literal heart of the matter. No fucking wonder Ben can be a monster. @Topher Lydon I have to hand it to you mate. I absolutely hated Ben in the first book. I literally tore him apart in every comment I made about him, for you to be able to flip the script on that and make me actually feel sorry for his murderous ass is one hell of not only writing but character development as well. Is this one going to be the love story then? 😂 Can our axe swinging Tin Man find a heart? Because it’s looking like his initial interest in Riley is going to turn into something that could absolutely destroy him if he’s not careful.
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You just confirmed my thoughts on Ben. I saw it immediately when I started to see the humanity. Good job Riley.
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This is totally the image I had in mind when discussing good parenting.
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You weren’t productive today. We discussed this. It’s lashings for you.
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I would just like to say… we kinda did it again on the off topic 😂 same culprits different thread. ❤️
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Oh there’s totally going to be some tips to the world of gayness alright great job on trying to open this Pandora’s box of horror that should have never been touched to begin with. Also just because I can be nasty doesn’t mean I’m going to write nasty. I’m bound by the magic of the Clutched Pearls of Kristalis to hear no filth, see no filth and never create such filth so help me.
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Oh no I think I can out-filth Jason on this one. I can be move beyond filth and go straight to nasty.
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Oh my God. I have no Idea what kind of story you thought that would be but I know exactly the story it'll end up being and the thought is as Krista puts it, "Absolutely filthy."
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It’s an old observation from when I really started to participate here again. Krista is very good at being visceral in her forum replies, depending on the topic and for a while her attention was one I did not wish to attract, because I definitely did not wish to have that same visceral directed at me lol, so I flew under the radar for a while. So despite being rather good forum friends, who jab and counter jab each other all the time, and someone I respect greatly, that original fear is still there.
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See now that is beautiful and it’s something we needed more of a long time ago. So you go girl. I’m in total agreement with Jason though this explains things, and now I know where that little irrational fear I have from you comes from. You’re able to Strike Hard, Strike Home (the old motto of the US Navy’s USS Long Beach) because you’ve got practical experience in the matter. The whole social media thing is probably one of the best things you and your husband did for them, because I’ve seen what it does up close and it’s hard to fix once it’s rooted in there too deep.
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Actually I shouldn’t say things like that just because my back hurts. So I apologize. ❤️
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And both come from a pig. I’m going to start calling you bacon to prove a point lol
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It came from a pig close enough.
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I had a witty reply to this but I decided to just let it go lol
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Oh I could totally go for a pineapple pizza especially if it’s got Canadian bacon on it.
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Don’t add fuel to that fire. 😂
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Don't get me started.
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It's not the same and you know it. 😛
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Except for pancakes apparently in your case.
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Oh no, absolutely not. I would implode like a star going super nova. I have enough chaos with just my own mind, and I've had my hand in dealing with teenagers through the years, I'm simply no longer strong enough. They'll break my will with the first "whatever" eye roll. Nope, you got this! Just give them a copy of "Call of Duty" and some headsets. After a couple of hours in the voice lobby they'll not only learn English but they'll speak it fluently, including the curses and their proper uses.
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lmao that’s totally the parent I would be.
