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Jeff Burton

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  1. Yeah I had a little fun with this one.
  2. You know I haven’t thought of that. Madison just floating in the background of stories progressively getting worse as time goes on.
  3. That’s really what the whole jist of this story is, a series of obvious tropes done in a tasteful way in the manner in which they’re done by averages. i wasn’t trying to reinvent the wheel, just give the wheel a nod and maybe pay some homage to memories of other stories readers may have read in the past, you know not a direct call out but give that vague feeling of familiarity. But I’m also poking a little bit of humor into the tropes as well, just a little over exaggeration. Im glad I was able to pull off something you mentioned, most people would be turned off on something like this, just like you said you would. It’s something I do worry about.
  4. Jeff Burton

    Gifts

    I'm so glad to see Granger headed back on a boat. The sea is where he truly thrives.
  5. Yeah well, we all know what's about to happen because I'm one of those authors. 😂
  6. Yep. At some point after posting chapter 9, I started chapter 10 then totally forgot I did so. So imagine my surprise when I setup to start chapter 10, I already had that file name taken. I read it, went "oh, well this is good," then just finished it lol. Amazing what you forget in the span of a couple of months.
  7. So I bet you’re thinking the night after the dance was all cute texts until someone fell asleep at 3 a.m., followed by a weekend of blurry selfies, soft-filtered memories, and petty arguments over who looked hotter under gym lighting. Yeah. This isn’t that story. What actually happened was I replied to Ryan’s text with a carefully crafted masterpiece: Okay—followed by a smiley face and a heart emoji. I know. Try not to be overwhelmed by my emotional bravery. And then… nothin
  8. I just had McDonald’s does that count? As for ear worm oof. Too many to list, usually I use music to help setup writing so it’s been all over the place with different vibes and emotions as I try to get the workflow moving again.
  9. I am resistant to glitter! But in all honesty I have no clue if I am the most modest, but I'm pretty damn modest. My kink secrets stay secrets.
  10. I'm like the most modest gay guy in existence, I can't even think about "toys" without shying away and blushing. Oh I have plenty of dirty thoughts but they'll never see the light of day lmao.
  11. Jeff Burton

    Unseen Hands

    Simple: he over did it lol. i remember when I got my shoulder crushed I did the same thing. It hurt almost as bad as the original incident.
  12. Now that was just totally unfair. 😂 I have so much to say about this chapter but I honestly don’t know where to begin. Except…. Bunny boo? Seriously? 😂😂
  13. KEEP IN MIND, I was a regular minion when I wrote this. 😇😂
  14. Jeff Burton

    Confusion

    😂❤️
  15. The whole thing is fucked up. None of it should have happened but this is what we get when the likes of man play with things they shouldn’t be playing with.
  16. You absolutely kill me sometimes. 😂 But this was one of my favorite chapters it got long and a little out of hand but was still fun.
  17. Jeff Burton

    A New World

    Sorry but I've already got a full plate for 2026 lmfao.
  18. Jeff Burton

    A New World

    I think that's going to be your theme for the rest of the year and no ones going to be satisfied until there's a story. 😂
  19. Jeff Burton

    Gilded Shadows

    You know me and tropes. I love em. Wouldn't be a Jeff Burton story without least one or two. But I'm glad the seeds of distrust are there, because they keep you thinking.
  20. Jeff Burton

    A New World

    You've said that like 6 times now, I know your binging this in between tables. Your employees are probably looking at you like "tf are you reading now?" lmao
  21. Jeff Burton

    A New World

    Yeah I know I'm commenting after the fact but you guys got buried in notifications way back when. You guys should be able to tell by now I probably borrowed from many sources and I totally did lol. But somehow managed to spin it into something different I guess? @Davide if you liked the strangeness of the contrast your going to love book 2 because there is a lot of that going on.
  22. Jeff Burton

    A New World

    Late reply, I totally borrowed stuff from that.
  23. I have a notification that said you couldn’t wait. 😂
  24. Jeff Burton

    Perturbed

    I actually borrowed a lot from Bourne, the movie Daryl, some of War Games, Dexter. Mr Robot was a huge inspiration for the split mentality part. Im still not giving it away though.
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