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Jeff Burton

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  1. Chapters 1 - 3 Encrypted: Faultline in progress Chapter 4 The Lost Key to Avalon in progress Chapter 11 I’m Gay: A Nifty Story in progress (kinda) Chapter 1- 3 The Ice of Trust in progress The above is what I’ve got going on this weekend. Of course 2 of those are not posted yet for obvious reasons but I’m starting to get out of my funk. Many thanks to @Topher Lydon who continues to listen to me ramble in PM.
  2. Man I’m so behind so I’m just going to go with “what he said” ^ thanks Ben 😂
  3. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 15

    And if they meet are they going to have crusty sheets.
  4. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 15

    That's what you end up with when you let teenagers control the course of destiny in the world. On the surface they're in the crusades, yet two teenagers seem to be in control of whats really going on lol. Makes you wonder how often the tides of history where changed because of a teenager with crusty sheets.
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    Chapter 4

    Well they haven't thrown him in a stew pot so I guess that's good. Language is always a fickle thing, the fact we managed to come up with it to begin with instead of grunts, clicking sounds, and points says something. No idea if that something is good or not but here we are. The problem I always had with languages is context, so easy to understand in english so hard to convey when you didn't know how exactly, but Malik seems to be figuring it out. Still to be totally cut off from everything he knew, I bet he's wishing he had that Big Mac and fries back in chapter 1 lol.
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    Chapter 15

    But wishes he would open a window. Got it.
  7. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 15

    So Wylan's magical ability is, extensive, to the point it can totally shatter the horny princes concentration. That's twice that Wylan has managed to break something Ishan was trying to do. Now I'm wondering which of the two is more powerful, or are they equal?
  8. Now I see why you needed the day off, hell I would have done it too.
  9. Couldn’t have said it better myself.
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    JQ-060109

    Yeah I’m still working on the opening bit. I’m not “in it” yet but getting there.
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    JQ-060109

    Me too shame somebody else can’t write it. 😂😂😂
  12. That’s actually pretty smart. Learning to not micromanage was something I had to do when I ran my own.
  13. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 14

    If only my Morgan character was there with Vaelithor not stuck in that egg, he could have burned down the capital pretty easily. I need to jump back into that one soon. I’m enjoying the magical aspect of this.
  14. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 14

    Yeah because only a prat names a sword. 😂
  15. Yep I’ll be on it probably tonight!
  16. Jeff Burton

    JQ-060109

    Yeah no pressure right? 😂
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    Encrypted

    Y’all are going to be like wtf when I finally do it. I’ll pull some DaVinci code shit 😂
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    Unseen Hands

    Yeah, I would have had a riot on my hands if I had let that slide lol.
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    Abducted

    Yeah she turned into a popular character really quick.
  20. Jeff Burton

    Aberration

    lol foggy Josh. That needs to be a nickname.
  21. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 5

    I’ll keep that in mind if I ever get around to The Waif at Sea.
  22. Jeff Burton

    Chapter 5

    I’m in friggen stitches, totally didn’t expect that. Long live Lord Wylan von Thornback. May the prized goat bay with relevance. 😂😂 My word this can’t be how the world operated back then, a wild rumor and the words of a drunk King.
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