Jeff Burton
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Well they haven't thrown him in a stew pot so I guess that's good. Language is always a fickle thing, the fact we managed to come up with it to begin with instead of grunts, clicking sounds, and points says something. No idea if that something is good or not but here we are. The problem I always had with languages is context, so easy to understand in english so hard to convey when you didn't know how exactly, but Malik seems to be figuring it out. Still to be totally cut off from everything he knew, I bet he's wishing he had that Big Mac and fries back in chapter 1 lol.
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But wishes he would open a window. Got it.
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So Wylan's magical ability is, extensive, to the point it can totally shatter the horny princes concentration. That's twice that Wylan has managed to break something Ishan was trying to do. Now I'm wondering which of the two is more powerful, or are they equal?
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Yeah I’m still working on the opening bit. I’m not “in it” yet but getting there.
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Me too shame somebody else can’t write it. 😂😂😂
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If only my Morgan character was there with Vaelithor not stuck in that egg, he could have burned down the capital pretty easily. I need to jump back into that one soon. I’m enjoying the magical aspect of this.
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Yeah because only a prat names a sword. 😂
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Yeah no pressure right? 😂
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Y’all are going to be like wtf when I finally do it. I’ll pull some DaVinci code shit 😂
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Yeah, I would have had a riot on my hands if I had let that slide lol.
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Yeah she turned into a popular character really quick.
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lol foggy Josh. That needs to be a nickname.
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Aftermath: Rumors, Repercussions, and Really Bad Timing
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Aftermath: Rumors, Repercussions, and Really Bad Timing
Shh I was saving that for later! 😂 -
I’ll keep that in mind if I ever get around to The Waif at Sea.
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I’m in friggen stitches, totally didn’t expect that. Long live Lord Wylan von Thornback. May the prized goat bay with relevance. 😂😂 My word this can’t be how the world operated back then, a wild rumor and the words of a drunk King.
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No prior knowledge is really required. Yeah I borrowed ideas from many sources but like I kinda weaved them into my own kind of crazy,
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Between Shadows and Light
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Between Shadows and Light
Both are accurate lol. This whole story is basically a long ass prologue for the story I really wanted to do. 😂 -
Trust me I haven’t forgotten. This will have an update soon.
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This story is literally the most complicated thing I’ve ever written to the point I didn’t know what the hell was going on and I wrote it.
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Aftermath: Rumors, Repercussions, and Really Bad Timing
Jeff Burton commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Aftermath: Rumors, Repercussions, and Really Bad Timing
Yeah I’ve still got a list of tropes I’m working off of 😂 -
You did a really good job with that though. Great stories are the ones that illicit emotion on readers and yes even the author without people realizing it's happening. But yeah, I've never been indecisive I guess, unless I'm spending money on something then I'll think about it for a while, 😂. Speaking of strict fathers, I really need to finish Just Maybe this year so I can put that one to rest. It was sort of the same situation going on in that one, in fact you did such a great job on writing the pressure Kitt felt, I actually remembered I wrote something similar lol.
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This one will make you cry, probably make you mad, and a little frustrated which to me has all the makings of something worth reading. It's a story of self discovery, finding identity and holding on to what matters through adversity and sheer determination.
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I read chapters 1 through 37 yesterday because I'm crazy like that so it appears I caught this at the right moment. This was a good read although I got a little frustrated with Kitt somewhere in the middle, but then I had to remind myself trauma effects people differently and I got over it.
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You're not the first person that's said that either lol. Yeah everything just went batshit sideways.
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Yeah... about that. You're at a critical part now where everything goes absolutely bat shit sideways.
